Maan pulls aside Geet in HP and then..note-pg 14 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
beautifully written touched heart.loved thecomparision between maan and dev. really can feel the betrayal ofdev and selfless love of mann.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
hey Mandu its awesome yaar pls do continue iam waiting its so nice thkxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Very well written. Hope something in this line happens. Please continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
hi lovely story please add me in PM ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Mandu,
Congrats on a beautful ff!!
I read quite a few and can happily say yours is wonderful ..
I have sent you a friend request so that I can receive pm's whenever you update!!
Well done again!!
Uzma xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
hey mandu
nicely written ..
loved the story line it was wonderfuly done
add me to yur pm ..will be waiting for next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
lovely dear
just loved it
i am totally waiting for the next update.
do add me in the PM list
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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....Usse pata nahin ke usne mujhse ulajkar kitni badi galti ki hai....
Kyun kya hua Si...Geet trailed off as Maan swung a frowning countenance towards her..."Maan! Geet, Maan..samjhi tum?
Ab bolo bhi...kya keh rahi thi tum?
Haan ...woh...aapko kiska phone aaya tha..kya hua?
Maan gives a cold smile.. Mujhe khabar mili hai ki ek ghante main Rasika Rathod apne vakeel ke saath court pahunch rahi hai sunvai ke liye...usse to iss baat ki ilm bhi nahin ke main yahaan aa chuka hun.
Usne Hoshiarpur main mere khilaaf case darj karvakar apne liye musibat maul li...Maan singh Khurana. hun main.
Maan's phone rings and he is soon involved in a long discussion, snatches of the talk from his end sound like...Kaam ho gaya...tumne sab darj karwa liya?..uske aur projects...unke details....aur record?...market me unki standing?.. aur kuch?...hmmmm...acha...
suddenly thumping the steering well...
..Bas!...perfect...hum 10 mins main pahuch jayenge.....wahi milte hain, Miss Rathod ko welcome karne...yes.. fantastic...
Maan switches off the phone and is still thinking on it.
Maan...
Maan?
Maan still lost in his thoughts...smirking away to himself...
Suniye!!!
huh...Geet...Kya kaha tumne...Maan looking at her in happy astonishment...Tumne mujhe Suniye kehke pukara?...
Geet now embarassed ..nahin..aap sun nahi rahe the..maine aapko aapke naam se bhi pukara..par...and trails off while looking at Maan's smiling face...
starts sputtering and getting worked up...aap...yahan mujhe chinta ho rahi hai aur aapko mazak suj raha hain...
Looks up and quickly prays...Babaji, hamari madad karna..woh maan jaye aur inko jail na ho..pls...
Maan listening to Geet's babble with exasperation...Geet ...Rasika mera kuch nahi bigaad sakti...maine usse rokne ke sab intezaam kar liya hai...agar usne apna attitude nahi badla, toh uske liye accha nahi hoga...
Kya matlab?
Bas tum dekhti jao..
They arrive at the courthouse. Just as they are pulling in , two cars come to a screeching halt in front of the steps.
Rasika Rathod steps out of one of them, all made up, with a couple of flunkies with her, while the other cars disgorged two lawyer types, all hurrying up to hover around her.
Maan switched off his car and got out , a half smirk playing about his lips. Without acknowledging the whole crowd in front, Maan just went ahead to open the passengerside door and put his hand out to help Geet step out.
Geet takes it and steps out to stand beside Maan.
Rasika Rathod on seeing Maan, had this big smile on her face, thinking to herself...Mr Maan Singh Khurana...aapnemujhe apneoffice se nikala tha na..woh bhi ek mamuli employee ke liye..ab dekho maine tumhe yahan kaise khich kar bulaya hain...aap kuch nahi kar paye...
Seeing Geet stepping out from the car makes her pause...ye stupid ladki yahan bhi?..
Two men who were waiting to the side came forward and shhok hands with Maan...
Mr Khurana...ye lijiye...bilkul aapne kaha tha ..theek waise hi sab kaam kar diya hain..ye hain saare papers...
Thank you.
Turns towards Rasika Rathod who has now turned towards the steps and is about to go closer to climb them.
Miss Rathod...I want to speak to you.
Rasika turns with this big smirk and jeers..Kya baat hain Mr Maan Singh Khurana....ab mujhse baat karna chahte ho?
What happened to your attitude hunh?You talked rudely to me, me, Rasika Rathod and not only did you refuse my project but you insulted me for this ..this girl...What happened now...
laughs insultingly...now you have come to suck up to me...ha!
aur saath main isse bhi le aaye mujhse maafi maangne...
Just forget it...aise gavaron ki tarf mein dekhti bhi nahin..let alone listen to her...this loser...
..turns again...
while listening to her , maan's face getting positively grimmer and darker, and Geet shooting apprehensive looks towards him...he takes a half step towards Rasika, and Geet takes hold of his right hand giving him a beseeching look, while half- whispering..jaane do ..main maafi maang leti hun..aap gussa mat hona...
Maan gives her a pat on her hand and pushes her behind him...
Miss Rathod...it is in your interest to see these papers...before you go in....it is upto you.
Gestures to the men who had met with him and hands them the same papers they had just given him to give the same to her.
Rasika looks at the papers held out in front of her disdainfully, almost as if she would disregard them and walk away.
You better have your lawyers look at them before you take any step.
Maan takes out his glares from his pocket and coolly slips them on , takes Geet's arm and leading her to the car props both of them against it.
Seeing his nonchalance, Rasika gestures to her lawyers to take the papers and look at them...
They come forward and start perusing the same...Rasika starts tapping her foot impatiently...glaring away at Maan and Geet all the while.
