Just Another East Side Story...**Complete-09/10** - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Kamini...what ever happened to the thing called "PM" just because I don't send any out doesn't mean you should follow suit!

Hmph! I am super miffed, but will be back to comment on the story. It will be sometime tomorrow, I am about to hit the sack soon, had a long and tiring day and I have yet to say my prayers...babaji will not be pleased"
Adios!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
I am not commenting till you actually finish this. You have started this trend of starting novel length short (as called by you) series and leaving your readers hanging just before its supposed to finish... remember Abhi-Nikki one? Ring any bells lady?

So finish this. And then I will write my essay.

S
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pebblez

Why didn't i get a reserved post on this?? *smacks her head and talks to self* because you never un-reserve it! Hmph!

So this i my reserve post, have to go pray Fajr...wapis ati! :D

Kiran



yaar mujh unpad ko Fajr ki duration bi bata jati thi?!!! as in, the wapis ati, is intended for which one of my 84 lac hindu lives?!!! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: simran1285

Kamini...what ever happened to the thing called "PM" just because I don't send any out doesn't mean you should follow suit!

Hmph! I am super miffed, but will be back to comment on the story. It will be sometime tomorrow, I am about to hit the sack soon, had a long and tiring day and I have yet to say my prayers...babaji will not be pleased"
Adios!




err - my thread just seem to be FULL of people who want throw something heavy, and capable of hurting with ALL their mights, AT ME! - geez!

dude, i didn't know you read GEET stuff, aite? in my defense that is... i mailed a total of less than 20 people who i just super human guessed might, MIGHTTTTTT be possibly inclined to read it up!

so there!

and i suppose this is the new 'in' excuse to reserve? going off to pray?! kiz bi yehi bolkar gayi upar tere!

but in the name of your respective allah and babaji - i believe you two shall come back, eventually! 😆

so long then simmi - did i say, its super good to hear back from you, always!
nj
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: anufa

interestinG!!!!

waiting for other parts!!!!



hi anufa!

thanks for the comment! hopefully you will enjoy reading it to the end, which isn't far away!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sookie-

I am not commenting till you actually finish this. You have started this trend of starting novel length short (as called by you) series and leaving your readers hanging just before its supposed to finish... remember Abhi-Nikki one? Ring any bells lady?

So finish this. And then I will write my essay.

S




now that is what i call a good premise! - very fairly, i have no justified ways to counter it, except by posting the 3 parts in time, and awaiting your essay thereafter ... so i shall be good and do that 😃 aren't you proud of my sense and sensibilities, sookie san?!!! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this looks good
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks sur and lallulal2010 =) hope you enjoy the new part too!

cheers,
nj
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey everyone,

part 2 is up on page 1 =)

enjoy reading!

cheers,
nj
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20

I didn't realise I had come to an end before I arrived at your siggy.

Once again a mesmerising part with a shirtless Maan to boot!😉 Geet's self-dialogue is not hard to imagine and the thought of what we're likely to find in chap 3 will keep me waiting anxiously until tomorrow!😃
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