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itzangell

@itzangell

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

nice one sharmishtha....... ... all ur others OS are also lovely... the writing makes it seem very sensible & lively... to belive ........ way to go dear.........

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Sweet romantic OS

Loved how she trusted him

Maan n his teasing nature

It was really fab

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sejal1986

@sejal1986

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

More and more I read your different OS, I feel like I want to see all these scenes on screen, please you should join CVs and I m sure you would prove yourself better. Please go for it. I swear if it is in my hand, I would have changes CVs.

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sldeeps

@sldeeps

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

*She was his wax doll. He could mould her in any way he wanted.
*And she loved it that way.
*The only thing that mattered to her was that he was there.
*She did not have to think of right and wrong, when he made a decision.

*He had thought of teasing her, but looked like he was going to be the one unable to sleep that night.
*He wasn't sure what was driving him crazier.
*That she was so beautiful and desirable or the innocence and infinite trust with which she was ready to do everything he asked of her?

u killed me with these lines 😳

love ur OS for these lines ⭐️

these lines depict the perfect understanding, trust and relationship between MAANEET

u have represented true MAANEET in ur OS................love ur OS for not changing their charcterization a bit 😊