Pls Read(FF)Post-wedding *EPISODE 13 PAGE 10* - Page 4

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Ilovemsk thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Hey
Awesome update
Plz pm me x
I hope she actually actually faints
So ma'am feels bad for looking after her lol
Plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
nice parts. so taking sR tips 4m dadi. cool..
really hope tht annie will make arjun realise his mistake.
she shld work on sum plan............
update soon
Ilovemsk thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
will be waiting
thx for da pm xxxxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
episode 8

Geet talking to pinky, adi, romeo and manisha outside Maan's cabin.

Pinky: Geet, I'm seeing you after so many days.
Geet: Yes, pinky. Actually the rituals took so long to finish.
Adi: So tell us, what was your favourite ritual.
Pinky: Adi, you too. Obviously, it was the suhaag raat. Right, geet?

Maan standing in cabin listening.

Romeo: So tell us geet, how was it?

Geet looking down.

Manisha: Geet, tell us. I want to know how maan is in these kind of things.

Maan laughing.

Romeo: Ok, rate him out of 10?

Geet says 1 in anger. Maan shocked.

Pinky, Adi, Romeo, Manisha: 1?
Romeo: That bad?
Manisha: Thankgod, I didn't get married to him. But he looks as if he would be good in that department.
Geet: Yes, he looks like a lot of things, but it's all fake. Now come on, let's go back to work. Otherwise, he'll

scream at us.

She goes into his cabin. He's standing behind the door.

Geet: God knows where he is, he's such a wierd person. Asked for the file and disappeared. Come on geet,

fulfil your patni dharm and find him.

She turns to leave but he grabs her and puts his hand on her mouth.

Maan: So i'm very bad? huh, geet?

Geet confused.

Maan: Out of ten, you'd give me 1?

Geet looks guilty.

Maan: What's surprising is that last night you looked as if you were enjoying it.
Geet: That... In anger...
Maan: In anger you said anything huh? Geet what happens between us should stay between us. That's how

Husband and wife relationship works. And we should respect that.
Geet: Sorry, Maan.
Maan: Geet Khurana said sorry? I need to let all the news channels know. This is breaking news!
Geet: You're teasing me?
Maan: Yes I am. What will you do?
Geet: I'll go back to my maayka and leave you forever.

He puts his hand on her mouth.

Geet: Never talk about leaving me.

They hug.

Pinky: Geet! Where are you?
Maan: This pinky laso!
Geet: I'll come soon. Bye!

Scene skips to arjun and NE. Arjun comes with food.

Arjun: Eat, NE.
NE: Don't want to.
Arjun: It's not good for the baby, what you are doing.
NE: I don't care, if i'm here it's only because I care about geet. If anything happened to maan, she would

have died. And after my brother dev and youe sister naintara already did so muchto her, gave her so

much pain, used her, I can't give her more pain.
Arjun: What do you mean, your brother and my sister did so much to her?

NE gives him a disbelieving look.

Scene changes to geet and pinky at KC.
Geet need that file on top of the cupboard.1 minute, let me climb up and get it.
Pinky: no geet, in this condition? Think about your baby.
Geet is sad.
Geet: pinky, my baby is no more. He suffocated in my womb.
Pinky: sorry geet, in didn't know.
Geet: never mind, now hold the ladder.
She climbs up and gets the file.shes about to climb down but she feels faint.shes falling but maan comes

and catches her.
Maan: geet! geet,open your eyes. Pinky, get water.

He splatters water on her face. Geet stirs. Maan carry's her to cabin and lays her down on the sofa.

Maan: Geet, what happened?
Geet: Nothing, I was just feeling a bit faint.

Dadi comes.

Dadi: Why did you faint?
Geet: Just felt dizzy.
Maan (teasing): Are you alright? I mean do you feel sick? Want to eat anything spicy?
Geet: Maan! You aswell! Was just feeling faint as you make me work like a machine and I was tired.
Dadi: Well, you should sleep more at night and do less romance.

Geet and maan look at each other. They smile *eyelock*

Dadi clears her throat. They look at dadi.

Dadi: Geet, come with me. We'll go home and rest. Maan will come later.
Geet: Ok, dadima.
Maan: But, without geet...
Dadi: If you don't see geet for a while, the world won't stop spinning. Come geet.
Geet: Bye maan. come soon.

Maan self thot: Come maan, get to work.

Scene changes to arjun and NE.

NE: What are you trying to say? Do you know what dev and NT did to geet?
Arjun: Are you going to tell me or just keep asking questions?
NE: Wow, ASR you came for revenge but you didn't know what you were getting revenge for? Ok I'll tell you.

Despite being married to NT, Dev married geet For her money, he showed her false dreams of Canada,

then after getting her pregnant, he left her unconscious at the airport. When geet's family found out, they

told her to abort the baby but geet refused. Her family tried to kill her but she left them and came to

delhi. Then, when naintara found out geet was pregnant, she tried to kill her not once but many times!
Arjun: What? And I kept blaming Maan for everything! Oh god! How did I make such a big mistake?

Scene changes to geet and dadi.

Geet: Dadi is maan not here yet? He doesn't listen to anything I say.
Dadi: Then geet, you'll have to make him. Men are like this, you have to keep them in control.

