MAGIC of MANEET _mishty - ' THIS TOPIC IS CLOSED '

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❤️ ANGELIC MISHTY ❤️

dear frndss

...dis topic of mine vil contain all imaginary scenes written on MANEET by me...

si..

i want u all to enjoy my imaginations on maneet...

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1ST SCENE


My imaginary scene for maan n geet aftr discharge
scene - 😛

location MANEET BEDROOM
...😳
maan is sleeping on bed...
geet enters wid a a bowl of soup...
slowly taking care he won't wake up...
sits beside him...
gazing him closed eyes..🥱.calm face...priceless swwetness on his face...
her eyes fill up...
she slips him in spread upto his chest...
he takes it out in his sleep...
she smiles looking at him...
feeds his hairs slowly...
😳placing a soft kiss on his forehead...
he smiles in his sleep...
moving close to her in sleep...
putting his head on her lap...
and his hands snaking her waist.😊..
hiding his face in her embrace...
...
he feels more calm n sleepy wid her warm...
she blushes n smiles wid his touch...
she sits properly so dat he dnt hav to stress himself for sleeping on her lap...
he smiles n hugs her more..snaking hands more tightly...
her eyes gazed on him continuously...
wid her hand feeding his hairs smoothly...
she bends down a bit n kisses his cheek softly...
he smiles again...
...
sumtime passes...
she too gets sleepy..😲.
like an hr or so...
maan slowly opens his eyes...
looks up...
finds himself...in her embrace..hugging her tightly..gaining her warm...
he smiles wid a lovely feeling...
he loves d moment dat he is almost in her...
he kisses her tummy softly..😳.
she smiles in sleep...
maan smiles noticing her smiling...
maan hands slowly runs to her cheek...
carassing her skin wid d back of his fingers slowly n gently...
she moans - maan...
slowly opens her eyes...
to meet maan's gaze...
both eyes losts in each other...
maahi*...
she bends down n kisses on his forehead...
geet - ab kaisa lag raha hai...
checking his forehead...
...😉😉
maan naughtily - tumhari bahon me hamesha achha hi lagta hai...
geet 😳blushes - aisi halat me b aapko masti suz rahi hai...
maan - ab kya kare..😉.tumhara asar hi aisa hai...ke mujhe yaad hi nahi rehta ke me thik nahi hu...
geet puts her finger on his lips...
geet -😃 doctor ne aapko mana kiya hai na...kyada baat karne se...
...
maan - isliye toh keh raha hu🥱...muje aur sona hai..
maan whispers - tumhari god me..
geet blushes...
n tries to get out of bed..
maan stops her..pulls her back..
n keeps his head on her lap again...
geet - maan..me bass soup garam karne ja rahi hu...thodi der me vapas aa jaungi...
maan nodds his head as NO..😊.
...
geet - plz maan...soup thanda ho gaya hai...achha me 2 min me vpas ajaungi bass...
...
maan nodds for a NO...
n burries his face in her tummy...
snaking his hand around her waist...
geet smiles...
carrassing his hairs...
geet - maan aise zidd nahi karte...aap soup pikar jaldi recover hojayenge...
maan still burrying his face in her - nakul se bol do..wo le aayega...
geet - achha thik hai..me nakul se keh kar aati hu...1 min to jane dijiye na...
maan doesn't get up..
geet agrees helplessly...
maan smiling closing his eyes...burrying himself more n more into her...
she feels tickles in her body wid his touch...
geet calls in hall n asks nakul to get new soup...
...
maan slowly feels sleepy wid her warm body...
maan - geet..
geet - hmmm...
maan - baby keh raha hai ke mumma.😭..dadda mujhe b bhook lagi hai..mumma ko bolona ke mujhe b kuchh khilaye...
geet looks here n dere..
maan looks at her face...
rising his face litle bit...
maan - tumne b kuchh nahi khaya na..
geet - maan..woh..me kha lungi..pehle aap ko to khila dun..
...
maan stilling sleeping on her lap...
calls nakul again to get sum fruits n milk also...
...
tears srts cuming out of her eyes.😭..
maan slowly gets up from her laps...
wipes her tears wid his lips..kissing dem away...
n puts his head in d hollow on her neck...
taking her in his strong body...
...
geet stops sobbing...
geet - m sorry maan...
maan - jo huva usse bhool jao...
geet - me dobara kabhi zidd nahi karungi...
maan immediately puts his finger on her rose like lips...
she looks at him...
maan whispers in her ear- agar tum zidd nahi karogi.👏.to kaun karega..tumhare pagalpan se meri zindagi..zindagi si lagati hai..
geet wid tearfull eyes - par aap ko kuchh ho jata toh...
maan - kuchh akise hota..tum jo ho mere pass...
geet smile wid tears in eyes..
maan kisses her tearfull eyes...
...
till d time...
d door knocks...
geet opens d door...
nakul cum wid fruits,milk and soup...keeps it in room n leaves...
...
both strts having it..
geet feeds him a sip of soup...
maan makes a face.😕..
maan - geet..kitna yukk hai..me esse nahi pi sakta plz...
geet - mene aap se puchha..nahi na..to chup chap muh kho liye...
maan - jarur ye tumhare hoshiyarpur ka koi nuska hoga...dadi etna kadawa kabhi nahi bana sakti...
geet - aap muh khol rahe hai ya me dadi ko bulaun...
maan - geet me koi bachha nahi hu jo tum mujhe dadi maa ki dhamaki de rahi ho...
geet - achha...jab dadi maa apki naak band karke apko pine ko bolengi na tab pata chalega...
maan funnily - haan fir uske baad..dadi maa mujhe lori gakar sulayengi b...zoli banwa do...
...
geet strts laughing...
maan funnily angry - geet...
geet - hasu nahi to kya karu..aap kuchh b bole ja rahe hai...

