Pls Read(FF)Post-wedding *EPISODE 13 PAGE 10* - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh plz update again soon
ur writing is awsome
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Awhh awesome update
love the precap
cant wait
update soon

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Episode 10

Dadi, Geet, Maan and dev at table.

Dadi: It feels so nice will all my family together.
Dev: Yes dadi.

Maan and geet hands brush together whilst eating. *eyelock*

Dev: Btw dadi, do bro and geet do this often? I mean getting lost in each other's eyes, this is for newly wedded couples right? And now it's been quite long since their wedding.

Geet blushing.

Maan: It hasn't been that long, only 10 days.
Dev: So tell me how was it? I wasn't here. where did you do for honeymoon.
Dadi: There hasn't been one yet bete.
Dev: So, lets plan one now.
Maan: I'm going to office. Bye geet.
Dev: Bye to only geet? No one else? You have changed bhai!
Dadi: I'm going to my room.

Geet gets up and starts cleaning the plates.

Dev: I'll help you, bhabhi.

Geet smiles.

Dev: So tell me hows your baby? I mean, when will little footsteps be heard in this house?

Geet has tears in her eyes. She runs away. Dev is confused.

Maan comes back to get a file and sees geet running with tears in her eyes. He goes to dev.

Maan: What happened to geet?
Dev: Dunno, I just asked bout your baby and...
Maan: Dev, why? Why did you have to do this? You could have at least asked me!

Maan goes to geet who is in room crying. Geet sees and wipes tears.

Geet: You? You left so...
Maan: You'll hide your feelings from me?

Geet runs towards maan and hugs him and is crying.

Geet: Dunno why but I couldn't answer him. I became weak, this geet who boasted she was strong and could take on the world fell weak.
Maan: Never mind geet, I'll tell dev. You don't worry.
Geet: Don't know why but I still keep remembering these feelings of motherhood. When my baby first kicked me I felt so proud. And now, thinking I'll never feel his tiny feet in my stomach brings tears to my eyes.
Maan: Yes geet, even I remember when I saw our baby for the first time, I was so proud I'll never forget that moment. But now smile. And anyway, we can make another baby can't we? I mean if you want, we'll do it now!

Geet smiling.

Geet: No, first go to work.
Maan: Tonight?
Geet: Maan! She pushes him out of the the door and is standing there smiling.

Dev comes.

Dev: That... Sorry geet...
Geet: No, I just became too emotional.
Dev: BTW, maan is very lucky to have a wife like you. You love him so much.
Geet: Yes, but he doesn't love me any less, he too loves me a lot. He's made a lot of sacrifices for me. You know, he went against the world and fought for me when people were calling me an unwed mother and he always supported me. He gave me a reason to live at that time when I was just a living corpse. I didn't smile or love, I was just living because I had to.
Dev: And all because of me. I'm your culprit, geet I can never forgive myself for what I did to you. But I can try make sure that you and bro have a happy life.

Geet smiles. Dev leaves.
Geet remembering maan.

Geet: I'll phone him.

Maan picks up.

Geet: Were you remembering me?
Maan: No.
Geet: Why? Do you not love me?
Maan: No.
Geet: Ok, fine i'm leaving the house, bye. She disconnects the call. Maan is ringing herr but she doesn't answer.

Maan: Looks like i'll have to go home and see.
Adi comes in.
Adi: Sir, an important meeting has come up, come quickly...
Maan: But...
Adi: Sir, quickly.
Maan: Ok, i'm coming. Geet you'll have to wait. Oh god, why did you get married maan?

He leaves.

At khurana mansion.
Geet in her room packing.

Geet: When he doesn't care about me, why am i thinking about him? He doesn't even think about me. Oh god, was he with another girl? No geet, he won't do that! But who knows? From tommorow i'll have to go to office aswell. No, I should trust him. Look at this, i'm thinking about him again. Get him out of your head geet, get him out!

Dev walks in.

Dev: First sign of madness is talking to yourself bhabhi.
Geet: Dev, not now. Go or else i'll hit you with my sandals and throw you out.
Dev: Looks like your in a bad mood. Did you and bro have a fight?

Geet self thot: Geet, you could send dev to office to spy on maan.

