OS: The Camera Blunder - Page 2

Your OS's are good😳... really entertaining and well paced.

Thanks a lot every body for the nice words 😊 If you want a PM for my future OSs, just leave a message or add me to your buddy list.

Wow.. That was soooooo HOT.... Wish they showed these... Hey y don u put this n ur other OS's on FB???? They CV's might use it...

OH dear where r u??i want 2 hug u tight 4 writing it so beautifully..tis gve me goosebumps..nvr read anythng like tis n tis idea of zipping is new..believe me dear wen tat camera was installed in geets room..i did had tat idea of geet changing n maan watching her bt unfortunately CVS didnt show it...i always felt wen MAAN had installed camera..besides the security....thy wud be sme sensual/sexual moments between them...i did voice in sme thread are he shud see geet undressing ...wheras u bought tis in2 ur OS n im happy tat mny of us think alike here...i luv MAANS mujhe mahssos karna chahti ho to leave tat unzipped...wow so original nvr read, thought or imagined... n geets mujhe kha jaoge.. so true!!!!!

Very beautifully written 😃, but the only thing i didn't like was Maan being portrayed Godlike.

u know i always had thoughts of wat if geet ever 4get that the camera is in her room.........lol...i wonder wat wud maan have done had she changed fully..🤣

Originally posted by: mehraan

OH dear where r u??i want 2 hug u tight 4 writing it so beautifully..tis gve me goosebumps..nvr read anythng like tis n tis idea of zipping is new..believe me dear wen tat camera was installed in geets room..i did had tat idea of geet changing n maan watching her bt unfortunately CVS didnt show it...i always felt wen MAAN had installed camera..besides the security....thy wud be sme sensual/sexual moments between them...i did voice in sme thread are he shud see geet undressing ...wheras u bought tis in2 ur OS n im happy tat mny of us think alike here...i luv MAANS mujhe mahssos karna chahti ho to leave tat unzipped...wow so original nvr read, thought or imagined... n geets mujhe kha jaoge.. so true!!!!!

wish wish CVS cud hve showed all tis...

lovely read it several times n will tell my frends 2 read it!!!

Too good u did it again just amazing not only this one but all os are great hope we culd see smthing like that in serial too.thanks for writing such an awsome OS.

you write very gud and ur style is really romantic which is my favorite and add to that Maaneet it gives a perfect mix!!!

Written very beautifully! Very romantic.Why can't the CV's think o f such scenes? Anyway, I could imagine the whole scene and satisfy myself. Keep writing more.😊