maan also feels like laughing...
but still maintain angry look..
geet moves closer to him...
maan meets her gaze...
eye contact..
maahi ve...maahi maahi ve...
geet feeds him another sip..
maan drinks it..not feeling beeter..nothing...
maahi ve...maahi maahi ve...
he drinks it fully...
still maintaining eye lock...
geet immediately cums out of eye contact - khatam ho gaya..
maan - kya khatam ho gaya...
geet - soup...ab chaliye let jayiye...
maan feels like a fool...
he looks at d soup...
n den feels his mouth all bitter bitter...
maan funnily angry - geet ye cheating hai..tumne mujhe bewkoof banakar soup kyu pilaya...
geet - fir aapne mana kyu nahi kiya...
maan - wo me tumhe...
geet smiles naughtily ...
maan too smiles...
geet - ab aap let jayiye...
maan - nahi..mera pura mooh kadwa ho gaya hai...
geet - achha..thik hai..fruits kha lijiye...
maan pulls her closer in a jerk..
making her fall on bed n himself falling on top of her...
geet - maan..kya kar rahe hai aap..mene aapko sone ke liye kaha...
maan aughtily - mera mooh kadwa hai..me nahi sovunga...
geet - to me apko fruits de rahi thi na..mujhe uthne to dijiye...
maan pushes himself more on her...
glancing her lips..n den her eyes...
again looking at lips...n again her eyes...
maan - mujhe mitha chahiye...
geet notices his eye movement...
she blushes turning all pink cheecks...
maan smiles watching her turning pink...
maan moves near to her lips...
geet blushes more..
maan moves still near...
his lips just an inch away from her lips
geet puts her finger in dat inch of place...
maan's lips touching her finger n her finger touching her lips...
geet - ek shart hai...
maan looks at her surprisingly...
presses his lips on her finger...
she smiles blushingly...
maan - kaisi shart...
geet - aap ek week tak office nahi jaoge...
maan slowly removes her finger by his fingers...
maan whispers to her lips - abhitak honeymoon se man nahi bhara..
geet - badmashi mat kijiye...me to is liye keh rahi thi kyunki...
maan - kyunki tu mere bina ek pal b nahi reh sakti..
geet - achha...
b4 she could say anything more...
maan places his lips softly on her lips...
n kisses her softly..
maan moves a bit away to meet her gaze...
she is just all red blushing...
maan gazing her pink face..
maan - ab kuchh kuchh mitha lag raha hai...
...
geet puts her snaking his neck..pulling him closer...
..
maan smiles n again moves to her lips...
she opens her mouth..
his lips inserts in her...
n soon d kiss changes into a smooch..😳.
d 1st intimate feel of having each other in each other...
deir tongues slides in each other...exchaging deir tastes...
d smooch continues...
dey cnt hav enough of each other...
...
maan slowly leaves her lips...
geet wid closed eyes...breathing highly...
geet moans - maan...😳..
maan - ab mooh etna mitha lag raha hai jitn shayad pehle kabhi nahi tha...
geet smiles...
...
maan kisses softly in d hollow of her neck...
showering wek kisses on her neck to collar bone...
puts his head on her neck...
keeping his balance on her...
catching his breaths...
eyes closed...
both lay for sum time just feeling each other breaths...
slowly bcuming normal...breathing in same rythm...
...🥱😆
maan - muje nind aa rahi hai...
geet opens her eyes..
geet - achha mujhe uthne dijiye...fir aap aaram se so jana...
maan moves to a side...
geet covers him wid a blancket...
geet is about to get up...
maan pulls her closer.😛..in his blancket...
geet smiles n surprises also...
but geet knows dat if she vil lay beside him he vil sleep well...
geet doesn't mve away from him...
accepts his pull in d spread...
huggs hum tightly..😳
snaking his neck wid her hand...
n maan's hands naking her waist...
grabbing her in him...
maan gets sleepy in moments...
unknowingly she too falls asleep gazing at him...
both dosses off...
ends up.
😛

