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Tressa

@Tressa

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

superb yaar.... beautifully written... I loved Geet's dialogues.. Love really hurts a lot..

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

OMG....it was sooo heart warming but lyk last tym i expected d proposal par also 😳😒!!

it was relly awsum though.....very very sad!!!.........i relly tot Maan wud wake up n ask her sumthin ..!!
but dis was unexpected....!! u srsly r a gr8 ri8er.....
shud try on a bigger level!! 😊

tc n keep up d gud work!!
T@$

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Hi Jaz,

That was heart wrenching OS. I love ur writing style...u do emotions' so well!

-Sona

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Great to have u here Jaz 😃
The OS was BRILLIANT !!
I liked this one more than the previous one.😛😃
Very well written 👏
I loved the "HERE and THERE" part.It was awesomely written😉
I wish to hear these lines from Geet
".... she knew him better than she'd like to admit. She saw his eyes when he said he didn't remember. For a moment, just a quick moment, his shield failed him and she's seen past his lie. For a moment, just a quick moment, his shield failed him and she'd seen into his heart. For a moment, just a quick moment, his shield had failed him and she'd seen his pain. For a moment, just a quick moment."
very nice dialogues and written very well 👍🏼
Great job Jaz.....luv ittt😊

Edited by Innocent02 - 15 years ago

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

That was really very senti

The way u expressed Geet's feelings it was fab

Jus loved it

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441240

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

that was so sad..... 😭 very well written and enjoyed reading it......⭐️

why don't you open a thread for all your maaneet oneshots????

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Sireesha

@.sireesha.

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Loved it Dear but thats so painful

Loved ur way of writing

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Amerra

@esquire1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Wow!! the best one shot i've ever read!!really loved and you my friend have a great imagination!! loved the description!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 -amerra

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mehreen.

@mehreen.

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Hey,

Wonderful work once again😃......You are really good at depicting emotions...👏

But i'd love it more if it weren't that sad...First the episodes these days...And then these kind of OS's 🥺...Hope you make up to it by writing a romantic OS..😛...haha i'm demanding😆

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Welcome back "tragedy" queen!😃 Missed your tragedy FFs/SS/OS's!! 😳

Loved the OS though babes..agree w/you..not everything is always "happy ending" ..figured that out in KS and Kis Desh forum!! 😔 🤔

Like it told u..u made my day yest and today, umm..yeaa..again made my day!! ❤️

Gr8 work babes 🤗

Edited by Pachu.P - 15 years ago