~Tantalizing Beauty Marks~ OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: itzangell

HAWT......... is my first expression... scintillating passion .😳😳😳😳😳.. oodles of love for the nite.... makes ur OS ... awesome......... way to go ... keep up the good work....... 👏👏👏
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Originally posted by: Amiiish

Indeed you deserve phulon ki barsaat dear, this was awesome, so beautifully described, I had a clear picture in ma mind😳

And Im not a writer so didnt see the faults, but there is always scope for betterments I believe, but cant point out😆

The attempt was great, keep it up dear;)

Originally posted by: rickks

Wow that was one excellent, sensuous piece of writing.....Kudos to you, for your first Brilliantly written OS.....👏 🤗

Thanks for the PM yaar....aage se bhi do PM me 😊


Maaneet are tagged the Most Passionate onscreen couple on Screen yet, what we have now is nothing less than a 7th grade Romance...I know on Indian TV...Its impossible to showcase things to this level, but yet there is no harm in the initial buildup.....i wonder why that too is impossible for them to show...when there have been innumerable such moments in the past mainly before their marriage....and now when after Marriage the scenario is supposed to change, wonder why the CV's are making MAANEET look like Kids😡

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

wow..........i am blushing profusely😳😳😳😳😳😳
u deserve a phoolon ki barsaat.........
simply awesome

Originally posted by: kunataanya

wow!!! i can't believe this is ur first OS... it's really really good... 👏 and super hot!! ☺️

Originally posted by: rahmona_pakswe

Jag tackar sa mycket! 😳

Thanks for reading and commenting my OS! 🤗

Yes there's always room for improvement I believe that too.