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Originally posted by: vinithaa

so HOT.....i need some water😉😉😉😉 it was so romantic i cant explain with words....

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--------vinithaa

awww thanksss sooo mucchhhh 😃😃

Hey i wrote this wen the lite was out for about 2hours or sumthing... 😕 anways hope u like it... i have edited, and read this for more then 10times already bt if they are still mistakes im soriii

Kids laughed as they walked by geet... geet smiled at thier innocence... 'totaly adorable" she thoted to herself, the place was full of people... veriwhere, there was nosie... there was happyness, there was ligths almost everywhere... just the way geet liked it!

"god i just love weddinggss... everyone getting together to make a man and women married to one another... so sweet" geet thoted to herself

she had no idea whos marriage it was, she was just walking by, and happened to see a marriage hall, and entered it "i wonder kab meri shadi hogi... god i bet will be sooo dreamy" geet again lost in her thots "such beauitful colours... red mixed wid green and sum of pink... gosh this is sooo beauitful" just den she saw a angry-- yet hot maan cuming towards her in total anger which had scared her...

maan: kya ho raha.... who are you... god main tak gaya hoon kicking unwanted guest 4om this marriage... i feel like a security gurad.... GET OUTT

geet knew she wasnt reali lookin ready for a marriage, cuz of her clothes wearing skinny jeans and t-shirt on top, wid lite make up and hairs in braids

maan: WOT DO I KEEP ON HAVE REPEATING MYSELF... GET OUT

geet thoted: gosh i nw im uninvited likan show me sum respect like

geet: kon ho tum?? "well obvisouly a invited guest he is"... geet thoted to herslef... she could tell by his clothes they were a lite brown coloured sharvani

maan: wah main kon hoon, nw do i have to give explainations of main... MAIN kon hoon???

geet: baat toh asey kar raha ho jisey koi vip guest ho

maan thinks: dat does it...

maan: IM A VIP GUEST BT WHO ARE YOU

geet: gosh would u quite screaming... tumhara gala bait jaya gay

maan: oh just shut up

geet opens her mouth: shut up.... u shut upp... ek toh kab se apni bas-ti per bas-ti (insult) karwa rahi hoon, thinking you would stop nw... likan so much attuide... like who do you think off urself??? huh prince charles ka koi ristadar??? shakal dehkey hai apne... jisey koi gariff ho... lamba saa, batameez insan na ho khahain kay

maans mouth droped open at her: gariff i have thousands of gurls dying on me, just so i can lay on eyes on them, and just make them spend sum luxuirs time wid me soo just shut up

geet: phir shut up... no i wont shut up

maan: tum kon ho... is shadi main tumhare koi kaam hai kya???

geet: haan hai, im here 4om the boys side-- geet bit her lip at dat bt den thoted agar main yeh nhai khati toh yeh chup kasey karta...

maan: larka wala ki taraf sa ho kya??

geet nodded her head

maan: fi9 tell me... wots the grooms name

dadimaa: dev... offcourse she nws... maan kub se main dekh rahi hoon, bechari kay pechay he par gay hoo

maan: plz... she is nt invited... i made the inviation list

dadi: yes, bt u remeber i had to put sum addition names in it... and dats wen i put her name in it

maan: w/e, she is nt lookin ready for marriage

geet: dats cuz i came 4om work,

dadi: and her clothes are up in the room

maan: how do u nw her?

dadi: why r u asking so many questions?? go and njoy

maan: njoyy..??!! ha-ha sure sure--- saying dat he leaves 4om thier

geet: umm, i leave nw... thanks for ur help

dadi: arey kadir leave.. no ways u have to stay here, and njoy the rest off the wedding aur wasey bhi abhi tak toh bride bhi nhai ayi hai... and i reali need a good helping hand, like u have probaly seen whowm im working wid...

geet laughed: yes... he is a veri fustrated person

dadi: yea... bt i guess situations made him like dat

geet: u nw him

dadi: yes im her dadimaa... sadlyy woh mera grandson hai

geets jaws droped open once again: woh apka...

dadi: yes... and i nw, he is a treibale person -- dadi smiled

geet: likan maine toh itna kuch kya diya... ap ko bura laga ho gay... im reali sorri

dadi: oh plz, dont say sori, eva again... i told u i nw how he is... his mother and father passed away wen he was 4yrz old in a car accident, he had becum veri quite since then...

geet: quite?? geet smiled and dadimaa also smiled

dadi: no beta, i mean quite as in.. busi wid work work work... no time for fun, like maan njoys his time sitting in dark... even rite nw, he hates all these colours he just cant wait till this marriage is over... the onli reason he came was cuz this marriage is of his brother

geet: brother...

