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It's a full moon night ……stars and the dark sky with its moon spreading their love into the nights of the streets…….

Almost everybody had their eyes in the sky…it's a special day for the couples who were holding their hands and watching the lovely moon…..

But there was one soul who care damn about the moon and was driving his car in high speed filled with thoughts………MAAN SINGH KHURANA

On his way returning from a party"who he thinks he was dealing with, maan singh khurana..if he doesn't know who I am …he will know it in the morning…"

Lost in his thoughts he failed to look on the road…he held on to the sudden brake…

"Wat the hell?"…

He stepped out from his car..he saw a girl holding a kid who is about to get hit by his car…he eyes met with the girls eyes for a second…he stunned…still he managed his angry level beat upto high…"are you mad is this the way of taking care of the child? Wat a mother you are?nonsense…"

The kid gt scared and started crying…"nw you can't able to console your child"

The girl stares at him and said"chup!!!just shut up"

He was shocked …"are you saying msk to shut up…how dare"

The girl care a damn about his words…she started speaking with kid

"Where is your mom? With whom you r playing here? dnt gt scared"

The kid pointed her finger to a house..the girl picked a stone and throw exactly at the window of the house…MSK was shocked by her action..he stand mum ….

Three ppl came out of the house and run towards the child….the girl speaks" is this your child? There are some goons who tries to take her away..they are the ones who throwed the stone into your house..on seeing us they ran away leaving the child"…the ppl thanked her "you shuld take a gud care of the kids…if you dnt hve time you better dnt try for a kids….." she said sarcastically and moved from there..

"Excuse me"msk…"aren't you little harsh on them?"…

Girl" look who is speaking about harshness" she chukles…it irritates him"it was nt my fault….who will expect a kid on this road at this time?"she doesn't replied …she just walked from there…something troubles maan..he want to justify himself to her…y????till now he doesn't had the habit of justifying himself to others…bt he cant stand that wat the girl think about him…"excuse me" again he called her..

She turned and saied "my name is geet nt excuse me" she left..

"Wat the hell somebody disobeyed me and nt feeling bad about that..wat happened to me thinking about a girl..iam going mad…geet…nice name..oh stop it maan..move on"while getting back to his car he gave a glance to the moon…he doesn't knw that hes gonna stare at this moon with that girl for hours……….wait till that

So hw was it…even it sucks..u ppl are free to say…

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey yaar! It's really really good! A very nice start! U should definately continue this one! : Loved it lots! And when u continue, plz add me to ur pm list!😉
~Babydoll~
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r??????????wat????????😕...is it nice?????sucks?????or k?????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start continue soon plz :)
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r means reserved for comments

and it was lovely please continue😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz continue it........would love to read it..
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good,
add me in ur PM list
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Originally posted by: krishdgr8

r??????????wat????????😕...is it nice?????sucks?????or k?????????

Oh! I'm sorry!😆 i didn't know it would cause confusion! Was just reserving my spot cause I wanted to be first!😉 I will comment now! :)
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Originally posted by: sanjh1234

r means reserved for comments

and it was lovely please continue😊

Thx for clarifying!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start. pls continue and add me in ur pm list.

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