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MISHTY


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome writing.
Just loved the dialogues of Maan n Geet.

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hi di hwz u? 😛
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2nd scene
my predition scene for tomorow...
scene -

geet - jab tak dadi maa nahi aajati tab tak ruk jao...
b4 dev could say a word...
dev n geet notices maan standing behind...
maan is just fumming in anger n hurt too...
d snap which is in maan's hand falls on d floar...
geet notices d snap...
she understands dat maan has misunderstood him...
but still she hav faoth in maan dat he can never misunderstand her in wrong way...
he is just her dat she is not hating dev...
geet - maan...
maan gives a stirn look to her wid painfull eyes...
geet keeps quite wid filled eyes...
maan walk towrds dem...
dev - bro..aap jaisa soch rahe waisa...
maan looks at him...
he could just keel him at dat moment to hav a talk wid geet...
dev understand dat maan had misunderstood completely...
...
maan standing in front of geet...
but he cant hurt her...
he cant doubt her...
he turns back...facing his back to her...to avoid her teary eyes...
geet tries to touch his hand...
maan snaps her hand...
geet - maan meri ba...
maan angrily - kyu geet...
geet scares wid his anger...
in all dis dev is mute suspector considering himself most idiot for cuming in between dem...
geet - maan plz..meri baat...
maan is nowhere to listen 2day...
he is so much frustrated fighting wid himself...
he is not in position to hear os say sumthing sensible...
he knows he may sumthing dat vil hurt geet...
he is just standing wid pain n anger in his eyes...
geet cums in front of him...
geet - dar asal dev...ghar chho...
maan - to tumhe etna farak kyu pad raha hai geet...
geet never expected dis response...
her heart break into million peices...
she may just crush down on d floar like a glass...
tears rolled of her eyes...
which maan hated d most...
watsoever let happen...he knows he can not bear d sight of pain in her eyes...
he tries to leave from dere...
geet holds his hand...
geet - plz maan meri puri ba...
maan snaps her hand...
maan - aisa kya ho gaya geet...jis insaan se tum sabse jyada nafrat karti thi..aaj uske liye fikar kyu...jisne tumhari zindagi barbad kardi uske liye ye humdardi kyu...

