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Roshni

@Roshni.

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Jaz...I don't know where I reserved my post!😕😳

This was so so so sad! Yaar, you know very well to rise the emotions in us!
I usually have the habit of imagining things...but sometimes that can be disadvantageous!😭
This was very sad to imagine and bring the pictures in your mind!

Highlight of this OS was:

He suddenly flinched and instantly she held her breath, afraid that he'd woken up. Afraid that if he looked at her the way he did – like he knew her body, mind and soul – then she'd never be able to leave. She'd never be able to make this sacrifice for him. She thanked God when he didn't awaken.

Please do continue writing! I wish you never get writer's block!

PS: You are psychology student..you you'll know why I imagine all the OS!😉 My brain is right sided!😉
PPS: ^ That comment was unwanted but just a thought to let you know!😉

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flowergirl_O

@flowergirl_O

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

just like truly madly deeply this was another one of your best work i swear...both of those ff's are like different point of views...one of maan and one of geet...they both love eachother and think hurt the other so leaves because that's what the other wants...geet said to let her go and decided he would...maan says to go so she goes...except this had a sad ending...but i still loved it cuz eventhough it has a sad ending...it didn't matter cuz you wrote it so beautifully...my favorite part was when you said de made a hole and maan healed that hole...that was the best part of this update...it is so true that dev gave geet so much pain but even if it was unintentionally he made her a happier person...the other thing is i would want this to happen in the show and at the same time i don't want it to happen...if it happens geet would finally confess her love and maybe after she leaves and maan wakes up and he knows he loves her so he would go to get her back and that's when geet goes to pinky and tells her how maan told her to go and it would be like the other ff where maan hears geet's confession and confesses...but i don't want it to happen becausse what if all that dosen't happen...anyways i loved and thank you so much for one of the best sad story ever👏👏👏👏👏
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Soni

@soni-zee

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

You are truly an awesome writer Jaz👏, the way you describe Geet thought, just wow😳

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ruchi

@macho_muffin

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

TWIN!!!!

i am sooooooooooooooo sorry I haven't been replying to any of your msgs....i was sick...*sob*....now i am feeling a little better and ofcourse the first thing i do is sneak away with my laptop to my room😆....but thanks for your concern....i missed you too!!!❤️....and now the OS...*GASP*...how could you??...sad ending??...and what is this i am hearing about my twin being a tragedy queen?? *bigger GASP*....dude i m a sucker for happy endings so i have a feeling we might have issues later with your endings😆....i pressed like only cuz it was beautifully written and the way you captured Geet's emotions was just soo touching....but still, no happy ending? don't worry cuz instead of belans and chappals, i will be coming with my bulldozer...ya i have a pink and sparkly imaginary bulldozer for things i don't like....haha.....just to let you know, everytime its not hunky dory, you owe me double happy happy stories....yes i am totally not demanding😆and its a win win situation for me cuz i get more stories from you😉....soo now i will be moving on to your next OS and it better end happily or else you will have an angry twin to deal with!!

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Tia

@tes_v1

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Hey Jaz,

This is one beautifully written one-shot! The feelings and emotions were amazingly portrayed. I won't complain about the separation of Maan and Geet bcoz there are other feelings and situations which need equal expression as love.

You're a great writer!

Would appreciate it if you'd drop a PM the next time you come up with something.😳

cheers,
Tia

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ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Jaz, my tragedy queen,

How are you? Hope you remember me back from Kis Desh forum.

As always brilliant. I love how your thoughts flow without any hitch. It was heart wrenching but it was beautiful.

Love,
Ash

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