MG OS - Condemned - Page 3

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

i think u wer an assasin in ur last birth...killing comes naturally to u...or else dracula...kisi na kisi ko maare bina chain nahi milta tujhe😆

Originally posted by: maanddy

I want to become Vampire and than snatch Edward away from that Bella !

So, Vampire would be good option for me, I might be Vampire in last birth ! 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

maddy...
let me start by chanting ' I HATE U'
u r so mean ...always kisi na kisi ko maarna hi hai tujhe...
without doubt i can say...u r either yamraj or kin of yamraj in ur previous birth...
and yes u made me cry...now i feel lik strangling u and making u realise how it is to read a so well written sad OS...
i wish God give me some divine powers and i am made as talented as u and start writing the saddest love stories in the world and torture u by making u read them daily😆...wow i am such a sadist but not more than u😡

i cant help falling in love with maan...ohhh gosh he is every girl's dream and geet crushed it with her own hands...
i cant digest the fact that geet did this for that bas***d...dev...no matter whether he is saint or a devil...geet cant be mean to maan...
i cudnt stop tears from falling when i read the part that maan had purposely hid that piece of paper from geet so that she doesnt feel hurt and cheated after reading it...thats called selfless love...
and that bas***d , even after death, he is lurking in the lives of maneet in the form of his confession...
wish she had read the paper before she killed maan and was consumed by revenge...wish maan had shown that piece of paper to geet long back...now all i can do is wish...
but this story really moved me...and i am sure aaj meri neend gayi...
maan's lifeless body and his undying love and geet's tortured face and her tortured existence in the mental asylum is goin to haunt me...
i am going to rate this story as 100/100...absolutely flawless...and believe me this story will move even the most stonehearted to tears...
the final moments of maan was so well portrayed that i cud feel goosebumps...and realised why this man is loved by one and all...
maddy so glad to have this OS...so aansu mein tere pichle OS meon nahi baha saki..is OS mein sab kasar poora kar diya...
and noone can survive this beautiful story...thats my bet
keep wriiting mehu...
love u and everything about u...

reva

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

Originally posted by: bansipatel

Oh my god maanddy>>>!!!!
u portrayed it so well...!!!
ok she killed him without knowing the actual reason for why maan had killed dev...
maan dint want to c her shattered if she read that letter...maan loved her irrevocably n just cz of that he decided to stay quiet n not to reveal nything...geet dint know what kind of guy dev is n she loved him irrevocably...so she played a game so that she could take her revenge wid maan for killing dev...!!!
maan accepted it without saying a single word or without complaining...cz he knew if he reveals the actual reason for why he killed dev...geet would shatter completely n he din want her to go thru all this so he preferred to stay quiet n not utter nyhting...just love him yaaarr😳
i felt bad seeing him in that situation wea he was given drugs n beaten up by none other than geet...😡
ok geet was also kept in the darkness as she dint know dev was like that n that is y she ended up killing maan which she felt guilty of doing so...but that too after he died...!!!
she is repenting right now...n in the process of revenge she lost the most precious person MAAN...

I was beautifully written maddy...loved it alooottt...
even tho u end up coming wid sad updates...still we love u for what u write...😳
it was a lovely OS...!!!😉

Originally posted by: maanddy

Gandi to hu chhu...Evu hu nathi keti...Bija badha kay chhe...and After reading my work, for sure ! 🤣

BTW, kai ni have tane time mali gayo ne te mast maja ni comment bi api didhi ! Aur kya chahiye ? 😆

Thanks ! 😳

Originally posted by: maanddy

Surely ! I will try some other time to write some happy shappy OS ! 😆 BTW, I feel bad coz you have been reading my works for long and together at the same time, so I can understand how much you will hate me...coz one after one sad stories and tragic scenes !

I can surely understand your anger, but take proud coz reading my stories is like a brave attempt ! Do you know my four besties left reading my work after " Kiss the Knight..." coz they really could not read more pain in my work, and me " Besharam " could not stop writing DEVDAS things ! 🤣 🤣

So, eventually I lost four loyal readers ! 😆

Anyways, Thank you so much dear for loving my work ! Thanks, it matters a lot to me ! 🤗