OS: Animalistic Urge (Part 3 pg 13)

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Oh the treat has a part 3...!!!!😃

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Wow, wow, wow! That was amazing dear! 👏

How I wish this could happen in the show.

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ruchi

@macho_muffin

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

heyy sharmishtha soo sorry i didn't reply on ur other ones....college is keeping me mucho busy nowadays😡 OHH-EMM-GEE even though i probably said this before, but you are a super freaking mindblowingly brilliant writer!!👏 and its not even just the way you depict scenes....the way you think, ponder and analyze these situations in the show....omggg i think you are awesome!😳 and ahhhhhhh....personally, i find these animalisitc urges, as you put them, very HAWTT😍 and i lovee the maaneet you portray....cuz they are our true maaneet and uff how many times do i wish that ur scenes actually come in the show....dude join the cvs😆 and i was listening to pehli pehli baar mohabbat ki hai while reading this so it made the update all the more magical for me😉 thanks for the pm! loved it! and pweez do keep writing!

Edited by macho_muffin - 14 years ago

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Ilovemsk

@Ilovemsk

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Awesome.....speechless
Waiting for next part....

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Awesome, superb dear........loved it........update soon

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Kavita

@panchjun5

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

@Sharmishtha.....☺️☺️☺️☺️...Come back with the next update soon...or the emo might turn....😡...Kidding....Take ur time dear....😆

Loved Maan and Geet conversation...You are very good with conversations and write excellent dialogues for them.....👍🏼.....And the last scene....again....☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

OMG that was awesome!!! Really loved it, especially the last part...Maan picking her up and all😃

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

oh this is so good...th way maan reacted after knowing the truth seemed so realistic....i loved it......plzzzzz continue soon n thnx for the pm

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

wowwww...written so well...looking forward to part 3

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

part 2
very lovely...................now he knows what happened......................sigh hope in the show also Maan understands this and doesnt get angry on Geet................cont soon.............