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-SilverFlames-

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Posted: 15 years ago

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OMG..!! Jaz... 😭 That was just awesomeness..!! I love your tragedies.. (you need update the TaSha one too.. 😉

I love that song so much.. ❤️ But the way you described everything..

Just love your writing Jaz.. :D

Do PM mee if you write more.. =)

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311578

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

You made me cry girl! Kudos for this wonderful piece of writing.

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-Urvi-

@-Urvi-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

That was even more beautiful than your last one. Can it really get any better? (I'm saying that now, but I bet all of your OSs, should you choose to write any more, will just get better and better.)

Well done 👍🏼 and thank you 😊

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Main jaa rahi hoon, aur aapne saath woh saare gham leke jaa rahi hoon joh khabi aapa tha hi nahin. Aapni asoon, aapni kismat aur aapna daard leke jaa rahi hoon. Woh saare yaadein leke jaa rahi hoon joh aapne mujhe diya hai. Woh umid, woh khudaari, woh swabhimaan leke jaa rahi hoon, joh aapne mujhme jagaya hai. Woh pyaar joh aapne mere dil mein jagaya, woh roshni joh aapne meri zindagi mein bhara…woh bhi lekar jaa rahi hoon" she said.

She took a moment and smiled down at him.

"Jaate jaate, kuch aapke paas chodkar bhi jaa rahi hoon," she said as tears stung her eyes. "Mera dil, meri jaan, meri aatma, meri kushiyaan, meri aashayein…saab aapke paas chodkar jaa rahi hoon..

Jaz it was so beautiful..and chill i dont mind tragedy..these dialogues were out of the world..u really made me cry..gosh..

But thanks forthe PM..would love to read more and

ya just a friendly advice..when u write hindi thodi si gramatical errors hain..toh thoda dhyan dena..u want i will tell u here also..just let me know..its just that it hinders when u reading thats all..othereise its beautiful..hope u dont mind me telling that..

no offence

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

@ mchopra: hindi is not my first or second or even third language...its the best i can do...take it or leave it

JAZ

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Niroo

@Niroo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

i like how i didn't get a pm :( i m sad.............

n this OS made me sad.............. :*(

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

jaz: i told u it was just a friendly advice..nothing more than that..its beautiful i told that thats why i asked u to PM and thats why i read it coz i loved it..pls..i already said no offence..i am sorry if u felt that way..i didnt mean it to be.. and i still want my PM next time we have a OS

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Beautiful

Loved the portrayal...nargis directed me here...am so glad I read this

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Angie

@angel82

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Jaz , that was beautiful !! very very touching...trust you to convey emotions so beautifully thru words...Do write more and please do continue PMing me...I'd love to read !

luv

Angie

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sana

@Sananya09

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Whoa whoa whoa! First of all thanks uber much for the PM 😃 Cause i swear if i hadn't read this - im missing something in life 😆 .. Secondly, you are and ah-mazing writer and you really potrayed geet's feelings so well -- or so some of us can guess! I really love geet and sometimes i feel as if people pay more attention to maan's thoughts/etc. but this passage is just really wow... the diolouges and everything are magnificent! If Geet does ever leave -- she should leave just like this!!

- Sana

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