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Posted: 14 years ago
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i am in a shock. spellbound,nothing to say😭
Edited by acjanfeb1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jnawaz

^^ really...you see Geet at fault? how so? i really want to know...cuz that was not my intention at all...for me...this story...it was Maan...that was the point...but each has their view...i'd love to hear yours... =)

JAZ



Hey Jaz,
I feel for Geet her priority must have been her kid... At first place she should not have left her kid and gone... As u already expressed their were differences between Maaneet even before this incident happened... She should have first tried to mend her relations first...
I do have some guys who are good friends of mine... Observing their thoughts, I have understood for men they believe in expressing their love by providing all luxuries and facilities to their family... Maan had been doing the same... Geet knew the project was important...
Maan's fault is there, I dont disagree... Bt then its difficult time for him as well as he has too lost his son... But leaving Maan and moving away from him is no solution and no punishment...
I am sure their son would hate it too...
This is my point of view...
Let me know what u think abt it...
Waiting for ur response...
Love
Sakshi

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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautifully written!👏
i was crying by the end of it😭~
thnx 4 the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ sakshi: i see what you're saying...when i was writing it...i tried to focus on the fact that it had taken years for geet to get where she was, career wise, because she's put her career on hold for maan on various occasions...the exam she went for was only a few days time...in that time she left her son with his father...as a father it was his responsibility to keep the child safe...that responsibility should not always fall on the mothers shoulder...and the thing is...Geet didnt know the call for the London project came...cuz that happened after she left...thats why she told Maan to call her because she'd have come back so he could go and she'd have the child...she said she'd give up her career if Maan had just told her he couldnt watch the child...the fact that their relationship is strained is besides the point...they still lived in the same house as husband and wife...they still shared responsibility for the child...but geet more so than maan...the "figure" in the flashback was Maan...he promised her to look after him (their son)...and he didnt...when he knew that Anne was not capable of watching the child (*hint* the drowning incident geet mentioned) ...he should have called her...i even put in that Maan didnt want the baby when he found out geet was pregnant...as i was writing...Maan was the bad guy...(im horrible i know...lol)...but ya...so that was how i saw it...and how i wanted to portray it...but i totally appreciate your views 😃

JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb os really awesome
loved it !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jnawaz

@ sakshi: i see what you're saying...when i was writing it...i tried to focus on the fact that it had taken years for geet to get where she was, career wise, because she's put her career on hold for maan on various occasions...the exam she went for was only a few days time...in that time she left her son with his father...as a father it was his responsibility to keep the child safe...that responsibility should not always fall on the mothers shoulder...and the thing is...Geet didnt know the call for the London project came...cuz that happened after she left...thats why she told Maan to call her because she'd have come back so he could go and she'd have the child...she said she'd give up her career if Maan had just told her he couldnt watch the child...the fact that their relationship is strained is besides the point...they still lived in the same house as husband and wife...they still shared responsibility for the child...but geet more so than maan...the "figure" in the flashback was Maan...he promised her to look after him (their son)...and he didnt...when he knew that Anne was not capable of watching the child (*hint* the drowning incident geet mentioned) ...he should have called her...i even put in that Maan didnt want the baby when he found out geet was pregnant...as i was writing...Maan was the bad guy...(im horrible i know...lol)...but ya...so that was how i saw it...and how i wanted to portray it...but i totally appreciate your views 😃

JAZ




I too understand ur POV better now...
May be I can never imagine Maan as a bad guy and hence trying to prove him innocent or making Geet equally at fault...
I am trying to comprehend ur perception to the entire thing now...
But do u actually think leaving behind Maan was the solution to the problem???
I am still a 22 year old girl so probably cant imagine the intensity of pain Geet went through which made her take that action...
As far as ur expression for the fact that Maan didnt want the baby earlier, Geet must have convinced him to let her have the kid, so I feel the thing has no relevance in the present scenario... Every father loves his kids even if he didnt want them the time he came know they would be born...
But now that I am trying to consider Maan as a bad guy, my POV is not that strong... LOL..
But loved to understand ur perception of the whole thing. and appreciate ur views..
Love
Sakshi

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Posted: 14 years ago
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^^ What do you mean leaving maan behind? she didnt leave Maan...like for good...she simply left to take her exam...since it was away from home...she had to travel...and trusted her son with his father...and i know what you mean by not being able to see maan as negative...i almost made geet married to someone else so it would be easier to hate him...but ha ha...we cant see geet married to anyone else...lose lose situation...ha ha😆

JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gosh!!!!!!!U managed to almost make me cry...but it was such a touching and heartfelt tale.Each line seems to cry out to u to feel the pain of the mother who lost her world,her son
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Posted: 14 years ago
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painful but awesome os. u r an amazing writer penning down the pain n emotions so well,
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
OMG so emotional
I cant a say anything... good work though..

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