OS: Animalistic Urge (Part 3 pg 13)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Sharmi, where do I start? I am lost for words. I am seriously disappointed. Yes, you read me right. You, and you of all the people, completely assassinated MSK's character with the last part of this fan-fiction. I just could not comprehend how you did this. I am so disappointed in you that I have now started to repeat myself. Words fail me. "What have I done?" you are asking yourself. Would you just go back and read what you have written? Oh alright, I'll spare you the effort. This is The Kanjoos Khurana we are talking about. He personifies Uncle Scrooge in GHSP. And he hired beauticians to beautify his Gith? That is akin to sending astronauts to the moon merely to cursorily examine the craters on it. A wasteful expenditure, if ever there was one. Now, that's not even the half of it. In my humble opinion, the worst of it was that he arranged for their *first night* at a hotel!!! The man owns the huge Khurana Mansion with as many rooms as cannot be counted on one's fingers. Don't ask me how I know that. It's just that the exterior of Khurana Mansion indicates that. If he wanted privacy, all he had to do was lock up the rest of the inhabitants of Khurana Mansion in the attic. Now, if you recall correctly, the man also owns an outhouse woth Rs. 30 crores. Of course, his wife has claimed it as her maternal home, but it's theirs nevertheless. Personally, I think that the outhouse would have been a better venue for their first night. It would also have given a closure to their first bed scene at the outhouse. Now, as a forfeit, I demand another OS. NB: I have refrained from posting emotions in this write-up because that would have been a dead give-away. I hope I gave you a good scare. Did you say that good episodes are not good for your creativity?!?

Edited by hegdemedha - 14 years ago