Pls Read(FF)Post-wedding *EPISODE 13 PAGE 10* - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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2nd to comment
lovely and fantistic
keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow Dev so evil
i hope Maan come soon
to save her fabulous
pls cont soonnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh Dev, what is he upto?
nice update
continue soon.
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awesome update.. very curious to knw abt dev's plan... continue soon
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Nice and interesting ... Please do Continue and Can you please add me to your PM List ... Please and Thank you :)
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Episode 13

Dev at KM.

Dev: This geet has good luck otherwise I would have... but never mind, you can't escape from me geet, I'll keep trying until I fulfil my motive! After all, for how long will your luck support you?

He leaves.

Next morning. Geet sleeping at outhouse.
Dev goes to her room with tea. He's standing near her bed.
Geet wakes.
She thinks its maan. She runs towards him and hugs him.

Geet: You've come? I was missing you so much. Never leave me again. By the way, I love you a lot.
Dev: Geet, are you ok?

Geet is shocked.

Geet: That... I thought...
Dev: Never mind. I just brought tea for you.
Geet thanks.

He leaves.

Geet: Oh god, what did I do? Why am I seeing maan everywhere?

Geet walking into KM.

Geet: Good morning, Dadi.
Dadi: Good morning, bete? Did you have a good night?
Geet: Yes.
(self thot): Wheres Dev? I should say sorry to him.

Geet goes to kitchen. She starts making tea. Dev walks in.

Dev: What happened? You didn't like my tea.
Geet: No... That... Actually...
Dev: I was just joking.
Geet: Oh that... I'm sorry about before. I thought you were maan.
Dev: Nevermind. I don't have any problem it was just a mistake. So what's your program for today? Should we go out?
Geet: Yes that will be right. I'll go get ready.
Dev(self thot): You've invited death yourself geet!

He smiles.

Geet and dev in car.

Geet: Where are we going?
Dev: Ice mall.
Geet: Ok.
Dev(self thot): Who'll save you today geet? Dadi isn't here either.

They arrive.

Dev: This shop is nice.
Geet: Ok.

She wanders around. Her phone rings.

Geet: Hello
NE: Hello, geet.
Geet: NE, how are you?
NE: Geet, can you come and meet me? 125 palace garden it's important.
Geet: Yes i'll come right now.

She disconnects the call.

Geet: Dev, I have to go, NE called me.
Dev: But...
Geet: I'll take a rickshaw and I will go straight home. Sorry.
Dev(self thot): She escaped again? I'll have to think of something else.

Scene change. Geet and Annie.
Annie hugs geet and is crying.

Geet: How are you? You didn't even call.
NE: That... Bhai...
Geet: Maan won't say anything, I won't let him. You are my sister. Anyway, youre ok, right?
NE: Yes geet, Arjun looks after me well.
Geet: Good, why did you call me?
NE: I was missing you and found out bro was not in town so...
Geet: You can ring me whenever you want. Ok, i'll leave bye.

She leaves.
KM, Dadi and Dev.

Dadi: Where's geet?
Dev: That... She had to go and meet someone.

Geet arrives.

Geet: Dadi, NE called me. so...
Dadi: Annie? What did she say?
Geet: Dadi, Arjun looks after her well. She's very happy.

Dadi smiles.

Geet: Dadi, i'm going to sleep. goodnight.

She leaves.

Dev(self thot): I'll execute my plan tonight. Let Dadi go to sleep. And then i'll see who saves you?

Precap: Dev in geets room.

Dev: What did you think, i've forgotten my old wounds? No, i've come to get my revenge and i'll get that tonight!

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god i will really kill this dev now n happy that annie is happy by the way maan where r u man ur geet needs u
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i hope Maan come & save from evil Dev amazing update pls cont soonnnnnnnn

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