I CAN NOT BELIEVE you used emotional blackmail. I'm very ticked off at you right now little lady. Here:
- Wow, that is quite the description for the room she's sitting in to write her exam lol.
- I REALLY REALLY like how you gave us some sample questions. Like I've said a million times, it makes it all the more realistic.
- I also like how you basically walked through step by step about what was going on through Geet's brain, while she was fiddling around during the exam and while her phone was vibrating.
- Yup, I'd definitely be one of the few that were still writing. I can't believe she had only 2 more questions left!
- Yeah, if someone interrupted my exam...when I worked so hard for it..I'd be yelling on the phone too. You let it all out Geet. Although, shes the one who took the decision to leave in the first place. Whatever, over Anne, I'm still on her side.
- I was wondering why you kept on italisizing him...it makes alot more sense now.
- It kind of drives me insane yet I like how you made everything sound like the him was Maan. With the whole relationship thing and all. The only clue was the italics. Clues that I always seem to miss.
- velvetly smooth voice...
- I hate that promises line...it just makes me so sad.
- Haha Arjun's her boyfriend. The rebel and bad guy.
- I can understand Maan but at the same time I really can't. Like a big project is amazing and opportunity of a lifetime but if you know your sister is irresponsible (if he does), how could he leave his SON with her? Hello! Family friend..other family. Whatever it takes but you don't leave a child was just anyone. I can completely understand Geet's anger. Her anger almost gives me the chills though. I can see her tear streaked face and the fire radiating in her eyes. Maan's pleading look but at the same time he doesn't understand the weight of the situation at all! He's just worried about...his Geet. Losing his Geet...wow. I just made a full circle. Still staying true to the characters are we...
- That poor, poor child. Just a small little incident, an act of carelessness took his breath away. It wasnt even his fault! I mean, what had he seen in the world yet? And he had the most caring mom. I'm not going to say dad based on everything you've written in the OS so far.
- You showed Geet 10 months later but I just took a moment to imagine Maan. You know what, he was dependent but thats only because he..um...how on earth do I put this? What I'm trying to say is that he can live without her support. Like he's not going to be trapped inside the house crying, not being able to move on with his life. He's probably in a business meeting right now ignorant to the fact that today would have been his son's 4th birthday. On the other side of things, if he did remember. He would be at the grave too. Wouldnt he?
- I don't think it would have been as effective at all if that him turned out to be Maan so I'm glad you chose the son. If it was Maan, it would probably be some crying frenzy and he would have gotten better anyway so her walking out would have been a waste. That phone called changed her life though huh? DRASTICALLY changed her life. At least she had the courage to move on with her life and achieve her goals. It's almost heartbreaking. She got everything she wanted and got left with nothing at all.
- I've talked waaayy too much. Actually, I was just coming from chem homework which involved thorough explanation and research hence the...yeah. Did my comment pass? Did Jaz's heart stay intact or do I have to come glue it together? Either way, at least it survived...which is more than I can say for Geet's...😭
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