dadi: yea... oh baatein mein time kay pata nhai chala... cum i will get u dressed

geet: dressed... likan

dadi: likan wikan kuch nhai, i forgot to ask... wots ur name..

geet: geet,

dadi thinks: geet... maan weds geet... so prefect i can see the wedding banner rite nw

geet: woh i was just walking by here, after work, and saw this marrige hall, as i just love marriages so i entered

dadi: no prob... cum

maan thoted: UFF kya larki thi... she was a blast in her talks and looks... wot m i saying... she was okay... bt she compared me to a gariff, like plz im nt that bad looking... infact a thousand gurls die on me

dev: arey maan tum abhi tak idhar ho, go and change ur clothes nain tara will be cuming any time nw

maan: yea yea i will go

dev: and bro thanks for cuming in my happeness ur the best bro evaa

maan: i nw dat

dev: okay nw go and changee

dadi took geet to the room and in that room they were two door which lead to small changin rooms, dadi gave geet sum clothes and sent her to the room inside told her to change quickly and help around, geet changed quickly into the clothes and came out looking herself in the mirror and left her duppata in the room

geet thinks: wow, this is sooo amazing

geet was wearing a black lah-ga wid a small choli which was full of gitter, of mixed colours

geet: just get this dori shut and i will be out in no time

maan: whos there??

suddenly the other door opened and maan steped out to see his eyes had widen at her looked and his mouth droped open onces again cuz of her

geet saw him he was looking too hot in black sharvani wid half of fornt open she could cleary see his muslces... den geet relazied she was nt wearing her duppatta and turned around, and maan saw her bare back which made him move sum steps close to her and den suddenly she rembered her doris nt shut so she again turned aorund to face him rite in the eyes... geet felt no shame dat she was wearing no duppata infornt of this man who she just met a half hours back, geet thoted: why cant i lower my eyes down... gosh his eyes are like a spell.... maan thinks: such beauitfull eyes, i have nt seen til date, big borwn eyes, i just wish i could stare her all day geet atlas geet felt sum shame and lowered her eyes

geet gulped down her spits: woh umm

maan suddenly moved back: wohh... tum yahan??

geet ran to the room and got her duppata... while she was running her dori were hitting her at the back and she could feel maan staring at her

maan thinks: look away maan look away his head kept on saying bt his heart wasnt agreeing at all

geet took the dupata around her and truned around

maan: tumhari dori

geet looked down embrassed, bt 4om sumwhere got the guts to say: prevert

maan: prevert... --maan had neva felt this embrassed eva b4 "nhai i was just saying

saying dat he lelt

geet: omg wot just happened... goshh, woh agar prevert hai toh main kya hoon??

geet went again and looked in the mirror her checks were red as a cherry: uff

geet again tried tieing her dori together

maan went downstairs back to the marriage,

maan: N.T has still nt reached

dadi: nhai abhi dar hai

maan: kitni aur daar... agar aur daar hui na, ima leave

dadi: leave... maan no u cant leave,, acha tel me, did you see geet

maan: geet?

dadi: the gurl... in jeans, t-shirt..

maan thinks: her name is geet... and smirk to himself

dadi: telme did u see her

maan: g dadimaa, she was changin her clothes

dadi: u wana c if she is ready or nt

maan: why dont u go

dadi: i have to deal wid the guests

maan: i will deal wid dem

dadi: oh plz maan, u and talk politly to guests hahahaaa joke of the day, u will start yelling them or critizing them, plz leave the handlin of guests to me, and u go and geet get, as i bet she will be a beta, sweeter and nicer person to talk to

dadi leaves 4om thier

and maan wid a naughty smile of his face enters the changing room and doesnt see geet in thier, and he gets sad and is about to leave wen he hears

geet: god why is this sooo hardd

the voice is cuming 4om the small changin room

maan swings opens the door and sees geet hands behind her back trying to shut the dori, geet suddenly looks back and is suprised to see maan yet again face to face wid her

maan: woh dadimaa is callin you maan said wid lowering his eyes so geet wouldnt call him a prevert

