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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

This was just so Awww...


I guess the moment he said that no one else had rights on her- That cat was out of the bag I know😆 ...but it was still so much fun reading right through the end...and though you say it was looong...I still didnt want it to get over...Sigh!it took me forever to complete it as i did not want to post it in parts😆

Loved it! glad u liked it . . .


btw I hope you do post a part 2- His side of the story...would be lovely to revisit their meeting and drive again- from his Point of view...how did he handle and what did he think of chatterbox Geet!! um . . . not really sure about part 2 . . . I cannot promise but i'll try . . .

btw btw Jammu Railway station has no place to walk around not if you dont want to be run over by a minibus..but the ATM location was bang on..LOL! i have never been there so no idea about the RS . . . Abt ATM well that was a lucky guess😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rohini20

God DAMN... u killed me with ur OS...me dead officially...🤢..i knew it was maan...but the last parts of their proximity...really i was flushed...☺️..Luved the os..best one...!!

rohini

Glad u liked it . . . Thanks

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

AMAZING! In the middle of the third part, I finally figured out that Maan was the guy. lol That was amazing! It made my night. Now I'm off the dream[sleep] lol Thank you so much for this beautiful OS. I thoroghly enjoyed it!

Well he did give it away when he said who else would have a right😆 . . . but as usual Geet is Geet . . . she takes time for getting things into her system . . .😆 glad u liked it . . .😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Parisa-

Awww i loved this 😆

It was extremely Cute 😆...it happens quite alot of time when you tell a stranger your secrets thinking is mai kya jaa tahi you are not going to meet him agin 😆 and then ta-da you meet him/her again 🤣

happened alot of time with me so i can understand Geet's situation 😆


Enjoyed reading it...and this one deserves a sequel a HUGE ONE 😆

now meeting that stranger again would be really embarrassing and i hope it never happens with me😆 Sequel . . . well not sure but i'll try . . . Oh wait, i'll try but only after wrapping up at least one ongoing FF
Glad u liked it😳

Originally posted by: zaara2212

loved it...😛

so there is a his story too😉

Um not sure about his side of the story . . .😆 nothing planned as of yet😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ... beautiful ...

thnx 4 d pm ...
continue soon ...

Glad u liked it . . .

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hey dear...thanks 4 da amazing, superb n mindblowing OS! Loved the update! U rock! Manmeet monets were magical n beuatiful! Update soon n thanks 4 da pm. Wonderfully written

Thanks . . . Glad u liked it . . .
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nazsij

it was an awesome one...loved it...geet ki tho haalath hi kharaab hogayi...ufff ohhh...heheheheheheee

Glad u liked it . . . Poor her kuch bhi kahin bhi boldeti hai, bhughatna to paregahi😆

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Muskaan, lovely OS. I do hope u continue... his side of the story as well as a proper conclusion. She just told him that he stands a chance... please conclude it with their marriage 😃

Thanks . . .😳 I'll try to continue but no promises . . .😃 glad u liked it . . .😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

awesome...very awesome dear

Thanks . . .😃

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Beautiful Os
Thanks 4 The PM

Thank you😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jnawaz

so all OS's in one thread...good idea...👏


yaar...subha subha yeh kya dikha diya...chat!? omg...you have no idea how badly im craving some!! bohot bhook lagi hai..havent had breakfast...starving and you mention chat!? tauba!! aab main chat kahaan se laoon? 😭. AWWW, wahan chat nahin milta . . . here i have golgapas every time i go out . . . how i love spice😆 ..lmfao...PMS!! 😲...now thats a first...🤣...praise the Lord im no where near that at the moment!! 😛. Lets not get there😆 ..lmfao at geets comment to her mother..."im not a bird..main ud nahin sakti"...ha ha 😆.. .a smart comment like that to my mother would have gotten me smacked for sure!! 😳. same here my mom would have given me a good one then and there😆 ..OMG!! 😲...MSK...army...a man in uniform...*jaz melts* 😳...i cant resist a man in uniform.tell me who can😉..and i cant resist MSK...combine the two...and im DEAD!! i wrote this from swarglok 😉...ok ok...Geet is traveling by train...why in heavens name is she wearing stilettos? i wore them while travelling by bus and well i was like 4 when i travelled by bus for the first time and then never again till when I was 17, teen mahine pehle ki baat hai . . . so i had no idea what i was getting into n then when i got back home don't ask me what was the condition of my feet, mom was laughing looking at my facial expressions, she was like this is what happens when u don't listen to ur momCry poor me, actually i was like baith ke jaana hai ki phark painda hai kuch bhi pehnu, well turned out bohot pharak parta hai, this is what happens when u always use private transport ever since childhood...im one for high heels...God and my mother knows i have more than what i need...(when we moved...a full car trip was made with just my shoes 😆) ...but during travel...really!? no way!! i prefer my flip-flops thank you very much 😛...lol...kissi ladke ke ghod mein bait gayi thi geet 🤣 i say on my friend (GIRL) during a class n don't ask me what happened later, the teacher was trying to control her laughter n i was flushing ...oh lord...that had to be one hell of a scene...vaise...was the guy cute? 😉...good to see that Maan and i are on the same wavelength in terms of geet's choice for shoes during travel 😛...


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...omg...you too!! lmfao!! thats why my updates are in soo many parts...the limits are horrible!! Ouch...seriously i posted it n it was Blah blah msg, then again i posted it in two halved, phir se error😡 finally three halves worked😆 now i will always check the limit before posting😆


tauba...what is up with Maan...Geet ke peche kyun pada hai..v.aise...let me do some math here...geet is in a rush to get home...she also said that the final decision was hers...that adds up to shaadi...now...by theory of Maneet love...Maan must be THAT guy u r ESSSMART😆...therefore...end result is...MANEET! am i right? 😃...love how he saved her...of course i knew that he would...then her comment on his muscles...lmfao!!! 😆...and omg...chocolates..i want some!! kya yaar...you are makign me maha hungry!! waise i just had chocolate ice cream yummiiiTongue...so Geets friends brother in law is none other than MSK...im paaka sure!! he he...and here she is telling him she wished he was married and all...tauba... who would want MSK married, this girl needs a piece of ur mind😉😆...i was right!! woot woot!! awesome!!!



JAZ


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 111priyan

aww dat was such a sweet nd simple story
had a smile on my face throughout

glad u liked it . . .😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
it was a Beautiful OS 👏 amazing story ⭐️ just fab!
Thanx🤗 🤗😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please continue it...
Loved it sooo much...
Such a cute romantic OS...
Thanks for the pm...
Awesome piece of work...

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