ONE SHOT(plz comment) another part;pg10 MAAN BHAI) - Page 5

Hey! Mina.....!!!!😉

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hey u writing short stories kya .....plz continue dem.....atleast till der romance blossom .....luvd all ur bits

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awesome os

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so beautiful

"maan bhai... woh tera se bikul nhai daar raha hai" the young boy said, to a maan's back at him;maan was wearing a jacket wid the hood up on his head

"usko apun ki baat nai smaj ah-ri... apun ka dil kar raha kay ek sala ki koperi mean gora maar-ru... tu uski ahkal ti-kana ahh ja yeh gi"

maan: yaar titu saber, saber ka pal hamsha meetha hota hai... toh--

tito: haan haan saber... likan maan bhai uski itney jurat ka usney maan bhai... yehni ap pe case kar diya..

maan gaves a crimal laugh and faces tito: yaar woh engra-gi (english) mein kha khata hai... fill, nha nhai, pill... yaar woh kya hota hai... haan yaad aye chill

tito laughs: maan bhai, apun tera ko acha se jaanta hai, kuch na kuch to tera dimaag main chal raha hai... hannah?!

maan laughs: bikul tik titu betaa... ab maza aya gay

maan started pacing around, and dev cums in baggy jacket wid ripped jeans 4om the knees

dev: woh bhai ho gaya hai

maan laughed more

titu: kya ho raha

dev: woh ha-na handa... yaar wohi brij handa... jisney maan bhai pe case kiya ha

titu nods his head

dev: uski beti ko outa liya hai

titu: kidnap

maan: nhai beti-nap

all three started laughing

geet: chora mujhai.... papaa... papaa

maaan looked at the gurl, her arms were knoted behind her back wid a tite rope... her curly hairs were covering her face... she was putting a tough battle wid ritesh who was holdding her 4om her back

geet: choraa... papaa

dev: idhar koi papa wa-pa... nhai hai samji

geet looked up, and saw three sacry men staring at her... well at least 2and a half men staring at her, tears rolled down her checks

tito: chor dey gay tumko... jab tera baap samj jaya ka

geet: kya...

she cryed more, and tito being the youngest felt treiable, he walked up towards her

tito: didi roh (cry) mat

dev: ahh tu didi kis ko bul raha hai??

tito: maan bhai dekh na, bechari kitna roh rahi hai...

tito wiped off her tears: ay ritesh chor isko

dev: tito yeh ko kya kar raha hai? maan bhai kuch kho na isko

maan was speachless he didnt nw wot to say, he had neva seen such a inocent face... big brown eyes, the perfect facail feauters... she was just PREFECT

dev: maan bhai kuch bolo naa

maan: haan tito, woh ja yaha se... dev tum bhi jao

tito went to maan asked him to bend down a lil bit and whispered in his ear: maan bhai plz didi ko daarna mat...

tito and dev lelt, geet just stood thier scared/ nervous and maan started walking towards her... he opened da knot on her hands... and saw her wrists red...

maan: yeh ritesh bhi na

he touched her wrists and geet moved back, maan moved more forward... this happened till geet bumped into a wall and maan standing close to her...

maan: tera naam ka hai

geet's big eyes had widened more:

maan: samj nhai ah rahi kya... naam kya hai

geet in breaking low voice: ge..ge...et

maan: geet?

geet nodded her head...

maan held her wrist softly, and looked deep in her eyes

geet: woh.. wohh

maan: kya woh woh??

geet looked away, maan gave her sum space still holding softly her wrists

maan: acha tumne mera naam pochna hai?

geet nodded her head in no way

maan looked at her rectangular...

geet: nhai wohh

maan: phir wohh

OKAY tell me if i should count this OS...??? promise i will, cuz i have g8 idea in my mind, bt i was just wondering if u guyz would like maan to be a BHAI?? hehehe anyways plz doo comment, and yea i have put up a table on content on pg1 as well as a pm list...so plz check it out, and sum of u guyz missed my os on page 2... plz read it and comment! 😃

hey..that was awesome...really loved it

Arey u shuld hav continued it yaar