geet totally breaks...into infinite peices...
she cant not console him now...
watever he said was beyond her thinking...
how can he...how can he think of her...
how can he doubt her..how could her...
dnt he trust her...or was dat just consern for her dat in cuming in d form of his anger...
she fails to understand...
but still she can't just forget wat he said...
geet - aisa mat kahiye maan..plz...plz meri baat...
maan - aur kya dekhu geet...jo dekh raha hu uske baad aur kuch dekhne ki jarurat hai...
dev - bro aap...
maan - dare u talk between us...
dev knows his 1 wrong word can destroy deir relationship...
maan - jab mera accident huva tha to tum dev se milne gayi thi...?????
geet stood frozen like a stone...heartless...wat vil she explain him now...n how...he vil minunderstand more...
nothing is making sense...everthing seems too frustarating...
y such situation cums wen u cnt even speak ur heart...
y such situation creates where truth does matter more at times...and d time...
but d time had gone..she knows...
she is fighting wid her mind...
maan - tumhari khamoshi ko me kya samajhu geet...kya aisa kuchh hai jo ki galat hai...
geet never expected dis from maan...
she knows his minunderstood but she never expected maan doubting on deir relation...
she still frozen deir...
...
maan cnt bear d pain in her eyes...dat is sumwhere bcoz of him...
he leaves from deir at once...
...
tears strts flooding out of her eyes...
she runs out...
dev still stood at d place...
he knows all dis happened bcoz of him..."meri vajah se geet ne bro ko sach nahi bataya...kyu jane ya anjane me ..me kuchh aisa kar deta hu..jis geet ki zindagi par asar hota hai...jitna sochta hu ke kuchh achha karu..utna hu bura ho jata hai..mujhe geet ko nahi rokna chahiye tha..bro naraz hote jarur par shayd mujhse..geet se nahi..wo usse samajhte...par ab...mujhe bro se baat karni hogi..."
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LOCATION GYM
maan in his karate cloths...doing his chhi chha...
trying to flush out all d pain..all d anger of his body in d form of seat...
but he knows dat is impossible...
he is punching hardly...
d words flashes in front of him..dat he spoke to geet...
he hurted her...how could he..how he could hurt his love...
he is angry...
he is mad...
he is in pain to hurt his life..his love...his geet...
his body swetting in anger dat he is drawing out...

dev cums dere...
maan notices dev...
he may just kill him at dat moment...
he is d reason for all d problem...
maan - isse pehle ke me apna aapa kho du..chale jao dev...jao yahan se...
dev is a bit angry wid maan...
watever he did wid geet...he never loved her...
but maan loved her...den how could he love her...how could he hurt his love...
dev - yahin to problem hai bro..aap ya to sach janna nahi chahte..aur fir kisi aur ko kusurwar thehrate hai...
maan raises his hand to puch him...

