Bittersweet Symphony: Ch2, Pg4-Complete

Krishna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Loved it. Too many writers are always trying to avoid problems in their stories, but you expressed their emotions beautifully. Thanks for the PM!

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Shaheda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

How come I was deprived from this one? 😲 Sookie...I stumble upon yet again...on ur land accidentally...

I'll go read now...

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AliceT

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Sookie that's so true, even I wondered at Geet's level of trust and her patience when she never questioned Maan's final decision. On the other side, this is also true that for a husband like Maan any wife can sacrifice her everything, as Geet had said in day before yesterday's episode.

I was forced to question the sanity of the CV's, since when can an established person like MSK go unrecognized by the like of Bhatia's and Singhania's. On one side they had earlier shown us that every news regarding the Khurana's was being flashed on TV channels and now the people from the corporate world didn't even recognize him...lol. They had shown earlier such a cliched track...Maan being suddenly robbed off everything (as if the GREAT MSK had kept no security or safety amount for his family in times of need...even a layman keeps some amount in case bad times befall his family), Pammi's lawyer came to know after a week that Geet is the shareholder of the company... 😆 (damn what kind of a sleeping, lazy lawyer he is?), Maan revealing his entire plan to Pammi so that she can immediately call her goons and take an action against him ( though I really pity Maan...this should have never happened to him...he's such a nice kind-hearted person).

Your take on such a scenario is absolutely realistic!! It's good to see that Maan got a job in a firm, at the same time he's still his old self by realizing his fault and trying to amend the situation.

They found a Sweet solution to the Bitter situation life had thrown at them.

Thanks Sookie, for giving us such a wonderful piece of work...I would like to live with this piece in my mind rather than the CV's take on Maan's downfall and his doomed situation.

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AliceT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Glad that you are back dear. 🤗 Hope to see more and more of your writings in future. 😍

Also, please add more chapters to your work Chicken Soup for the Cynical Soul ... would love to see it being continued and growing day by day (too much to demand), hmmm or say week by week (now it's fine :)

Thank-you dear for the PM. 😊

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Sookie

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: AliceT
Sookie that's so true, even I wondered at Geet's level of trust and her patience when she never questioned Maan's final decision. On the other side, this is also true that for a husband like Maan any wife can sacrifice her everything, as Geet had said in day before yesterday's episode.

I was forced to question the sanity of the CV's, since when can an established person like MSK go unrecognized by the like of Bhatia's and Singhania's. On one side they had earlier shown us that every news regarding the Khurana's was being flashed on TV channels and now the people from the corporate world didn't even recognize him...lol. They had shown earlier such a cliched track...Maan being suddenly robbed off everything (as if the GREAT MSK had kept no security or safety amount for his family in times of need...even a layman keeps some amount in case bad times befall his family), Pammi's lawyer came to know after a week that Geet is the shareholder of the company... 😆 (damn what kind of a sleeping, lazy lawyer he is?), Maan revealing his entire plan to Pammi so that she can immediately call her goons and take an action against him ( though I really pity Maan...this should have never happened to him...he's such a nice kind-hearted person).

Your take on such a scenario is absolutely realistic!! It's good to see that Maan got a job in a firm, at the same time he's still his old self by realizing his fault and trying to amend the situation.

They found a Sweet solution to the Bitter situation life had thrown at them.

Thanks Sookie, for giving us such a wonderful piece of work...I would like to live with this piece in my mind rather than the CV's take on Maan's downfall and his doomed situation.

Alice, I haven't actually watched Geet in almost an year now. I read a news article here on IF saying that they are going to lose money or something. So the entire thought process for this story revolves around that news item. So I really don't know whats happening in the show but I thought what I would like to watch (but that's never gonna happen) in it anyway.

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Shaheda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Life is not always about live happily ever after. When 2 body live under one roof where the relation is of Husband and Wife, there are lots then that. Not every sec is the same nor every morning is. Bumping into each other knocking off the balance, something always be around. Such is call the realistic world. Its sad that every maturity comes after harsh encounter, as they say, "Been there done that and learned the hard way."

Well that's the principle of life. The crises always plays the big role for any relation to shake and then get stronger or sometimes fall apart.

I'll not say it's outstanding as we know it is...I would say...this is what I call life. Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, this life. Trying to make ends meet.

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

nice one dear...
hard times will pass soon...
but being strong and there for each other is very important in every relationship...

PS am so mad at u for not pming me on any of ur updates...

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Sookie

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: spvd
nice one dear...
hard times will pass soon...
but being strong and there for each other is very important in every relationship...

PS am so mad at u for not pming me on any of ur updates...

Sorry Deepa. I had mentioned this earlier too that I deleted my entire PM list as it was too long and many didn't read my stuff anymore. My apologies for that. I will start PMing you again as I have just stared a new FF.

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Sarita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Was a really nice read! But do ppl really talk so patiently in real time and in real relationships? Loved d intense journey..

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AliceT

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Alice, I haven't actually watched Geet in almost an year now. I read a news article here on IF saying that they are going to lose money or something. So the entire thought process for this story revolves around that news item. So I really don't know whats happening in the show but I thought what I would like to watch (but that's never gonna happen) in it anyway.

That's great Sookie, for me it's difficult to resist watching this jodi, though I skipped a few episodes in-between but, not watching it at all is a bit difficult for me.😆

That's true that we will not get to see on TV what you have written ( because this requires the brain to think out-of-the-box 😉), but by writing it so beautifully you made us see your point of view in our mind...it was as if each scene happening in front of our eyes.

Since you had stopped watching Geet this helped you to be more open to the different solutions to the problem in Maaneet's life. Serials on TV present very boring, cliche solutions to the problems of life (exceptions are always there! ).

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