geet: woh mujse meri dori baandh nhai ho rahi, kab se khaish kar rahi hoon

maan: u want me to help

geet just looked at him stunned, his eyes lowed.. .which had already made respect for him in geets eyes, so geet trustin him "hmm" turned around and maan looked up maan hand had sweat in them bt his fingers were veri cold he rubbed his hands wid his clothes, he went and picked up the 1st dori, trying nt to touch her skin, wen he was joinging the 1st dori wid the secound he touched her skin which was veri soft, geet felt his cold fingers touch her, which made her move a step ahead, they both got butterflies in thier stomics, maan moved another step towards her and tied a prefect knot, nt to tight not to lose

maan: its done

maan left the small changing room into the big one and geet took her duppata and came out

geet: thank you

maan smiled and opened the room door for her

geet steped out and followed her

dadi: LOVELY geet aur maan u both look amazingg together

maaneet both stared at one anothe akawrdly

dadi: mera mutlub hai, u both look amazing in black... together

geet smiled and maan also gave a sligth smile

mr. and mrs. singh came

mr. singh: this marriage is soo azaming, people will remeber this for years

dadi: i dont want people to rember this marrige for years cuz veri soon im goin to invite you in maans marriage

mr and mrs. singh gave big smiles at maan

mrs. singh: whose this?

dadi: this is geet, my veri specail guest

geet: namaste aunty uncle

dadi: u guyz chat i wil be back

geet and the singhs started talkgin as if they knew each other for years, maan just stood thier quite adoring geets beauty, geet on and off felt maan staring at her, bt weneva she would look at him he would look away and geet would just smile

a radom guy cums: arey wot r u guyz doing here,,, aao dehko dulhan ay gayi hai

ever1 ran outside the marriage hall even geet was about to go wen maan held her dupata and geet came to a sudden stop

maan: why is it that u talked veri sweetly wid the singhs and rudely wid me

geet: dats cuz i treat people da way they treat me

maan lets go of her dupata and came infornt of her

maan: so if i talk nice wid u, u will talk even sweeter?

geet looks at him confusing eyes and just nods her head

maan: so if i say u look reali preaty in this dress wot will u say

geet: r u actuly saying that i look good in this dress, or are u just playing wid ur words to confuse me

maan: idk, wot do u think?

maan moved steps forward her and geet moved back

maan: telme wot do u think

geet: i think nuthing

saying that she ran off and maan started smiling

maan: this feeling, i have neva felt this feelin b4... bt as long as it is a gud feelin i dont mind

maan also went outside to see ever1 was entering so he stayed back

N.T and dev went and sat on the stage, ever1 had entered bt maans eyes sreached for geet, he couldnt find her anywhere, lookin for geet he saw dadimaa instead

maan: dadimaa apne geet ko dekha?

dadi: sumtime back u were anoyed by the name geet and nw u wana nw where she is??

maan: just tel me do u nw where she is or nt??

dadi smiles: she is outside welcuming the gurls side guests

maan ran outside and saw geet talking to guests and welcuming dem, maan went and stood rite beside her

geet smiled at him, and maan again gave a small smile

geet looks at the end: seems like larki ki taraf se itney hi guest hai

maan: yea looks like it

geet started goin inside wen maan called her name

maan: geet

geet again came to a sudden stop and turned around

maan: telme, tumko kuch na kuch toh lagta ho ga??

geet smiled: mujhai kuch bhi nhai lagta... cuz im engaged

maan thinks: engaged... nhai geet cant be engaged cuz she onli belongs to mee... to me, wot m i sayingg

maan doesnt say anything and walks pass her, wen her dupata tangles up in seleve, geet walks up to him, tryin to losesen the tangle

geet: arent u gonna ask who im engaged too??

maan just look at her eyes who are lowred busi tryin to open the tangle

geet: im engaged to ricky

maan: ricky... veri common name

geet: arent u gonna ask wots rickys full name

maan: no

geet: bt i will tell anyways, ricky singh

geet blust out in laughter

maan: ricky singh... mr and mrs. singhs son... who is 9 years old???

geet: yea he asked me to marry him, and i could posibly say no!! geet just cant stop laughing at him, cuz he face looks to cute

maan: geetttt

geet: kya geet, u asked me alot of question till we have met, how about i ask u a question... why did it matter to you, if i was engaged or nt??

maan doesnt nw wot to answer

geet: telme...

maan: it matters to me cuzz...

