OS: Maaneet Wedding - A Dream Come True - Page 5

Originally posted by: muniza75

Awwww that's really nice, and the himmat part brought big smile on my face, but i think you have to write the last part in lil more detail, it seems lil rushed, rest beautiful content....

Muniza

Thanks for your feedback so much. When I read what I write, it is very difficult for me to gauge such nuances like where it feels rushed Vs where it feels OK. That is why I need someone like you to point it out to me. This will definitely help me to improve my writing skills. Once again thanks for taking the time to share your advise. I value it a lot.

Originally posted by: sksg

Thanks for your feedback so much. When I read what I write, it is very difficult for me to gauge such nuances like where it feels rushed Vs where it feels OK. That is why I need someone like you to point it out to me. This will definitely help me to improve my writing skills. Once again thanks for taking the time to share your advise. I value it a lot.

its superb yaar...love to see the same on screen too...

Originally posted by: muniza75

Aww so sweet of you, i wasnt sure that i had to point out or not, but i wanna give my honest comment, so said it....You guys are very good writers, and somehow if i can help, i feel more great...I am worst writer, but always can give good advice :)

Muniza

Good and honest advice is such a rare commodity that it is always welcome for those like me who want to improve their skills. You are always welcome to share your frank opinions.

Originally posted by: dips_chim

its superb yaar...love to see the same on screen too...

while reading i was literally picturising the same in my mind...

its awesome... 😊

I hope to see it on screen soon too ...........

aww.. that was just a great OS.... 😃

@trishap & nehara, thank you so much for liking it.

Originally posted by: sksg

The new FB pictures make me feel that the marriage may once again get pushed until this AA (i.e.Arjun/Anwesha) track is sorted out. I am so glad I wrote this OS. I can always fall back on reading it if they postpone the marriage again.

Postpone? I doubt it if there will be a marriage. Why is that its always when ever a new creation take place and few praises and then slaughtering starts? Since the old team has been replaced, I feel like i'm watching a Movie not a daily soap. It's lacking originality when it started. Now all i see is blunders, bloopers that are impossible not to notice and above all new characters and typical drama of revenge.
Wished I was the winner of that big Jackpot and I could have bought the rights from Star One or even buy the whole darn Star One channel to rule our way.😃

Originally posted by: Newdime

Postpone? I doubt it if there will be a marriage. Why is that its always when ever a new creation take place and few praises and then slaughtering starts? Since the old team has been replaced, I feel like i'm watching a Movie not a daily soap. It's lacking originality when it started. Now all i see is blunders, bloopers that are impossible not to notice and above all new characters and typical drama of revenge.
Wished I was the winner of that big Jackpot and I could have bought the rights from Star One or even buy the whole darn Star One channel to rule our way.😃

If you are ever going to buy Star One, please let me know. I don't mind pitching in my share. If it ever happens, I hope it won't be too late for saving this show.