Geet: Nothing, dev, will you do me a favour?
Dev: Yes, what?
Geet: First promise.
Dev: Ok, I promise.
Geet: You'll... you'll have to go to office and see if maan talks to girls.

Dev bursts out laughing.

Geet: You're teasing me? Both brothers are the same. Chaddo.
Dev: Geet, bhai won't do anything like this, he loves you too much.
Geet: Oh really? Why did he say he wasn't missing me? That he doesn't love me.
Dev: That...
Geet: No matter what, I'm going far far away. So far away he won't be able to come near me. I'm going to my maayka.
Dev: Hoshiyarpur? (shocked)
Geet: No, outhouse. Before wedding I used to live there, so thats maayka.
Dev smiling.

Dev: Yes geet, thats so far. So far, that bro will walk 5 steps and reach your door. So far that bro won't be able to talk to you, despite wanting to. Even though every word he says you'll be able to hear.

Dev laughing.

Geet: I'm going.

She picks up here stuff and leaves.

Maan outside KM in his car.

Maan: That meeting was so long and now instead of my wife bringing me a cup of coffee and looking after me, i'll have to go and pacify her. What a wierd girl i've fallen in love with.

He smiles. He gets out of car and walks inside.

Maan: Where's geet?

Screen freezes on him.

Precap: Geet talking to maan.

Geet: I don't want to talk to a cheater like you. It's not even been 20 days since our wedding and from now? Wasn't I enough for you?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
wowwwwwwww really loved it so finally geet has gone to her maayka hope maan manofys geet soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow so funny Geet has big heart forgiving Dev i hope Maan manofying Geet soon awesome pls cont soon
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Episode 11

Maan looking around.

Maan: Nakul!
Dev comes.
Maan: Don't know why I pay these servants? They're never around.
Dev: Bhai, who are you looking for?
Maan: I'm finding geet.
Dev: Dunno where she is, isn't she in her room?
Maan: No, i've checked.
Dev: Well, good luck finding her.

Maan leaves, dev looks at him walking away. He smiles evilly.
Scene changes geet at outhouse.
She walks in.

Geet looking around: It feels so wierd to be back here. When I left from here, I never thought i'd come back. These walls, these rooms seem parayi.

She looks at her phone.

Geet: Not even 1 phone call? He's not even bothered about me, looks like i'll have to get used to staying here again.

Scene changes to maan in bedroom.

Maan: Geet, not here aswell? Where is she then? She said she was going but where? Oh god, this girl will make me crazy. Now where do I look for her?

Dadima enters.

Dadi: What's wrong bete?
Maan: I can't find geet. Have you seen her?
Dadi: No.
Maan: She told me she was going, but where?
Dadi: You've had a argument, right? Why do you trouble her all the time?
Maan: Look you're taking geets side aswell. All of you are betrayers. Why do you always think I do something wrong? Is geet an angel that she can't do anything wrong?
Dadi: Yes, geet is very sensible. Now tell me what happened.
Maan: That... we had an argument and she said on the phone she was going.
Dadi: Argument about what?
Maan: I was teasing her and said i wasn't missing her and I didn't like her.
Dadi: See, I knew you would have done something stupid like that. But this is a really big problem. Where has she gone?
Maan: That's what i'm asking you.
Dadi: If it was me I would have gone to my maayka. But geet's maayka is hoshiarpur?
Maan: No, she can't go that far.

Maan and dadi walking in room.

Maan: Her maayka?
Dadi: Where she used to stay before wedding?
Dadi and maan: Outhouse!

Scene changes to geet in outhouse room.

Geet: Now that i've unpacked, i'll rest for a while. My pati-dev isn't going to come that quickly.

She lies down and goes to sleep. Maan enters outhouse.

Maan: Not here? I'll look upstairs.
He goes and sees geet sleeping.
Maan: Wow! After troubling me, she's sleeping peacefully. I'll just wake her up. Geet! Geet!

Geet wakes up.
Geet: What are you doing here?
Maan: I've come to get you. Now come, what childishness is this?
Geet: Childishness? If you think this is childishness then go. Anyway, I don't want to talk to a cheater like you. Its not even been 20 days since our wedding and from now? Wasn't I enough for you?
Maan: What? Have you gone mad? You...
Phone rings.
Geet: Pick it up, pick it up, might be one of your girlfriends.
Maan glares.

