OS collection-based on my fav song-pg1,2updated 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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this OS IS BASED on the lyrics of Tujhe bhula diya.......of the upcoming movie Anjana Anjani................
TO have the full impact i request to you hear the song during the read of the lyrics😛
link to the song......


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ShTtCATmhnU
........... ,,,😊




kiski kismat footi!!!.........
no one ans her...........
everybody grinned at her..........
seriously kiski............oh no!!!!!!!!!nahin!!!
yes,you are going to hushiarpur with mr.maan sing khurrana............lucky you...........pari clapped.........
dreamy ke sathh dream journey.......
nahin use sarooo ke sath use kandar pe mujhe nahinjana...........
babaji ,ye saab keya ho raha hai..........
papa...........mujhe nahin jana........
geet.......its 2 hours work......flight se jaungi........
flight pe aungi.........don't ovearact.......
dad......u know i hate that arrogant jerk......
he is insufferable......
bas bas mujhe bataan hai tujhe bade bade adjective ate hain dont show off........
par papa........
its no use baccha...
the land is in your name you have to apear before court tere liye indian law to nahin badal sakte....
lekin apne mera naam pe o land liya kyun......
tax ka last year kuch prob hua tha....so we had to transfer some property to you children....i guess you won the lottery of hp.
anymore intelligent question??

the 2 hour work has now became 2 days torture........
infront of amritsar court.
lawyer...sorry sir aaj aapka
kaam nahin hoga,
kyun......she shouted.....
geeeet.dont shout.......maan annoyed
look who is talking...
kyun nahin ho sakta...
o,apka judge mar geya..........
iss budhe ko bhi aaji marna tha kal martha to keya ho jata..........
agli tarikh kal subha ki mili hai........
issliya aaj raat
no way no freaking way........
i am going back home........geet shouted

maan closed his eyes she hated this girl.......
she was pampered spoil ed brat,who thought she is the princess......the whole world just should bow down to her.........

now in the hotel.......
i am not eating any of this,good kitna oily khana hai........
khana hai to khao varna.......bharme jao.....
cant you ever talk without shouting.....
cant you talk without nagging........
i dont nagg.......
ohh!!if i want som1 killed by sound pollution you be my man........

they fought all the way....
tired go back their room....

its not like that she behaves like this always only infront of papa and maan,
her papa loved it,maan hated it to the same extent...
other wise she was very mature..........

she was standing in the balcony....
saw something left the hotel.........

maan...was for a night walk.........
ye larki mujhe pagal kar deegi.........
thank god kal mere picha chutega.........
he saw a toli sitting around a big fire...
there were some young boys also sitting with them
it was 3AM
He was leaving
just then he heard...........

someone singing in plain voice.........

Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Tu sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rove palkan de Kone vich neend meri.......

he felt the same pain in the voice he alway felt...
her voice compelled him to go near

he sat and took a guitar from one of the boys
the song continue.......

Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Hanju digde ne chot lage dil te
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rut birha de badlan di chhaa gayi

then the miracle happened without thinking
sitting inthe oppisite direction he started singing

Kaali kaali khaali raaton se
Hone lagi hai dosti
khoya khoya in raahon mein
Ab mera kuch bhi nahi
Har pal her lamha, main kaise sehta hoon
Har pal her lamha main khud se yeh kehta rehta hoon


he remember his love the pain...
still why does he remember


Tujhe bhula diya, oh,
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya.. oh
Mujhe rula diya ...........


toli members join him with their harmonium and tablas
as if answering his quetion they sing.......

Teri yaadon mein likhte jo lafz dete hai sunaai
beete lamhe poochhte hain kyun hue aise juda.. khuda,
Khuda mila jo yeh faisla hain
Khuda tera hi yeh faisla hain
Khuda hona tha woh ho gaya
Jo tune thha likha..........

he started where they left off

Tujhe bhula diya, oh,
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya..
Mujhe rula diya .


the pain in his voice was less now............

the hermonium started..........
the magical voice started.......
now he can see the face behind the voice......
he felt peace,his peace that was lost long ago.....

Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Tu sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rut birha de badlan di chhaa gay

Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Tu sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye
Naina Laggeyan Baarsihan
Rut birha de badlan di chhaa gay....

he started immidiately...as if telling his story...the pain was gone now completely.....

Dol pal tujh se juda thha,
Aise phir rasta muda thha,
Tujh se main khone laga,
Juda jaise hone laga,
Mujh se kuch mera

toli joined........

Tu hi mera liye abb kr dua,
Tu hi is dard se kar de juda,
Tera hoke tera jo main na raha,
Main yeh khud se kehta hoon,.....
.
both looked in each other eyes........no words needed they lived every single word in the lyrics.........

he finished as if saying good bye to his past.....let go his pain...
Tujhe bhula diya, oh,
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya.........
.......

they started walking off silently.......
silence was their language,eyes has their tale........
the mask was removed now by some divine ruling...
the pathway to their heart opened for each other.....
this few moments few Melody's.....few words later they hold each other heart.....
entangled each other finger they walk in the silence of night..towards the dawn for the same destination........
maaneet...........



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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautifully written...really nice..liked the song selction...
every thing was well potrayed
thanxs for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskanp

beautifully written...really nice..liked the song selction...

every thing was well potrayed
thanxs for the PM


the song kinda selected me..........😉
glad you liked it......😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 one.the song is vry nice n also the writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really loved it...
it is awesome dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i love d song so it was a treat.............really beautifully written.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I'M "SPEECHLESS😊"AWESOMLY WRITTEN OS DEAR👏👏JUST A BIG🤗FOR U😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Veryy well written.
Lovee the song.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -sann-

beautifully written....


thank you.........😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanku for a great update keep on rocking

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