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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: prema_ks
Mona! What should I write? I am shocked.
Why didn't you try before? I was like this

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Simply sensual and awesome. now more

it's punishment time for you. we want daily

one OS from you.

Seriously you are amazing 👏👏👏

Prema darling, thank you so much for liking my OS! 😳

Thanks for reading and commenting too! 🤗

Why didn't I write before? Maybe I wasn't ready back then....but I am now. Beside I needed a push in the right direction...you and all my fellows in Wine Club helped me a lot in that.

So you are going to punish me....hmm...what kind of punishment do you have on your mind? 😉 😆

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: mehraan
MONA MONA.... WHERE WERE U yaar since so mny days???😃 from nowonwards im goin 2 quench my so called thirst n hunger 4 MANEET by reading ur OS'S n im goin 2 pester u a lot...so dnt mind😆😆😆....
totally xrated😳 u kno wat i liked mre abt ur writing is it was simple 2 understand/ like an open book...... most of the time in mny sensual OS n FFS tat i go through...smetimes its hard 2 understnd the situations n also complicated words ...mny times i keep on wondering whtr thy had it or not😆😆😆or wats goin on now...stuck , confused n clueless!!!

bt i totally enjoyed reading urs n u hve an xcellent way of writing especially wid words... loved the whole idea on beauty marks...never read or heard anywhere..very original!

i was literally clutching the table when they bodies were rubbing n feeling...i cud feel smethng inside me doin somersault😆😆😆😆the rubbing part is so erotic...well dne keep it up...

definately phoolon ki barsaat....👏

wen is the nxt OS cmng up??☺️

Mehr darling, thanks for reading and commenting my OS! 🤗

The idea of writing an OS on beauty marks have been haunting me for MONTHS. Ever since I noticed that DD had quiet a lot of them I've been thinking of how to use them in a story. No one else has written anything remotely close to it(not that I know of 😕) nor will the CV's ever get the idea to use them in a Maaneet scene(duffers) so I thought I should give it a shot.

Thanks for liking my writing style. I wanted people to be able to visualize what I wrote. If I have succeeded in that then I'm the happiest person on earth.

Please don't put any pressure on me.😆 It's not easy to write. My respect for all ther OS- and FF writers out there have increased immensly. The next OS will come when it comes. Beside ever heard of 'sabar ka phal meetha hota hain'?😉 😆

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: swetha10
wow tht was hot n sensational.. luved it..

Thanks for reading and commenting! 😳 I appreciate it very much. 🤗

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

that was sooooooooooooooo hot and romantic mona🤣🤣. very good job 👍🏼 it also gave me goose bumps. omg i don't know what to say but it is very good and keep doing it my sherni

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sanjh1234
yaar so hot and dreamy you wrote wonderfully
as me seeing all in front of my eyes 😳

kaash we cud see some thing like this on screen omg if only ghsp had no been in india we sure gonna see our dream coming true😭

Thanks for reading my OS Sanjh!

Also thanks for commenting. It means a lot to me. 🤗

We will be old and grey(actually I'm already half-way there🤣) before we can see something like that on Indian TV. 😔

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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: johnangad
phulon ki barsaat :)

😳

Thanks for reading and commenting! 🤗

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mgdg_2010

@mgdg_2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

mona congo yaar...see the reaction....😳

that is hot...☺️

i lov it.....👏

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Absoluv

@Absoluv

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Haiiii Mona darling...WONDERFUL & AWESOME job for the FIRST OS....👏 👏 👏....I was just going like ☺️ ☺️ as I was reading it.....Uffffffff.....kaaaaashhhhh something like this cud b shown on tv BUT khair chaddo, jab tak tum jaise OS writers hai toh humein chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.😉...sho mein na sahi, tumhare OS mein hi khush ho jaat hai.....😳

Seriously, WONDERFUL writing & Nicely Done.....👏