Maan: Hello? Yes, tell me.
Adi: Sir, an important meeting in lucknow. You'll have to go for a few days.
Maan: Cancel it, i've got personal problems.
Adi: Sir, can't.
Maan: Ok.
Adi: Sir, is everything ok with you and geet? I mean...
Maan: Adi, why don't I make you geet's bodyguard? I mean, then you can support her in everything, look after her?
Adi: No, sir. I was just...

Maan disconnects the call.

Maan: I've got to go out of town for few days.
Geet: Which girl are you going to meet? Number 20 or 40.
Maan: Geet!
Geet: Ok, go! Have fun! (sarcastically)

They turn backs on each other and stand with arms folded.

Screen freezes.

Precap: Dev talking.

Wow! I didn't even have to do anything and bro went! Now see how I take my revenge.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one.. whts dev goin to do now?? continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice updates ... but plzz no MUs plzz plzzz

continue soon
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Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update.
will dev ever change?😡.
Edited by cutee987 - 14 years ago
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Episode 12

Maan walking in KM.

Maan: Don't know what's happened to her! She's talking so wierdly.
Dadima comes with dev.

Dev: Are you going somewhere?
Maan: Yes, I have to go to Lucknow.
Dadi: Did you find geet?
Maan: Yes, in outhouse.
Dadi: You've pacified her, right?
Maan: No, she doesn't listen. She'll make me crazy.
Dadi(quietly): You're already crazy, what will she do?
Maan: What did you say?
Dadi: Nothing. Now go.

Dev talking to himself.

Dev: Wow, I didn't even have to do anything and bro left. Poor geet. She's brought her destruction into the house with her own hands.
He laughs.
Now see what I do.

He leaves.

Scene changes to dadima and geet in outhouse.

Geet: Dadima, you?
Dadi: Yes bete, I thought you'd be alone so...
Geet: Dadi, did you know? Maan romances with girls in office and now he's gone to lucknow.
Dadi: Bete, Maan isn't like that. He loves you alot.
Geet: Yes, thats true. But then why did he say he doesn't like me?
Dadi: He was teasing you.
Geet: He does that all the time. He doesn't care about my feelings.
Dadi: Let him come. I'll scold him alot.
Geet hugs dadima.

Dadi: Will you help me in the kitchen?
Geet: Yes Dadi, i'll just come.

Dadi leaves. Geet picks up picture of maan.
Geet: Don't know why I can't be angry with you, even though i'm upset with you, i still miss you. You've changed me completely.

Dadi and geet in kitchen.

Dadi: Geet, you fry the pakoras.
Geet: Ok.

She puts them in the pan and starts thinking about maan.
Geet self thot: What must he be doing? Has he eaten or not?

She dips her hand in hot oil by mistake.

Geet: Aaargh!
Dadi: Geet, are you ok? You should be more careful. Dev! Come quick.

Dev comes.
Dev: Oh god! 1 min, i'll put bandage on.
He wraps the bandage.
Dev: How did this happen?
Geet: That... By mistake...
Dadi: You were thinking about Maan, right? I found out from your eyes. He's gone for the first time, that's why. You'll get used to it. I've also experienced it. The unease, it feels like time has stopped and like a piece of you is missing.

Geet smiles.
Geet: Yes, dadi. I can't stay angry with him. I love him.
Dev: Geet, why don't we go see a film tonight? It will take your mind off bro aswell.
Geet: No...
Dadi: It's a good idea and anyway what will you do at home geet?
Geet: But...
Dadi: No buts, your going and that's final. And that's your MIL's order.

Geet and dadi smile.

Dev self thot: This is a good excuse for fulfilling my plan. Enjoy these few hours geet. These will be your last.
He grins evilly.

It's 7 o'clock.
Geet comes down ready. So does dev.

Geet: Shall we go?
Dev: Yes.

There about to leave.

Dadi: Where are you going, leaving me behind? I'm coming aswell.
Dev self thot: Oh god, Dadi will ruin my whole plan.
Dev: Dad, what will you do there?
Dadi: Watch the film, what else? Now come, we'll get late.
Dev: You go ahead, i've forgot my wallet.
Dadi: Ok, bete.

They leave.

Dev bangs his fist on the table.

Precap: Dev talking.

Geet, you won't escape from me. I'll keep trying until I fulfill my motive.

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