but controls him...
maan - tumhe koi haq nahi humhare beech bolne ka..me achhee tarahe se janata hu..ke ye sab tumne jaan bujhkar kiya hai..meri geet ke bholepan ka fayada uthana tumhe achhee tarah aata hai..me...
dev - agar aap ye samajhte ke wo bholi hai...to aap ye kuchh nahi samajh paye bro..ke jispar aap ilzam laga rahe ho wo aur koi nahi apki bholi geet hai...wo kya kare...
...
dat hits maan's heart...d pain he is feeling for hurting her..just bursts out...
maan truns to face him...
dev wid dat snap in hand...
dev - is photo ke liye apne geet par shak kiya na...aap kam se kam etna to samajh gaye honge na ke ye photo usi hospital me khichi gayi hai...jahan aap...
maan - mujhe tumhari koi baat nahi sunni..jao yahan se...
dev - koi aur baat nahi..par ye baat jarur sunna chahenge ke apko khoon kisne diya...
maan's eyes almost pops...
he looks at him puzzled...
dev - haan bro...jab aap ka khoon nahi mil raha tha..geet pagal ho gayi thi..donar dhundte dhundte..par ek b blood group match nahi huva..tab wo mere pass ayi..uss insan ke paas..jisse wo nafrat karti hai..sabse jyada...jante hai kyu...aapke lye...
...
maan's anger melted in measure pain...
he gets curious to know d whole truth wid painfull eyes...
dev - wo mere samne gidgidane lagi..ke me aapko khoon du...hala ke usse ye karne ki jarurat nahi thi...mujhse madat mangna uski haar thi...uss dard se haar jo usne meri vajah se saha..par usne sab haar manjoor karli aapke khatir...
...
maan felt like his blodd me just flood out in d form of tears from his eyes...
he started hating himself for hurting her...
dev - mene geet ke samne shart rakhi thi...
maan's anger again filled in anger...
dev - me janta tha..ke aap ye kabhi bardasht nahi kar payenge ke mene aapko khoon diya tha...issliye meri shart thi ke me apko khoon dunga iske badle wo aapse is bare me kuch na bataye...
maa anger again melted...he found his small innocent brother sumwher in him...
dev - aur issi vajah se wo mera kahayl rakh rahi thi..ye sochkar ke mene uske pati ki jaan bachayi hai...
maan - par usne mujhe bataya kyu nahi...wo mujhse sach nahi chhupa sakti..
...
dadi maa - thi kaha aapne..wo aapse sach nahi chhupa sakti thi jab tak hum na kahe...
maan n dev looks at dadi who is standing behind dem...
maan feels ashamed of his deed...
without knowing d truth he blamed his geet...how could he...
dadi maan - humne geet se kaha tha ke..agar unhone aapko sach bataya to dev ke sath sath hum b ye ghar chhodkar jayenge...isliye unhone aapse sach chhupaya...
...
maan broke down...
he felt as if 100 niddles passed through his body...
he hated himself for being so rude wid her..so mean wid her...
how could he be so heartless...
maan - ye mene kya kar diya...usse firse dard de diya..kaise..me aisa kaise kar sakta hu...me...
maan stands up in pain..."kahan chali gayi wo...kya soch rahi hogi..agar usne kuchh..wo kabhi bardasht nahi kar sakti ke me uspar shak...nahi...geet..."
...
maan runs to bedroom to search her...
rushes in d room...
geet standind near d desk...
wid dat broken gift in her hand...
staring it wid painfull eyes...without blincking...
maan's heart broke into millions of peices to see her in pain ...
he can never bear it..n dat bcoz of his stupidity...he just cant...
he felt as if his legs r frozen...
in dnt hav d capability to look into her eyes...
geet notices him...
she just try to go to washroom...
maan immediately holds her hand...
geet keeps quite...doesn't protest..doesn't ask anything..just keeps quite..not even looking at him...
maan can see d pain in her eyes...he hated himself more n more...
maan siftly cupps her afec..putting his hands on her cheeks...
geet slowly looks into his eyes...
maan wid pain - geet...
geet keeps quite..jus staring him...wid pain...
maan - aise mat dekho geet...me toot jaunga...
she immediately puts her finger on his lips...her eyes widens..tears rolls out...
she cant bear her pain..but his pain..she can never bear it..she cant se him in pain...
tears rolls of his eyes...
he hugs her as tightly as possible...
he heart beat strts beaing litle slow in her embrace..having her close his heart...
she hugs him back...
but still dose quetions r haunting her...
maan almost cries - m sorry geet...me gusse me tha..tum mujhe janti ho na...
dose words melts her in seconds...
she cant never miss d d concern in his anger...d pain in his tears...
she hugs him tightly...
geet - maan...i really love u ...
his pain..his hatredness..his regrets...his tears..just melts in dose words...
he hugs her more tightly wid a smile on face..."i love u too..i really do...m sorry..."
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geet - baby ke papa ne khana nahi khana na...
...
a widen smile teases his lips...
he broke d hug softly...kisses her forehead...
picks her in arms...
geet - ye kya kar rahe hai aap...
maan naughtily - baby ke mumma ke bina papa kaise kha sakte hai..baby ke mumma se pitwana hai kya...
geet smiles...snakes his neck..
maan holding her tightly in his arms...takes her out for dinner...
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ends up..

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MISHTY


Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😛love all ur scenes and there is need for thanks................😊
Edited by shiffa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyy frndz..........
i usually write d prediction scenes on maneet on fb........
if u want i can post it here too.......
i just need ur inspiration.........
my prediction 90% cums dicto same to d epi.obviously me epi airing se bahot pehle likhti hu...dats y i get kind of comments......
thnq
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Posted: 13 years ago
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scenes 1 and 2
awesome...
so beautifully written...
loved it so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ... loved both d scenes ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oosum part mishty di ..
it was jst fab ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome eagerly waiting next which scene u write

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