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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice story.. plz add me to ur PM list...
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GOOD intro please continue the story
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nice start . plz add me 2 ur pm list
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If this is just a try of yours then I must say its a nice try and you should continue to try so that we can get to read your tries.....😆😆,Ok my try at humor sucks😆.....nice story......definetly continue it pls....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey that was nice.

do continue

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OFFICE:

"adhi" ….adhi rushes into maans cabin..

"Wat r u doing? Iasked u for that file half an hr b4?" .."sir!! file"

Maan angrily signing some paper..adhi" sir 2day u need to visit the construction site for bhawans company, if u finalise the site, v can start the construction"

"fine, we will go now"..adhi and maan left the office..

CONSTRUCTION SITE:

"Site is good, our construction plan will work out very well here" maan sees sum ditch near the site, he turns to adhi" b4 construction clears this ditch"

He goes around luking the site…suddenly his eyes fix on something..some girl trying to stepped into the ditch which is shallow…maan rushes there and get shocked to see GEET..he identifies her on the spot" wat the hell she doing here? Trying to step in a dirty ditch?"

he shouts"excuse me"…geet slightly freaked to hear a voice, she slips in that shock..and of course maan catch her…there share a nice eyelock

then maan pulls her from the ditch"are u mad, wat r u doing ?" geet"wats ur problem? Why u always gt tensed?u knw ma dad says that wen u gt tensed u shuld count 5-1, so that ur tensed will go off"

maan gives a angry luk..wat does she think of myself iam nt the one who gt into the ditch..she is really mad…."r u advising me? Do u knw who iam iam MSK.."geet cuts him there"r u always hve this way of advertising urself?"

maan gts so angry stepped closely to her" u r crossing ur limits, u almost fell into the ditch, I pulled you and u r criticizing me?"

geet steps bit back" I doesn't asked u too pull me out and maintain a distance dnt cme closer to me while speaking"she turns her face angrily…

maan anger reaches peak, he ctrls and says "wat the hell u r doing in ma construction site?" geet gt shocked" ur construction site?"

adhi rushes there and says " sir she is our newly appointed manager for site visiting, u only signed the paper sterday sir".

.maan gives a confusing luk"wat me???watever…first teach her hw to behave with the boss"

maan left ..geet"adhi sir is this our boss, babaji I thought I will be hvng a boss who is sweet, who hve patience, experience.." adhi cuts her" geet for that u will hve nly a boss of 60s age..dnt worry maan sir is short-tempered guy..but he is really talented".

geet gve a dry smile and thinks whatever iam jst his site manager that's it …why do I wanna care about him much…she doesn't knw that he s gonna b the nly person who shes gonna care than anybody else in the future….

Maan leaves the site in his car while geet watches him……..

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loved it yaar...nice start ..loved it ..so do conitnue soon pls...add me to ur pm list ..

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