Geet most anxious about the happenings looked from her towards Mann...Unable to see his expression behind his glares, she tugs at him and whispers...Suniye...
Maan turns towards her and smiles and slowly removes his glasses....Kahiye...both stare at each other , geet held helplessly in the warmth of his gaze, until a muffled shout from one of the lawyers breaks her thrall and she starts...
ye kya ho raha hain, she asks him..
Before he could answer, the lawyers go to Rasika and start showing her things from the papers...she is listening to them and then raises her head and swivels it in their direction and gives them a most baleful stare..they get her attention to some other things in them...
she finally snatches them in her hands, furiously crumpling them with an almost incoherent shriek of anger..
How dare you Maan singh Khurana....she began...almost spluttering in her anger...
Maan straightens and in an icy voice replies...How dare I?
You are the one who prodded me...I told you that I will not stand for anybody insulting Geet and would not work with you bacuse of that..but you would not let it go... you decided to provoke me and even now you were insulting her...What did you think?..that I would not retaliate?
You decided to drag me to Hoshiarpur, you thought that you would embroil me in legal troubles...then how could I not accomodate you for the same..?
If you do intend to continue working in this state, and you do not want me to bring these facts in these papers Ive had my lawyers prepare.... in front of the authorities...pauses here and says..
You better go in and take back your complaint.
Choking on her anger but unable to do anything about it as Maan had totally boxed her in with all that he had dug up on her Companies, Rasika looked at him in impotent anger and started shouting at her lawyers to go ahead and do the needful all the time shooting both of them poisonous looks. .
I will not forget all this...she began...
No you wont forget this in a hurry Miss Rathod...after all you havent come across someone like me before...Also..there is this other thing..you will have to sell me back all the development rights to this property here..Ive had my lawyers draw up the papers and dont worry, you are getting the current updated value for it...You will please sign that too before you go...
Looking at the papers Maan was holding out in front of her with an implacable smile, Rasika signed them with an impotent fury and stalked off to her car.
You better take the notarised paers back with you before you go, Maan called out to her receding back.
He handed the same over to his lawyers with instructions to register them and see that the complaint against him was dismissed.
As the lawyers left to do his bidding, Maan turned to Geet and seeing her standing there with an open mouth, he goes closer and with his finger under her chin, closes her mouth.
At that Geet , suddenly comes to and gives him a big hug while saying aapne to kamal hi kar diya,,,uski bolti hi bandh kar di...wahh..
suddenly realises what she is doing and brings her hands down and looks awkward...unable to stand his searching eyes..starts talking again....par aapne ye sab kab kia?..mera matlab hain..ye sab..lawyers, papers...haan un papers main kya tha ki woh aapki baat turunt maan gayi?
Maan was just about to say something when he is interrupted by his lawyers who have brought him the completed papers for the land in Hoshiarpur and also assure him that all of Rasika Rathod's complaints against him have been dismissed and that he is free to go.
At his nod they go to give a copy of the same to Rasika, who promptly drives out of there in a screeching cloud of dust,
Geet in the meanwhile decides to pray and thank Babaji for looking out for Maan and making everything all right.
Geet ab tum kya kar rahi ho..wapas khud se badbadane lagi kya?
Suniye...aap..mera matlab he..Maan aap yun baar baar mera mazak mat udayye..samjhe aap..main to sirf Babaji ko shukriya keh rahi thi...
Theek hai..chalo ab yahan se wapas chalte hain..main nahin chahta ke tum yahan ek pal aur bhi ruko.....agar kisine tumhe pehchaan liya aur tumhare ghar walon ko bataya, to pata nahin tumhara woh pagal..
.trails off...and taking Geet's hand and seating her in the car says..
Chalte hain..
Geet thinks to herself...Maan mere liye kitna sochte hain, mujhe aur takleef na ho, isiliye pehle to mere peeche yahan aa gaye, ye pura maamla sambhal liya,zameen wapas le li, aur mujhe yahan kuch na ho isi liye mujhe yahan se wapas le jaa rahe hain...
Geet apna seatbelt bandh lo...
Geet...
ye tumhe baar baar kya ho jata hain...kya soch rahi ho?
Ruko..main hi laga lete hoon.
As he turns to buckle in her seatbelt...Geet is studying his face, the strong jaw, the straight sharp nose, the thin perfectly shaped lips, the stubble on the sides of his lean cheeks, the long sooty eyelashes that fan over his cheeks , half screening his beautiful warm brown eyes that seem to look into her very soul...she is so lost in looking at him that it takes time for her to register those dreamy eyes now focussed totally on her face....
she starts feeling flushed in the warmth of his gaze, and tries to look away..he just half smiles ...
Geet exhales slowly, closing her eyes for a beat.
Chalein...Geet?
Geet opens her eyes....hmmmmm/
Chalein.... he repeats looking deep in her eyes..and Geet still lost in his eyes...murmurs...Haan Maan chalo ghar chalte hain....
Maan smiles, making Geet blink..mera matlab hain...
He puts the car in drive and is pulling out of the court yard onto the road...he passes a lady , who suddenly does a double take and stares after the car...
Geet...Geet...tum hi hona? ruko Geeet....
pls comment...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good???nooo!!! ITS BRILLANT TERRIFIC AND SOOOO CAPTIVAING👏..SO ROMANTIC SPECIALLY TUM MERI PATHNI HAI...👍🏼

sooooo fresh and i want soooooo much this to happen..please give al this ideas to cvs naa.a....please...............'

loved it/...do plz updat me the next one !!!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow amazing
Really No one can defeat Maan.
pls continue soon

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