Just Another East Side Story...**Complete-09/10** - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
oh that was so nice...
totally different and unique.....
trying to imagine maan and geet...
was adorable...
loved it
keep writing 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
spln...

thank you for the pm..tomiko..is right..
it is a fantastic work of art...and i could visualise everthing..

i am bowled over and look forward to reading the next two parts..

do send me a pm...

i am a fan...now..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
plz update the nxt part soon......your story is so interlinked that it seems hard to comment on a part separately....i am loving your writing...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
its good that geet finally has some sense knocked into her. I really like the characterization. Its pretty neat and interesting.
Waiting for the finale
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
Omg !!! Did I really recieve a PM from you for a story? And that too on Maneet, and did you just update this fast? Aaaah, its worth fainting. LOL. Okay, coming back from the drama queen act, I havent read it. Lemme read it and then post my *ahem ahem* two cents.
Much Love,
Arushi
PS: I am eagerly awaiting the next update on AOL. The weekend aint to far :P Heh
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Hey!

Although I see the characters from Geet, the story is much different from the series which makes me happier to read it since I am already weary of the original drama. I am not a big fan of Austen novels, so in the beginning i hesitated to give it a shot. But in the end I read it as I had fallen in love with your writing since when i read Unleashed...(yeh, I read it as a silent reader 😆 long back)

I liked the second part more than the first one simply because it had more about the girl and the boy in question! And, it was more character oriented and from Geet's POV...um..i dunno if that explained what I felt. Another point about this story is that it doesnt have any negative character or any complex twist..its a casual, simple and calm read throughout. No NT and Dev intrusions here! 😃

On a side note...I was reading one of your old AR FF and now this..lot of difference in the writing style..a gradual evolution in the style of writing, I suppose? Wonder what brought the change...

Waiting for the final chapter...

Anu


Edited by anu.happy4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Okay... so two chapters done... you will write part 3 right? On time? In this millennium? Just checking... 😆

Or do you need some persuasion lady NJ?

Eye for an eye....
I still dislike Victorian witches

😆

Oh yeah! Welcome to Geet forum SC (If you have forgotten what the endearment SC is... then... )... as a writer that is! 😆
Edited by -Sookie- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
hi..
can you add me to you pm list plz????
nice story....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Hey thats Awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it
Loved both the chapters
Loved Maan's concern towards Geet
Thanq soooooooooooooo much for the PM🤗
Pls Update Soon.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Excellent command of the language....and delivery of scene....i can literally visualize the scene as i read it!!👏

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