Anu's FF corner:B'day Beauty(FF):Part 6 Pg15 updt

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello friends....

I have read a lot of FF's....and all were very very beautifully written.....so even i though why not write a short FF....a romantic and cute one ..just like u guys write....

NOTE: I might definately not be able to reach the mark set by u people..coz u people are awsome...but yes this is a small try from me😛


Ok Here is the introduction

Guru: Maan
Geeth: DD
&
Dadi

STORY BRIEF

Well...
Geeth is hinting MSK that its a special day for her.......MSK as he is 😆 does not understand these signals of Geeth....Geeth shows her Cute anger.......complaints to dadi....MSK comes to know from Dadi that it Geeth's B'day.....he arranges a very very very private B'day celebration for Geeth (Khurna Mansion ke Chat pe😳😳😳)......and B'day is celebrated in "Maine Pyar Kiya" Istyle...........



So....how did you like the introduction of the story ..........well hope you all like the idea.. i shall write this hole FF......

Plz tell me guys if u like the idea😛.......

Trust it will be a very cute, Too too romantic and passionate ......and ..eheem eheem....😉

So what do u all think??



CONTENT GUIDE

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Part 1: Page 1

Part 2: Page 3

Part 3: Page 6

Part 4: Page 9

Part 5: Page 12


Part 6: Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
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really loved it...will be waiting for it..
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Originally posted by: ansah

really loved it...will be waiting for it..

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Originally posted by: cool_gal17

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add me 2 pm list plsssss.....
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Ok so her goes my FF


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Geeth is in her room looking at all the gifts she has got during the engagement.....she is just lost in thoughts..and also thanking Babji for the happiness she has got..Dadi comes in and sees Geet lost in he own world

Dadi: Geeth...Kya soch rahi ho beti

Geet: Kuch nahi dadi......mei ye soch rahi thi ki Babaji ne muje app sabse mila ke kithni badi kushi di hai

Dadi: Beta.....tum itni acchi ho ki babaji ko tumare hiseki kushi tumei deni hi thi...hai na...

Geet is all blushing and happy and shy......

Dadi: beta..kal humei shopping pe jana hai...... apki shadi ki tayari abhi se shuru karni hai na...

Geet blushing more

Geet: Kal Dadi.....kal tho.....

Dadi: Kal...kal kya hai Geeth..

Geet: dadi who..muje mandir janatha....kal..

Dadi: Mandir???? kyu....koyi khas bath.....??

Geet in her typical istyle: Hai dadi who kal mera janam din hai na.......

after saying this she suddenly stops...

Dadi: kya...Kya kaha....Kal apka janam din hai......

Geet: hai Dadi...or har sal...mei mandir mei pooja karati huu ...isliye..

Dadi: Koi bath nahi beta....Kal apka khas din hai.....or hum is se zaror celebrate karenge.......

Geet: Nahi Nahi dadi....iski kya..

Dadi: Geeth....ap abh is ghar ki hone wali bahu hai....or app ka janam din tho kasthor pe celebrate karna hi padega.......app humsab keliye itni special hai.....

Dadi just gives her blessings.....

Dadi: BTW..Kya Maan ye jante hai ki kal appka Birthday ...

Geet: Nahi Nahi Dadi....plz...ap unko math batayiye ga.....mei khud (She just stops and again starts blushing)

Dadi: Hmmm..tho app khud Maan ko ye bath batana chahti hai.......kyu (Dadi has a naughty smiley on her a face)) thik hai......god bless u beta......pur kal ka celebration paka....ok

Dadi gives blessings to Geeth and goes.......

Geet in thoughts as how to tell Maan about her B'day......

Geet (To herself): mei Maan sir se kya kahoo....Babaji..app tho jante hai na...ki asi batho mei who zara dhakan..nahi nahi zara nadan hai.....hmmm..............phir bhi Geeth.....tum..tum na unko hint de do.....agar who samaj gaye tho thik ....agar nahi tho..........

saying this to herself she makes a plan to call up Maan as he is in office

Geet tries calling Maan on his cell...not knowing that Maan is busy with a client........Maan see's that the call is from Geeth and cuts the call thinking that he will call her after the meeting ...... But Geeth is not ready to give up..

Geet: ye kya...phone kat diya.........koi bath nahi...phir se try kar geeth...

Geet try to call Maan again...but Maan does not pick........(Maaneet Anthem playing in the background)

Maan (Thinking): yhe Geeth ko kya huaa hai.......phone pe phone karrahi hai......

Geet tries for the 3rd time.....Irrated Maan picks up the call

Maan (in typical MSK Anger😍): Geeth..Kya huaa....tum muje intna disturbe kyu kar rahi ho......

Geet: Kyaaaaa...abh mere call se app disturb hothe ho kya...

Maan(cools down): geeth Bath kya hai...jaldi bolo..mei meeting mei hu..........

Geet is not able to think how to call Maan back home from work......she thinks that if she calls Maan without any reason...she will have to bare is anger.....but she wants Maan to come back home ASAP...so Geeth thinks of a plan instantly....

Maan: Geeth..kya huaaa..kuch bolo tho....warna mei phon rak raha hu.....

and as Maan is about to disconnect the phone

Geet; Nahi Maan sir........Aaaaaaacheeeeeee (Geeth sneezes🤣)

and Geet cuts the call

Geet: Abb tho app ayenge na Maan sir....(and smiles)

Hearing her sneez..Maan becomes very very tensed and worried.........



PRECAP: Maan has come in outhouse....desperately shouting Geet's name.....Geeth is looking at the moon from her bedroom window... and hearing Maan's voice smiles and also gets a bit tensed




Edited by Sh_ka_su - 14 years ago
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VERY NAUGHTY GEET................... 😉 ADD ME TO UR PM
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add me onto ur pm list.. lovely intro... liked the naughty geet.. do continue soon
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wow that was superb can u plz add me in pm list plz👏
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Originally posted by: abi2010

VERY NAUGHTY GEET................... 😉 ADD ME TO UR PM



Sure dear.....Glad u liked it😊

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