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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow i hope she doesnt side with evil Arjun great update pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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interesting FF...please add me to your PM list..ill sent a friend request..please continue soon

Poor Geet and Maan...i hope everything turns out okay
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Episode 6

Maan: NE, what are you saying? go from here.
NE: No, bhai, I can't let you risk your life for me. You've got your responsibilities now. Didn't you think

once about geet or your baby?
Maan: This is my decision.
Arjun: Wow, what a relationship. Both are prepared to give their lives for the other. Well, I'll make the

decision easier for you. I'll leave your bhai NE, if you let me be the father our our unborn child.
Maan: NE, don't listen to him just go from here.
NE: No bhai.
Maan: NE, let me make one thing clear, if you support arjun today, you'll die for all of us, because I can

never forget arjun is naintara's brother and my enemy. The same naintara who tried to kill geet and

kepps trying to.
NE: Bhai, don't say that!
Maan: Annie you'll have to decide today!
NE: Ok, bhai. If that's your decision, then fine. I can't forget that Arjun is my baby's father. I've seen the

struggles geet went through. I can't do the same I can't live like an unwed mother. If your not going to

change your decision then i'm parayi from you from today.
Maan: This was as far as our relationship went?
Arjun: I'm sorry but...

Maan walks off with anger and hurt in his eyes.

Scene skips to KM. Dadima sat there with geet, rubbing oil into her hair. They see Maan who is angry.

Dadima: Whats wrong bete?
Geet: Tell me maan, what happened?
Dadima: Wheres NE?
Maan: From now on, no-one will even say her name in this house?
Geet: Why are you saying that? Maan, what happened? Why are you talking like this?

Maan starts crying and goes and sits next to dadima.

Maan: Dadi, what was lacking in my love for NE? Even after knowing the truth that arjun used her to ruin

me she still took his side?
Dadima: Bete, start from the beginning and tell us what happened?

Maan telling what happened and flashbacks of what happened.

Dadima: Why did NE do this?
Geet: Dadi, why are saying like this? If you look from NE's point of view it was right.

Maan stares and is shocked.

Geet: When dev left me and I found out that I was pregnant, I too tried to contact dev. If I had found dev,

I too would have taken his side and gone with him because he was my baby's father and I could never

forget that. But at that time I only found naintara and she told me to abort the baby. At that time, I

didn't know what to do. But now I'm happy that I didn't find dev, because if i did I would never have

found maan. I'm sad but not because NE has gone back to arjun because the person she gave her heart to,

the person she trusted broke her trust.

Dadima: Yes geet, you said it right and who could know better than you? You've been through and you're

speaking from your experience. And I know you would never want anything for NE.

Geet smiling with tears in her eyes. Maan just staring at her in awe. Dadima hugs both of them together.

Dadima: Now come on, lets eat dinner.

Scene changes to arjun, talking to himself.

Arjun: NE did just like I thought she would. But will I be able to keep the hatred between us whilst living

with her? Or will my heart betray me?

Scene changes to KM. Geet, Maan, Dadima finished dinner.

Maan: Well Dadi, i'm going to sleep.

Geet looks at him.

Dadima: Your going to sleep?
Maan: Yes, what else do you do at night? I mean if you have any other ideas you can tell me. Right geet?
Geet: (awkwardly) yes...
Dadima: No, I was just...
Maan: OK, dadima.
Dadima: Your going alone?

She looks at geet.

Maan: What's this, Dadi. Who else will I sleep with?
Dadima: Ok, bete.
Geet: I'm going aswell.
Maan: No geet, you should help dadi with the dishes.
Dadi: No, it's ok. I'll manage.
Geet: No, dadi, I'll do it.

She storms off to the kitchen. Geet standing in the kitchen talking to herself.

Geet: if he doesn't want me to sleep with him then fine. He doesn't even know what husband and wife do

after their wedding. I mean I know they do it on first night but it was different then. Now how do I

explain to him what I want.

Scene changes to maan in room.

Maan: Geet, I know exactly what you want but I won't give it to you so easily. Afterall, I'm MSK. You'll have

to tell me yourself what you want. But to help you i'll decorate the room exactly like our SR. And then we'll

see what happens.

Scene goes to Geet.

Geet: I know, I'll ask dadima. She'll surely know.

She goes to dadi's room.

Geet: Dadi you were newly married once wern't you?
Dadi: Yes geet why?

Maan is coming to meet dadi. He overhears their conversation.

Geet: That, on first night did you...?
Dadi: Did I what?

Maan laughing quietly outside.

Geet:(shy) That you know what H+W...
Dadi: Geet say it.
Geet: I can't. I'm too shy.
Dadi: If you can't even say it how will you do it?

Dadi starts laughing.

Geet: Dadi, you were teasing me?
Dadi: No bete, just seeing if u could tell me. Yes I did have SR but why r u asking me? You and maan did

have it on first night didn't you?
Geet: That... actually... no we didn't.
Dadi: Oh and you want to do it now.
Geet: yes.
Dadi: Well it's easy for you now. Maan is already crazy over you now. Dress up and decorate room and see.

And here, theres a nightgown for you to wear.
Geet: Nightgown?
Dadima: Yes geet, now go.

Geet turns to go. M goes and hides behind corner.
Maan self thot:- Ok, well let me see how you play with my emotions.

Dadi: And yes, good luck.

Geet feels shy and runs away. She bumps into maan.

*eyelock*

Geet is feeling shy.

Maan: Why are you feeling shy? It's not like it's the first time you fell and I had to catch you, this is

regular.
Geet: You're teasing me?
Maan: No.
Geet: Let me go, got lots of stuff to do.

