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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

life changed like a motion picture
being married then left in discomfiture

of being abandoned and yet not alone
carrying a part of you was not to condone

fighting for life; yours and one within
of being considered a fool, totally blithering

fear was not the start of it,
though there was no room for it

acceptance first was of womanhood
and it suddenly changed to motherhood

OMG.....I din read this only !!
Missed it...but finally reading it :)

Ah! what lines Vru...

of being abandoned and yet not alone
carrying a part of you was not to condone

acceptance first was of womanhood
and it suddenly changed to motherhood

God...I'm speechless how do you write so beautifully verses :)
bow down to you :)

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#182

Thanks Shabs...

i try...it all depends on the mood and of course...the muse..

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#183

Rushi!

I'm very glad to have read your work independent of Sookie's, and in a go - this was very, very impressive! While prose gives more space and scope to sound distinct even for similar situations and scenes, versing makes that doubly hard.

I'm most in awe of how different all your verses are, each unique to its sense and nothing that sounds repetitive - it takes the cake, because (amateur?) poetry can be accused of that more often than not!

My personal favorites were your verses to Monsoon, Heat, Geet and Jailbird II =)

Once again, excellent job! 👏

cheers,
nj

*edit*

ps: i tried to send you a pm initially, but your inbox is apparently too full! you might want to clear that out for fan notes from the likes of me 😳😆

Edited by spln - 14 years ago

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-honeydew-

@-honeydew-

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#184

🤗

why was this hidden from me momma ... i wanna read more .. and read regularly ...its fab as always !!

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

life changed like a motion picture
being married then left in discomfiture

of being abandoned and yet not alone
carrying a part of you was not to condone

fighting for life; yours and one within
of being considered a fool, totally blithering

fear was not the start of it,
though there was no room for it

acceptance first was of womanhood
and it suddenly changed to motherhood

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-honeydew-

@-honeydew-

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#185

😊

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

life changed like a motion picture
being married then left in discomfiture

of being abandoned and yet not alone
carrying a part of you was not to condone

fighting for life; yours and one within
of being considered a fool, totally blithering

fear was not the start of it,
though there was no room for it

acceptance first was of womanhood
and it suddenly changed to motherhood

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: spln
Rushi!

I'm very glad to have read your work independent of Sookie's, and in a go - this was very, very impressive! While prose gives more space and scope to sound distinct even for similar situations and scenes, versing makes that doubly hard.

I'm most in awe of how different all your verses are, each unique to its sense and nothing that sounds repetitive - it takes the cake, because (amateur?) poetry can be accused of that more often than not!

My personal favorites were your verses to Monsoon, Heat, Geet and Jailbird II =)

Once again, excellent job! 👏

cheers,
nj

*edit*

ps: i tried to send you a pm initially, but your inbox is apparently too full! you might want to clear that out for fan notes from the likes of me 😳😆

Thanks so much...NJ...appreciate it..so much... and coming from ..you..and yes the verses are inspired by..Sookie..

and thanks for the info on pm box...i have cleared it now..i am so lazy..😆