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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome work Anu ......Update soon!!!!!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks !!!! it is nice update 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow lovely romantic update.. enjoyed it.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was really aweome....so loved it
really passionate one..awesome..
keep writing and waiting for next one 👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
You are too good an author anu. You Should write Geet Sequel 2. Loved your update. Am eagerly waiting for the next one. Please update soon...............................
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!

can't wait for suraj hua maddham... i love that song and have great memories w/ it lol

Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dear updater....!!!😉
do did awesome job...!!!👏👏👏👏
reali luv it...!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
aur adult kiya...yeah tou bacche bhi persakti hai...!!! hehehe🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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such a small update...!!!😲
i was expecting long...!!!😭😭😭😭
waiting 4 more...!!!😊
Edited by charmed ones - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok guys..part 6 coming up in a while
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Posted: 14 years ago
aad me ur pm list when u update this FF is so lovely
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 6 Updated


ENJOY



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No recap this time.....coz the essence of romance will than go😃hai na




Geet and Maan are lost into eachother.....Geet is holding Maan's face lovingly ..with both the hands now and Maan has held geet by her waist tightly☺️(Hai hai.......koi AC cahlaoo yarrrrrr...muje garmi lag rahi hai😎).................Their heads touching each other....their noses almost touching (Only noses ok....no other imagination her🤣) .......

than Maan breaks the head touch and holds Geet's hands and takes to the swing.........the swing is also decorated with flowers and the seat is filled with Rose petals (My My...yhe Muda such mei perfectionist hai😍so much of preparations) ...................... He makes Geet sit on the swing.....( the music version of Mahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii playing on the background... )....................

Geet: Sir.......(Ufffff ye ladki)....i mean MAAN........

She blushes as she takes his name....

Geet: Yhe sab ....Kya...

Maan sits righ beside her on the swing and puts his finger on her lips again

Maan : Shhhhhhhhhhh............Geet aaj pata nahi kyu.....dil pe kaabu rakna mushkil ho raha hai
☺️...

He holds her chin and looking into her eyes..goes closer closer to her......

Maan:
Yhe..lamha......muje hamesha yadrahe ga geet...............

He kisses her on her forehead..... (Ok Ok..now i won't disutrb u guys with my unwanted chats😵) .....................

Geet again looks at Maan with Moist eyes...

Geet : Meri zindagi ka bhi ye sabse khubsurath lamha hai Maan.............mene eksath intni kushiyaan kabhi nahi dekhi......

Saying this she leans in Maans Arms☺️ and hold him....

Geet : appne mari zindagi mei kushiyaan hi kushiyaan bhardi hai......

Saying this she holds him tightly and closes her eyes....Maan also holds her tightly and both sit on the swing clam and content in each others arms.................(This sitting hug is just as magical as the Date hug❤️)

after some time we hear the wall-clock struck 12'oclock........ Maan just opens his eyes......he lovingly holds geet's chin... and looking again deep into her eyes .......

Maan : Geet......Janam din ..bhohot ..bohot mubarak hot Geet...........(He say's in a sexy voice)


saying this he goes very very very close to her lips☺️ ....their lips are about to touch....... just than Geet smiles and pushing him a little..... runs away from there and stands at a little distance.....Maan gives that Passionate look and comes to her....stands right behind her and wispers in her ears

Maan : Geeeeeet..........Chalo ..cake kate....(He smiles saying this ..😛 very passionate smile)......

They both go near the table of gifts.....where a beautiful cake is been kept......

Geet looks at Maan and Maan looks at Geet..They again have a intense eye lock....

Maan
: Kya Huaa Geet.....Cake nahi cut karogi...

he says sweetly....Geet blushes and nodes her head indicating that she will...........

Geet picks up the knife looking at Maan..lovingly...

Maan (Taking deep breath and smiling): HMMM........tume too meri dil ko pehele hi ghyal kardiya hai.....ab kya chaku se bhi marne ka irada hai (he says romantically)

Geet smiles

Geet: Shayad (She blushes a lot)....

Maan (With a little surprise): Ohhhhhhh..to tum ne muje pura marne ka irada karliya hai..kyu

He say smiling and coming closer to her yet again....

Geet turns to cut the cake ..but stops ...Maan is standing right behind her..very very close to her...she looks at him...

Maan: Kya huaa Geet.....

Geet looking into his eyes....she just slowly holds his hand ..and together they are holding the knife...Maan looks at her with intense passion.....Maan makes an ishara ..a very cute ishara to cut the cake...and Geet smilingly obeys him...both together cut the cake..........Mans lips are again touching Geet's ears and he is hold her waist with one hand......

While they cut the cake Maan wispers again in her ears "happy b'day to you..happy b'day to you"....his lips touching Geet's ears.......Geet is feeling the same passion wile cutting the cake..and she is slightly hyperventilating ☺️.....both have a intimate and romantic cake cutting ceremony 👏....................

After the cake cuttng Geet just picks up a piece of cake and very passionately, slowly and lovingly feeds the cake to Maan ..who is still holding her from the back...........Maan just eats a small piece of the cake and feeds the same cake to geet ..with same love, passion and desire..both are continously looking at each others eyes............

After the cake is fed..Maan just picks a remote keep between the gift table......(He is still holding on to geet).. and starts the music......

Geet just turns to him..

Maan: Aaj..iis pal mei..hum apni puri kusiyan jeelenge geet......

He says........moving a little back and kneeling down.......and putting his hand up asking Geet to Join him for a romantic dance.....The wind is blowing on both ........Geet shy's a little and smiles and places her hand in his hand approving for a dance...........

Maan Gets up and pulls her very very close to him........Both again..again..continue a very very very intense and passionate eye lock........

The song playing in the background "Suraj huaa madham..chand jal ne laga".......we see the full and beautiful moon spreading his light over these love birds..while they are engrossed in a close close , passionate and intensely romantic dance..........


For the first para they do a close close bowl dance....where Geet is standing on Maan's feet....and they both are dancing (for the first para) (Just like Edward and Bella were dancing in Twilight....closely and passionately)......

For the Para "Hai kubasoorath yhe pal....sab kuch raha hai badal"

Geet tries to run away a little..but Maan holds her hands ..with too much passion... and pulls her near him....she goes near him with a jahtka...their lips almost touching...

For the Para "Tere hi rang se ..yuuu mei tho rangi huu sanam"

Geet KISSES MAAN on his forehead and goes behind him and hugs him closely..........

ALl this dance happnes in Slow motion☺️
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️




NO PRECAP this time AGAIN😃


Hope u guys enjoyed this part





Edited by Sh_ka_su - 14 years ago

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