geet: cuzz

maan: cuz

maan moves his head down at her and she brings her head up... both together say "cuz" and smile maan bends down a lil more... geet could feel his breathing on her face maan gets a more of a naugthy smile geet shuts her eyes, and there lips collpase wid one another... maan licks her down lip and top lip and geet just cant stand still after feelin da most beauitful ffeelin eva in life, maan holds her secure in his hands 4om her wasit and she ties her hand his neck and countines to kissing and wid his tougue he wants to get inn.. and geet opens her mouth for for making them have a tougue fite together geet stands on her tippy toes to try 'n' reach his heigth bt it wont matter whos taller or nt... geet felt as if she is in hevan her eyes still closed... suddenly geet starts to feel lite headed and stops making out wid the same kinda enthusiasum, where as maan has just begin showing her love, bt he relazied sumthing isnt rite and lelt her lips and as well garsp for sum air

maan breathin fast: kya hua??

geet also breathing fast: nhai kuch nhai

geet is abou to leave wen she rembers her dupata is still tangled in his selve, she makes it go free and quitely leaves 4om thier and maan thinks wot happened to her??

in the marriage hall geet drinks sum water and catches her breath wen sum1 tuggs her shoulder geet frigthened looks back to see dadimaa

dadi: kya hua geet... sab tik hai naa

geet: g dadimaa everthing is fi9,

dadi: acha, cum here, dev aur N.T phera lena laga hain

geet happyly goes and sees them getting married and throws flowers on dem and thinks "maan aur mera beech jo hua nhai hona chaya tha... like i bet i m just another gurl who maan will date... and leave... as he even said he always has gurls dieing on him... " lost in her thots she suddenly feels sum1 throwing flowers straigth at her, she turns back and sees maan

geet: maan, idher nhai oder

maan: oder nhai idher

geet smiles and thinks: kitna convincing hai maan ki akkhen... likan nhai i cant posibly think of anything liek dat

maan: y did u leave like dat

geet looks down: nhai kuch nhai...

maan: dont lie

dev and NT's phera get finished and they again go and sit on the sofa on the stage and maan grabs geet by her hand and takes her outside the marriage hall

maan: telme

geet: wen there is nuthing to tell, den wot should i tell you...

maan: anything... everything about you... ur work... friends... hobbies... parents

geet: my parents also passed away wen i was 5yrs old

maan: also... did dadimaa tell about

geet: yes... bt look at me... im such a happy go lucky person... wen me and you have quite similar childhood, bt u on the other hand is rude... mean... gariff!

maan: gariff?!

geet: yes gariff

maan: if ima gariff den ur a...a....a... billi

geet: billi??

maan: yes a cute big eyed... BILLI

geet laughs and maan also laughs

maan again moves forward her: so telme... ur hobbies

geet: i like to read... hang out wid my friends... and play basket ball

maan: basket ball

geet: yes

maan: so how maby friends do u have

geet: alot.. bt my closet friends are pinky and adi

maan: adi??

geet: he is JUST a reali god friend

geet again laughs

geet: i think sum1 is callin mee...

maan: it sounds like dadimaa

geet: i will go

both maaneet enter the hall together

dadi: geet beta i was lookin veri where for you

maan: yea it got reali conjested... so me and geet went out

dadi: acha cum geet i wana interdouce dev and NT to you

geet followed dadimaa and maan followed geet to the stage

dadi: kids this is geet... my everi specail guest

geet mets dem and the photographer says a photo plz

geet sits wid NT at one the side and maan sits wid dev at the other side, they pose for the pictures and smile

geet gets off and looks at the time... its 2am

geet: itna late hogaya... mujhai pata bhi nhai chala...

geet goes to dadimaa

geet: dadimaa i have to go nw... bhoot late hogya hai, my friend.. .who i live wid must be worried for me

dadi: likan geet

geet: plz dadimaa...

dadi: fi9, likan 2morrow after marriage party and u have to cum

geet nodded her head hugged dadimaa and left for the changing room she quickly changed into her jeans and t-shirt

and maan opened the door

maan: ur leaving.. and u wont even telme??

geet: yea.. u were busi, so dats why i left

maan: left... dat easily... look i nw sumthing happened telme... plzz

geet gets a teary eye

maan wipes of her tear: dont cry... it hurts

geet looks at him

maan: it hurts in my heart... dont cry

geet: well im just another gurl in maans life... u have wana have 'it' and den leave me... i bet u have tons of gurls cuming and goin out of ur life, and i probaly just another gurl

maan laughs and geet looks at him confuse

maan: agar dadimaa mera barey mein... mera parents or mera personailty ka barey main bata hai toh... den did she nt tell you about my love life?

geet shakes her head in no

maan thinks: geet ne abhi mujhay tang kiya ta... ricky singh... hmmm this is a gud idea

maan: geet, all i can say is jitney dar tum mera saath ho, itney daar tumhey kisse bhi baat sochna ki zururat nhai hai... i promise i will give you a time of ur llife, as i hve wid others i have pervouily dated-- maan smrik

geet just looks plain at him: im sori,, i cant

she is about to leave wen---

dadimaa enters: geet so u r leaving... how about, maan leaves you home...

