MG OS - Condemned - Page 6

Beautiful and painfull...but loved it...you are an awesome writer...

Thnks for the pm.

Originally posted by: shanzy

first of all maddy ur charge for making me cry has been increased 100 folds
secondly I HATE U more than before...😡😡
😡😡maddy doctors itny cruel nae hty yar trust me😭😭😭
itna cruel CA student ho skta hy...to write sucha stuff😭😆
i fall in love wid maan all over again...uff he is a matchless personality...his love is smthing beyond this world...
even when he was dying cz of her, his love was having same passion n purity...i loved that scene...👏
this is probably for the first tym i hated ur geet...urrgghhh idiot 😡😡😡
i mean how ud any woman kill her own husband...wo bhi maan jesa husband...wo bhi dev jesy gadhy k lye😡
this story remind me Richard Matheson's ss...name was probably..."button button"
girl was same like geet...in her stupidity lost her husband n later on spent her life in regret
geet's life ud be worst like hell all cz of her own nonsence...😭
dev is a;ways like a thorn in a rose in maneet life...😡
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wesy i was overwhelmed seeing ur os...was really a best surprise😳
thanx for writing buddy...
love u..🤗

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Maddy u'll laugh at this but I didn't even feel sad reading this os. Sad ending was so predictible that it didn't really have any effect on me. I was waiting for it and there it was... So I guess I've learned to enjoy ur work.
The os was very well written and I luvd the way u wrote it.

How r things with u? Crazy summer nights... R they still on or r u back in college? I've been extremely busy with a whole lot of weddings n usual stuff. All this while I missed u

Originally posted by: princess163

Khurani!!

you better post this at the beginning of each of your heart breaking ones:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=24xqFOIct-Q

I don't know why...why...I just love to see you cry!

I mean, come on! i just read your pm saying you wrote this OS after talking to me and were confused about the title, and after reading it i was like😲, am I such a bad influence??😕

Condemned...

I loved you like cray, but, I was CONDEMNED...

Our life was never hazy, yet it was CONDEMNED...

The love you saw in my eyes was true, all sorrows away from you I CONDEMNED...

You are my life, you are my baby, yet in death my life is CONDEMNED!

The smiles that we shared, the innumerable moments full of care,

The fights in which we got caught up, the beautiful ways in which we made up,

the surprises that we enjoyed, those sweet nothings that we cooed,

The bliss that was our life, you-my love, my wife...

For you life I can lend, for me, you are God sent,

For you death is a small price, for your love I can take any disguise,

Say you hate me, i know you don't

Shout and scream, for I still know you don't!

the love still shows in your eyes,

my pain in your heart still lies,

Your tears, I want to wipe away,

time's slipping, let me kiss them away...

Yes, for the world, me you condemned,

For the world, our love was condemned,

Yet i know, it was your battle that was avenged,

For this, your life you have condemned!

The above lines are in RED and not pink, coz they are smeared in the colour of his BLOOD...smeared in the colour of their LOVE...

I guess, I said it all in what i wrote above...sorry for so much bakwaas! I still love you, for the brilliant one you are...for the brilliant person at heart!

thankyou, for being there...for being my friend! Dunno why i am getting all senti on our friendship here!

anyways, thats it i guess!

Love

Princess

Originally posted by: SakshiGarg

maddy the tragedy queen is back 😃

let me start it wid ... I HATE U...i hate u 4 killing maan mercilessly 😭... n dat too 4 dat idiot devIL😡... i wonder pta nhi kyn tumhe apne har OS mein kisi na kisi ko toh marna hi hota... n then everytym u make us cry😭

Originally posted by: lily_k25

fabulous one madz...just fab..
they say it takes trust n patience to sustain a relationship...not just luv.
maan had complete trust in geet ..even when he was facing death in the hands of his own luv. thats why i luv him soo much.
madz..i luv maan 😳

So happy to see that you wrote an OS, so sad that it had a tragic end. That was a great OS! Thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: maanddy

Aaahh...Swatiji !

Welcome !

I am actually surprised coz I thought you would read this after ages as you are so busy nowadays ! 😆

BTW, Do not blame yourself, you always had a great influence, if you wanna blame someone or something for " Condemned " then, blame it on RAIN ! It was horrible rain, and dark, gloomy atmosphere when I wrote this ! So, blame it on my another MEANING ! 😉

And, BTW, I loved the red line...How can you write like this, I mean, beautifully ? I can never ever write one line for poem...😆 so not my business ! 😆

Let's make a deal, I write OS/SS/FF and you complete it with your meaningful poems ! How about that ? 😉

Love you see you cry...Great song, I like it ! I have learned it when I was in 10th ! 😆 coz Enrique was my crush ! 😳 I like him, now too ! But, now as I am committed to my Man, My Maan, My love, My life...I can just like him as a person ! 😳 Baki to...My heart beats for Maan only ! 😳

Thanks for spending time for me and my work and why are you so senti, huh ? Kuch hua kya ? 😊 Or My OS was that bad that you had to cry for reading it ! 😆

Khurani Loves you...🤗🤗🤗

Gosh ! Maddy u r impossible ... while I was reading the last para I felt a lump in my throat ... my mouth was bitter with pain...and my heart was heavy ... how could u make me feel such strong pain just by writing a os ?? ... U definitely need a jadu ki jhappi :D