Geet is smiling.

Dadi: Ok geet go and wear some nice clothes, we'll go out for dinner.
Geet: Really Dadi? I'll go right now.

She runs off. Scene changes to Maan. Adi enters.

Adi: Sir, you haven't gone yet? Geet must be waiting for you.
Maan: Oh yes, I had to go early. I forgot. Thanks adi.

He leaves.

Adi: Maan sir said thanks to me? Geet is actually a magician. She made maan sir change so much.

Scene changes to geet all dressed up.

Geet: Am I looking right? I mean, have I overdone? No geet, Maan will like you however you are.

She smiles

*End*

Precap: Dev walking from the side , Maan walking from the other side. Geet running towards them.



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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
loved it
so finally dev got to know naintara and dev's truth
and after reading the precap i was like hell with this dev why has he come now?
Edited by hinalshah - 14 years ago
Ilovemsk thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
awesome
im pm'ing yo know...
further thought lol
swetha10 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
nice update.. finally arjun got to knw abt dev n NT's truth.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
I dont want to give to much away but in the next few episodes,there will be a close dance between maan ang geet.Anyone got any song ideas?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Episode 9

Dev standing outside KM.

Dev: I don't know want will happen when I go inside but i have to be brave and do it.

Scene changes to Geet. She hears a car horn.

Geet: Maan's come.

She starts running. Maan is walking and so is Dev. Both are coming from different directions. Geet is running towards them. Screen splits in 3.

Geet bumps into dev.

Geet: You? What are you doing here?
Dev: That... I came to comgratulate you on you and bro on your wedding.
Geet: We don't need your congratulations.

Maan comes.

Maan: Geet, who are you talking...

He stops.

Maan: Dev?
Dev: Hi, bro.
Maan: Go from here.

He holds geet's hand.

Dev: Please bro, I want to be a part of your happiness. I haven't come to ruin your and geet's life.
Maan: Happiness? Because of you, we might have never got this happiness. I can never forgive you for what you did to geet. Now go before I throw you out.
Geet: Wait, maan. Don't you think we should give him one more chance? Just because he made a mistake once doesn't mean he is going to do it again.
Maan: Geet, he's the same dev who wronged you and you want me to let him stay here? Never!
Geet: For me?
Maan: Geet! Fine, you can stay here but if you try to do anything wrong, watch! There will be no-one worser than msk.

Maan and geet leave. Maan and geet in bedroom.

Maan: Geet, promise me that we won't let dev create a rift in our relationship.
Geet: Yes, maan.
Maan: I don't want you to have any inconvenience because of dev.
Geet: There won't be maan. Maybe Dev wants to repent for his mistakes.
Maan: Enough. No more Dev. Just me and you. Come sit with me on the sofa.

He sits her on his lap.

Maan: so, how was your day?
Geet: Without you, very bad.
Maan: Mine too, but we can change that now.

Maan lies down and pulls her on top of him.

Maan: So how was your day now?
Geet: Bad.

Maan caresses her cheek.

Maan: Now?
Geet: It was ok?

Maan kisses her forehead.

Maan: Now?
Geet: Very good.

They smile. Maan moves in closer, is about to kiss. Dev walks in.

Dev: Oh, sorry. I'll come later.

Geet blushes. Maan sits her on his lap.

Maan: Dev, always knock when you come in my room. Before it was different but now I don't want geet to have any inconvenience.
Dev: Ok, bhai.
Maan: Now what did you come to do?
Dev: Oh, I wanted to thank you. Really geet, you have a big heart. I never thought you would forgive me.
Geet: Just because you made one mistake doesn't mean you'll do it again . But, don't prove me wrong in front of maan, otherwise he'll taunt me all the time.
Maan: I can never taunt my mishti, oh sorry my mrs hp express.
Dev: What?
Geet: Long story, I'll tell you tommorow.
Dev: Ok, btwget can I call you bhabhi?
Geet: Yes of course.
Dev: Thanks.

Dev leaves.
Dev self thot: Bro and geet look so nice together. How did I do so bad to geet?

Next morning

Geet in kitchen cooking. She has flour on her head. Maan comes from behind and hugs her.

Maan: Good morning.
Geet: Good morning.
Maan: So whats my mishti making?
Geet: Pasta.
Maan: Ok, my favourite.

Maan rubs his nose against her neck whilst hugging. Dev walks in.

Dev: Bro, in the morning? BTW, do you both do romance all the time or do I just walk in at the wrong time?
Maan: Shut up!
Dev: BTW, geet, you got flour on your head. Maan turns her around and rubs it off.

*Eyelock*

Dev: I'm going you both do romance.
Maan: Don't you feel awkward when dev's here?
Geet: No becuase I've forgotten the past and only consider him my Brother in law, nothing else.
Maan: I wish god makes every girl like you.
Geet: Yes, a lioness, someone who'll fight against everyone and win aswell.

They laugh.


Precap: Dev asking geet:

Dev: Geet, how's your baby? I mean when will little footsteps be heard in this house. Geet has tears in her eyes.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
awwwwwwwwwwwww
cute update
cannot wait for the next one....
letss seeee

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