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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -Premeena-
lovely OS :D

kudos to you wonderfully written :D

Thank you! 🤗 Also thanks for commenting.

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-MaanEetLover-

@-MaanEetLover-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

1st I m so sorry for commenting so late .. Just wanted to enjoy each moment you know 😳

OMFGGGG !! Honestly I never read FF or OS or anything BUT this is like 1st OS i read & I m so glad I did ..

OMGGG !! Hawt Hawt , My Lappy in on fire right now 😆☺️☺️

If you havent wrote tis then I would never have known how FAB writer you are..

Now I want you to write Daily so I get goose bump each day ☺️

Just Beautifully Written .. LOVED IT SOO MUCH ☺️

Hmm, Let me think what should I give ?!! Hmm ..

DEFINATELY Phoolon ki Barsaat 👍🏼

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crazedfan19

@crazedfan19

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

BRILLIANT!! You are an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!! I could visualize everything!! phool aur chocolates ki barsaat!!!!!!!! 😛 please write more!!!!!!!!

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liv2laugh

@liv2laugh

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Mona 🤗

Babe where were you hiding all this talent? 😡

This is simply awesome. I loved this so much ❤️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Now that you have discovered this amazing talent 👏 👏 👏 write another one 😆 😆 😆

Jhan 🤗

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

@pooja. Better late then never dear!

I'm honoured that the first OS you've ever read was written by me. That means a lot. Thank you! 🤗 To be honest I didn't know if I was a good writer or not. I knew I could write short poems but a story? No, I had no idea but by the response I've been given from everyone is indicating that I can write and it's an amazing feeling! So thanks for reading and commenting my OS!

@crazedfan19. Aww you are the first one who has given me chocolate ki barsaat. I love it because I loooove chocolate! 😆 Thank you! 🤗 And thanks for reading and for making a comment too.

@jhan. Darling! 🤗 You are not the only one. So many have already asked where I've been hiding. 😆 To tell you the truth I have no idea. First of all I didn't know if I could write or not. I mostly wrote this as a challenge but never in a million years did I excpect this outcome. I'm still floored by everyones reaction. 😳 Thanks again for reading and making a comment. It means a lot coming from you because I love what you write.

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salma

@starchase

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

monaaaa how did i miss this !!! this was fabbbbb :))) really well written do write more x

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: salma434
monaaaa how did i miss this !!! this was fabbbbb :))) really well written do write more x

Yeah Salma! How did you miss this?! Shame on you! 😡 😆

No seriously thank you for reading it! 🤗

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lody

@lody

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Ufffff uffffff are u shore this is ur 1st OS buz it's sooo amizing that u take my breath away ufffff am blushing her love it breathtaking

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

rahmon..... omg.. i never knew.. u r such a great wordsmith 👏

i mite be the last person on planet earth reading it.. sorry for the enormous delay... but trust me i luvd it fullto..!! U should write more.. n what to say of the Maneet passionate moment.. m blushing ☺️

great work...

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RiMa_972

@RiMa_972

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Mona.......sorry for the late comment, but didnt have time to do so when i first read it! ohhhhhh boy!! Was that HOT or what!! Mona..you need to keep writing and writing.....Didnt we tell you? Tumhare andar ke writer ko jagao...and there will be no stopping you! You are Tooo Tooooo toooooooooo good! Love ya!

At least aise toh Maaneet SR imagine karne ko mila.....haayee....😳😳..absolutely too hot to handle!!

Write one more!

Edited by riza792 - 14 years ago

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