maan: sure dadimaa

dadi: itney kuhsi se...?? dadi thinks yes the weding bannerrr maan weds geet

dadi leaves

maan: chalu

geet: i will go by myself

maan: toh dadimaa ko bata thi... nw she has felt me wid ur responsiblilty

geet: i can manage myself veri well

saying dat geet leaves

geet: chali toh main ayi hoon, likan is time pe koi cab... milli gi kya??

maan: nhai milli gi

geet turns back to see maan, in jeans and a dress shirt

maan: ajeeb ho tumm... cumm

geet: no

maan: yes

geet: just leave me alonee

maan: no

geet: yes

maan: cum wid me or i have other ways to make u cum wid mee

geet: wot other ways??

maan walks reali close to her and whispers in her ear: do u reali wana nw

sending chills through her body bt she still confindent says "YES"

maan smiles and picks her up in his arms and takes her to the car... geet moves her legs sayin put me down put me down, bt maan acts like as if he cant hear anything, he unlocks the car door wid the key remote and puts geet down holding her hand and tells her to sit bt geet just stands thier studborn

maan: so u r nt goin to sit...are you?

no reply

maan again picks geet up like a baby and makes her sit down in the seat and shuts the door, maan cums and sits down at the driver seat

maan and smiles and irraates geet and she tries to open the door bt it is no use

geet: ur door isnt opening

maan: reali... why... oh i rmeber i put on the baby lock... for my babby..!

geet: im nt ur baby ... open this rite nwwwww

maan: no, so where do u live

maan starts to car

geet: i leave at... I-M-NT-GONNA-TELL-U-PLACE

maan smiles: fi9 then

maan drives around the empty roads about 15mmins go by.. and no one talks...

geet: im tried i wana go homee

maan: hmmm... adress

geet tells the adress and maan takes her thier

maan: so u live in flats huh?

geet: no this is my house... cant you see

poniting at the building...

maan just laughs at her talks and thinks: why am i keep on laughing on ur words

geet: u wana open my door nw??

maan: after...

geet: after

maan: yea after.. i have sumthin u give to u

maan takes of a ring off of his finger and takes her hand and puts in her ring finger... bt its too big her tries her middle finger bt still it is too big, so he tries her tumb... bt it is no uses

geet: i didnt want it anyways

maan: just shut up my billi

geet: i told u na... im nt ur billi or baby... open the door

maan moves towards her makin her hit her head on the seat maan bends down and says... agar tum jhoot bol sakthi ho... about ricky singh... toh kya main nhai bol sakta hoon...?

geet: kya

maan: ur the 1st and keepin fingers crossed the last gurl in maans life... i love you

geet doent nw wot to answer other then wid a kiss on his lips again wid the same passion and love... the kiss lasts up too 5mins wen maan moves down to her neck and around her shouder and almost after veri kiss he says i love you...i love you...i love and geet just smiles, geet eyes glances at the time and it is 3;30 am and moves maan back

geet: bhoot diar hogi hai... i have to go

maan: no

geet smiles: i will see you tommorow at ur brothers after marriage party

maan: tik hai phir joa...jaldi anna kal

geet smiles: hmm

maan opens the door for her and geet leaves bt then cums back again and gives a peek at his checks and leaves and maan just smiles... both maanet in thier own room just cant wait till tommorow!

both get up late next day as... they are tried... dadi wakes maan up and tells her it is 5 in the evening get up already

and pinky wakes geet up... "ut bhi jao"

geet: pinkyyy

geet screams in excitement

pinky: wot happen to you...? and wot time did u cum?

geet: late veri late... bt mujhai woh milgaya hai

pinky: kon?

geet: mera jevan saathi

pinky: kya koon???

geet: i will make u met him today... as aj unki bhai ki shadi ki party hai

pinky: wot are u talking about??

geet tells pinky the whole story and pinky feels reali happy for her

plz do comment i nw i ending it unexpectly... bt i have to go mayb i will add another part to this os... it all depans on ur comments so plz doo comment and hit the like butttonnn! :)

Manneet love in Dev's wedding.. good..

I really loveeeeeeeeee it.
Dadi being cupid.
Like garif and billi couple.
Waiting for more maneet os.

👏awesome dear plz do continue soon👍🏼and ya add me to ur PM list😊