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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
Oye Jaz, u planned to send me in direct one way flight Rab de kol or what ? 😆 Yaar that was beautifully written, dare i say it again BEAUTIFUL.
Just amazing here and perfect there.
Too much to handle, too touchy not to be felt 👏👏
ok i copied ur style of writing to tell you the sentences i loved the most, i admire ur sense of writing, the way u twist every sentence and add the perfect emotion.
My fave sentence would be " huting her here, carressing her there" 😳😳
and " look at his stubble gain before going" 😆😆
Why i am laughing to this last phrase? That was at the same time so heart wrentching 😭
But i loved it, please keep writing OS, because i've become a HUGE fan of YOU 😃
What did i just read tragedy queen huh? Werent u the Jz who used to drool over JW black boxer??? 🤣 ok i wont open ur secret here .... *cough cough*
Lets be serious, so where was i? Yeah do write more Tragedy queen 😛
Love,
Humera 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
although it was sad.....

but still i find it mind blowing....luved iT!!!!


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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Jaz Babes u r one of the BEST Writters on IF 👏 I mean i actuallly Felt Geet's Pain here 😔 when she said "Main jaa rahi hoon, aur aapne saath woh saare gham leke jaa rahi hoon joh khabi aapa tha hi nahin. Aapni asoon, aapni kismat aur aapna daard leke jaa rahi hoon. Woh saare yaadein leke jaa rahi hoon joh aapne mujhe diya hai. Woh umid, woh khudaari, woh swabhimaan leke jaa rahi hoon, joh aapne mujhme jagaya hai. Woh pyaar joh aapne mere dil mein jagaya, woh roshni joh aapne meri zindagi mein bhara…woh bhi lekar jaa rahi hoon" ----
Amazin 👏 i mean i actually felt it 😔
and then When she Kissed him on his Forehead Awwwwwwwwwww 😔
i dont Care this is the sad OS by u n which i would even kill u 😡 😆
Cuz behoooodi CV's Aren't givin us Happy scenes n so r u 😡 😆
Buh stilll LOVED it ! i mean this Bought Tears in ma eyes 😔
Jaz u r amazin !!!
kay by u givin us bact to back 2 Maneet OS 😉 now i expect a new OS everyday by u 🤣
Love u Jaz ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
Haaaww!!U R Sooo Bad!!!😡😆I was like he'll wakeup now...now...now n u!!!u end it just like tht!!😡😆😆😆😆
BTW It was nice but no confession😭
Tumhe toh tumhari next update mein dekhlungi!!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
awesom FF👏👏
i was so hoping that Maan wud get up and stop Geet and then there wud be a passionate hug😳
never mind.
but still loved it😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Jaz Ma Chappal is Ready for u 🤣 u Drama Queen 😡 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
wow i am speechless
that was wonderful
geet u are brave girl this is your testing time
don't worry god is just testing you
maan will come back to you
he will as he has no other destination
u are his home destination and destiny
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
just one word-BEAUTIFUL⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
tumne to yahan hamlet bana diya............beautifully written oneshot
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
That was an amazing write-up.....!!! Though it was extremely sad....😭 But I know...Maan will have caught up with her and brought her back into his life....!!!!!😳

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