She goes towards bedroom.

Maan: In the bedroom?
Geet: Yes why?

Geet goes to change in nightgown and maan comes and decorates the room while shes not there and then

he hides behind the door. Geet comes out and is staring at the decoration. She looks at the bed and feels

shy.

Geet: (talking to herself) Who did this? I'm sure maan did this to tease me. I'll go and ask him. Ma...

Maan grabs her and puts his hand on her mouth.

*eyelock*

Screen freezes on them.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice
Pls message me when u update x
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwww bt hope maan will forgive annie
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it hope everything between maan and annie gets solved and maan is teasing geet tooooo much
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Episode 7

Maan and geet in the bedroom.

Maan: Ssh, geet.
Geet: Maan, what are you doing?
Maan: Mrs MSK, don't act in front of me. Wasn't it you who objected when I said I was going to sleep alone?
Wasn't it you who went and got tips off dadi about how to have a SR? And now you're asking mw what I'm doing?
Geet: That... Me'
Maan: No geet, today there'll be no stammering. Just tell me what you want and I'll give it to you. But
you'll have to ask.
Geet: Girls don't do this, stop being stubborn, fine I'll go and sleep.

Geet stops him, maan looks at her.

Maan: Now what? You want to say something to me?
Geet: No, I' that'
Maan: I don't have all day, hurry up'
Geet: ok
Geet runs away from Maan shyly

Geet: I want us to' us to become one. I want to have a SR.
Maan: What? Say it louder?
Geet says it louder.
Maan: What? Louder.
Geet: No, I'm not going to say it louder.
Maan: I'm only joking, I knew from the beginning but I wanted to hear it from your lips.
Geet: So, you were doing it on purpose?
Maan: Well, I too have the same desires, Mrs MSK.
Geet: Wll fulfil them tonight.
Maan: Oh really? So you're in a mischievous mood today? Well see how I increase your heart rate.

Geet runs away maan pulls her back slowly. He then turns her around to face him and caresses her cheek. He then carries her to the bed. He starts removing the jewellery and lies down next to her. She rolls over. He pulls her back with the strings at the back of her nightgown. He kisses her neck. He then unties her gown from the front. Geet clutches bed. Slowly camera dims but you can see maan and geet consummating their marriage.

Next morning

Geet wakes up first and sees maan. She remembers the night before. She strokes maan's hair and says: Maan you understand my every wish without me having to say a word. I love you so much.

She gets up to take a shower. She comes out and starts putting jewellery on. Maan wakes up and goes and stands behind her.


Maan: Geet, now you've become mine, in every way possible. Now there'll be no more misunderstandings between us.

Geet hugs him.

Dadi comes in.

Dadi: looks like your plan was successful geet. Congrats.
Geet smiling shyly.
Dadi: so what's your plan for today geet?
Geet: well now the wedding rituals are over, I can go back to the office right?
Dadi and Maan: Office? you're going office?
Geet: yes why? I'm maans secretary, without secretary how will the office run?
Maan: but geet, you don't need to work now!
Geet: why don't you just say you don't want me to be there? Everyone is right, after marriage love
disappears.
Maan: no geet, actually I'm scared that Romeo might get after you. I mean you're so beautiful. Remember
when u worked in Indian Paints, he liked u?
Geet: don't make excuses. Romeo won't do anything like that.
Dadi: ok,geet u can go to the office.
Geet: thank you Dadi. You're much better than this kanjoos.
Maan glares at her.
Geet: don't glare at me like that, I'm your wife and ill take full advantage of that. Now go, get ready, we
don't want to be late.

Maan leaves.

Dadi: good Geet. keep him in line.
Dadi and Geet laugh.

Maan and Geet arrive at KC.
Maan holds Geet's hand.
Geet: what are you doing?
Maan: I'm your husband, I can do whatever I want with u and ill take full advantage of that.
Anyway, this is nothing compared to last night.
Geet Blushes.
Adi and Pinky come.
Adi: good morning Maan sir, Geet Ma'am.
Pinky: Geet Ma'am, you're looking very nice.
Geet bursts out laughing.
Geet: did you two eat too many laddoos at the wedding? Why r u calling me Geet Ma'am?
Adi: that'geet, now your boss's wife so'
Maan: yes but here she's still the secretary.
Geet: yes so don't call me geet Ma'am. We still share the same relation as before.
Pinky: really?Then G,I dont like your clothes at all. You should have worn sari on to impress Maan sir.
Geet: pinky! Maan fell in love with me in salwar suit so I don't have to change myself at all. I'm fine how I
Am.
Maan: come on, everyone get to work and geet come with me.
They go into his cabin.
Maan: sit. So you want me to be your servant huh?
Geet: what? when did I say that?
Maan: at home that u were going to keep me in line,
Geet: I was just joking.
Maan: good, now get me the shares.
Geet: please?
Maan: MSK has never said please.
Geet: well get used to it.
She storms off in anger.
Maan: I'll have to do something about her.

END

Precap: Geet faints. Maan teasing her.
Maan: geet, are you alright? I mean no feeling sick, wanting to eat spicy?
Geet :maan!


Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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wow nice updates.. maneet SR was nice.. luved them at the office.. continue soon
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Thank You to everyone who is commenting.I hope you are enjoying reading them as much as i enjoy writing them. You are all amazing!!!! xxx Please do write if u want me to carry on making more or if u want me to stop as u find them boring!!
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Interesting storyline ... Please do continue ... Can you please add me to your PM list ... Please and Thank you :)

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