Just Another East Side Story...**Complete-09/10** - Page 4

Originally posted by: ansah

oh that was so nice...

totally different and unique.....

trying to imagine maan and geet...

was adorable...

loved it

keep writing 👏

Originally posted by: rushtrip

spln...

thank you for the pm..tomiko..is right..
it is a fantastic work of art...and i could visualise everthing..

i am bowled over and look forward to reading the next two parts..

do send me a pm...

i am a fan...now..

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

plz update the nxt part soon......your story is so interlinked that it seems hard to comment on a part separately....i am loving your writing...

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

its good that geet finally has some sense knocked into her. I really like the characterization. Its pretty neat and interesting.
Waiting for the finale
Sur

Originally posted by: Arushi.

Omg !!! Did I really recieve a PM from you for a story? And that too on Maneet, and did you just update this fast? Aaaah, its worth fainting. LOL. Okay, coming back from the drama queen act, I havent read it. Lemme read it and then post my *ahem ahem* two cents.

Much Love,

Arushi

PS: I am eagerly awaiting the next update on AOL. The weekend aint to far :P Heh

Originally posted by: anu.happy4ever

Hey!

Although I see the characters from Geet, the story is much different from the series which makes me happier yayy i'm glad =) to read it since I am already weary of the original drama. I am not a big fan of Austen novels (so you're team sookie then 😆), so in the beginning i hesitated to give it a shot. But in the end I read it as I had fallen in love with your writing since when i read Unleashed...(yeh, I read it as a silent reader 😆 long back) - aah, the silent ones!

I liked the second part more than the first one simply because it had more about the girl and the boy in question! yeh?! hmmm... so as a writer, i liked the flow in part1 more... but i suppose the criteria for my choice changes, cause i already knw the story, the chars are distinct in my head and so i care for words written that please me in their outcome over characters themselves at times... i feel it too, the lack in representing my characters clearly enough at times, just cause i know them so much better inside my head... duno, if im making sense to you now, but thats how it turns out to be for me several times! And, it was more character oriented and from Geet's POV...um..i dunno if that explained what I felt. Another point about this story is that it doesnt have any negative character or any complex twist..its a casual, simple and calm read throughout. No NT and Dev intrusions here! 😃 haha! yeh, im this strong believer of not needing bad characters to make things go wrong - although i can't always refrain from using them in my longer fictions - but fact is, there is plenty of grey in every character, even the good ones, when you're using it right ... misconceptions and lack of communication can play vamp like no human scheming mind can! although, for this particular story, ican't take much plot credit... since its so entirely inspired in its storyline! =)

On a side note...I was reading one of your old AR FF and now this..lot of difference in the writing style..a gradual evolution in the style of writing, I suppose? Wonder what brought the change...

thanks for saying that anu =) i know what you mean, exactly... i think its just come about as a gradual change, from all the fiction writing! its not about being good or bad as a story teller as such... its sort of constructing neighbourhoods of words, where words like good neighbours get along well! =) lets say, im learning!

Waiting for the final chapter...

shall be up tomorrow =) thanks for the thoughtful comment!

Anu

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Okay... so two chapters done... you will write part 3 right? On time? In this millennium? Just checking... 😆 yeh go on, laugh at my expense.. i have read a most recent teenage chic*** which 'taught' me how 'important' it is to be able to see others laugh at me, and laugh at myself too ... so now i'm a new, polished, stronger nj, hmph! 😆 [if you also want to learn 'such strong lady principles', ask me on chat and i shall name the bible which was so enlightening! 😆]

Or do you need some persuasion lady NJ?

Eye for an eye.... - what's the point though, when you'd use it without reading?! persuasion, btw, was good - AND different! .... in terms of her writing style that is... of course there was the girl, boy, and happily ever after!

I still dislike Victorian witches - me too! i like the guys 😆 (goes into pari mode) ohhhhhh my mr dreamyyyyy 😆

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Oh yeah! Welcome to Geet forum SC (If you have forgotten what the endearment SC is... then... )... as a writer that is! 😆 - how, with you around my dahlin' friend, can i afford forgetting SC?! 😡😆

Originally posted by: hemvb

hi..
can you add me to you pm list plz????
nice story....