MG OS - Condemned - Page 2

Originally posted by: maanddy

OMG OMG OMG !

I was dying to read this " I HATE YOU MADDY "

If you were here in front of me, you would be ROFLing ! Coz, My face is like this 😃 now ! I am all smiling like sheep ! 😆

Whatever reva, for sad or good or just anything, I AM LOVING THIS, you really don't have any idea how much I was missing updating anfd I said this to swati, too ! I told her on my " Purana " SCL thread that she is missing comments and " I HATE YOU, MADDY " and I said, I am just missing a part of myself !

You won't believe me when I will say this, I did this OS in just 15 minutes, I did not even checked how it was, I wrote and posted ! And, now I will read it again and correct any mistakes, if found !

And, I told you once that just one bad rainy day and I will write something, yesterday was that day, it was all dark and gloomy in the middle of noon, and I started it, in RAIN !

Love you Reva...I know you love to hate me, but FOR NOW, I can only love you ! 😳

I was doubtful for this one that is why I did not say a word and just posted it, I thought let people curse me...😆 And, I was right ! I saw my favorite line, " I HATE YOU, MADDY "

You guys give me award for writing Most Tragic Stories ! 🤣

But there is a secret you know, I just LOVE TO KILL MY MAAN...🤣 I feel good when I kill My Maan...I know you have already admitted the fact that I am nut case but still...I love to kill Maan...

But given the fact that technically my last FF and OS had happy ending, so this one is exempted, Okay ? 😆

Aaahh...I love you when you say, " I hate you " !!! Have you listened that song from Delhi Belly, You should dedicate this song to me ,

" I love you like I hate you...I hate you like I love you..." 🤣

God !

I feel good after blabbering this much !

Thanks Reva Jaan...Love you ! 🤗

sach much tera screw dheela ho gaya hai...
u kno what i just recommended this OS to my friend...
i think u r going to get thunderous response for this OS...its really awesome...
i kno how u like to bump off maan...pata nahi kya bigada usne tera...jo yeh sab jhel raha hai😆

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Res!

*EDITED*

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Okay sorry for those up there ^^...I'm still recovering from all that powerful writing! Holy Shit Meha! That was bloody fabulous!

The way you portrayed Geet as a femme fatale was...amazing! I loved her characterization! In one short OS you managed to capture her perfectly. The anger, the desire of revenge and amongst all that darkness the love she felt for him [even though she never admits it] it was all ethereal, really :)

And then Maan! What can I say about this guy? He's amazing :) Honestly, he is! I don't watch Geet but I do read yours and Reya's work on Maaneet and I love his character! The way he loves her selflessly is beautiful :) I loved how he never felt the sense of betrayal, throughout the ordeal he had to face. It was like he KNEW she loved him and she was kidding herself if she thought otherwise. And even in the face of death he trusted her, implicitly. The way he understood her was...out of this world! Even after she told him she didn't love him and that it was all to avenge her ex-husband's death, he didn't flinch. Not one little bit. And the way you kept reiterating the fact that the love for Geet in his eyes, never dimmed, was nothing short of beautiful :)

And then love! I loved how you've incorporated it in the OS! One one side, there's Maan's love for Geet, true, pure and eternal, so much so that he does not feel betrayed, because somewhere in his heart he knew it too. She loved him, for real.

On the other hand we have Geet. A doctor-turned-femme fatale! Although she killed Maan, there is love on her side too. And I don't mean the love for Maan, here. That is obviously there, though she remains in denial till the very end. I mean, her love for Dev. Two very different kinds of love, I must admit! Here is her love for Maan, which is more like the sunchine, the rainbow and everything happy. Something that is bright, vital. And also something that she refuses to accept because she fears that she will lose her focus from revenge.

And then there is her love for Dev! It's a dark love. Something that consumed her, made her go crazy over it. Something because of which she threw everything else into oblivion. Something that ate her up on the inside, changed her mannerisms, her thinking and so blinded she was by it, she ended up killing the one man who truly loved her!

Here, I come back to Geet! I cannot stop gushing about her, really! I've said it once and I'll say it again, her characterization was amazing. The way she was so strong yet so vulnerable to Maan's charisma was beautifully written :) She's a determined woman though. She remembered so much about her life with Maan, yet she did what she came to do. Killed him. Only to discover that the person for whom she killed Maan, was never truly hers. I honestly felt bad for her then! Not only did she kill Maan but she also could not kill herself, thus making her life a punishment, if not worse. Truly, she was excellently portrayed. And although she wronged Maan, she was wronged too and that brought in an element of complexity to her character, that I admire you for being able to show it so well :)

All in all, a beautiful piece of writing :) And although Maaneet were not "together" in the conventional sense, this shall remain with me for a long time <3

*Phew* that was uber-long! Sorry if I bored you, I couldn't help but give a detailed analysis sort of thing for this one 😆

Keep writing :) <3

xoxo

Aanya

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

sach much tera screw dheela ho gaya hai...
u kno what i just recommended this OS to my friend...
i think u r going to get thunderous response for this OS...its really awesome...
i kno how u like to bump off maan...pata nahi kya bigada usne tera...jo yeh sab jhel raha hai😆

awesome ... but sad ...

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

u love writing sad stories...dont u...😡

n making us cry...😭😭

from morning i am reading ur OS...n crying...n here once again u made me...😭😭

that was my sad side...😆..n angry side...😆...now coming to the OS...

awesome...👏

beautifully written...⭐️

he truly loved her...even she loved him...but she did not realize it...n trying to give excuse,,...revenge...

he did not want dev's wife to know the truth...so he hid it...lest he knew...who she was...n how she would come in his life...

she lost her life...her love...destroyed by her own hands...

best lines --

1-- You lie well...Love the way you lie,'

2-- Life won, she was defeated.

if possible...plz feel free to write a happy OS...we would..personally i would love to laugh...😃..or even smile...😊..or even smile with tears in my eyes...

thnx for the PM...

Originally posted by: maanddy

OMG !

Aanya, Tari comment joi ne hu to khush thai gayi ! For the first time, you left a long one, like an analysis ! Not even in my SCL ( So called Happy Ending FF ! 🤣 )

Honestly, what I was thinking when I wrote this, you said it ! In my mind, it was same you mentioned ! Two sides of Love...You see sometimes, girl fall for bad guy too ! And that is also Love...A Dark Side of Love...I just can't believe you all liked it...I mean hated me but liked my work ! Isn't it wonderful ? 😉

Te mara mate kasu j baki nathi rakhyu ? Hu shu bolu ave ? 😉 Hu to khub khush chhu tari comment vachi ne ! Maza padi gayi mane to...😆

BTW, Thank you so much dear ! 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: maanddy

Oh really ? Thanks ! Now, I am expecting more " I hate you, Maddy " 😆

BTW, Maan ne mera bigada kuch nahi, bas aake beth gaya he, in corner of my heart ! 😳 Jata hi nahi...Mar mar ke thak gayi...🤣

But, don't worry, next time I will kill some other not Maan ! 🤣

i think u wer an assasin in ur last birth...killing comes naturally to u...or else dracula...kisi na kisi ko maare bina chain nahi milta tujhe😆

sad OS...but as usual loved it...!!
truly awesome

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Haha mane taro reply joi ne khush thayi 😆 Haa mei promise karyutu ke hu SCL par moti comment aapis pan pachi maari school + FIITJEE ne badhu chalu thayi gayu etle time na madyo 😆 Pan aaje time hato etle bau moti comment aapi 😆

We'd never hate your work Meha! Gandi che? 🤣

Anytime 🤗

xoxo

Aanya