ONE SHOT(plz comment) another part;pg10 MAAN BHAI) - Page 6

hey plz continue it it is nice.

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no yaar..this 'BHAI' role doesn't suit him....alwyas saw him as a serious angry young man types not a gunda...

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my god..awesome means raapchik...why u even asking,,,,,doooooooo continue..with lots of intensity!!!

wat one shots...all them each a unique piece.....wat immense hottness and passion in each..omg...why dont u give some of these to barry the scripter of the show..i am sure tey wont be able to do this much justic..u rcok full on!!

please add me too ur pm!!!would love to read more and more!!

aww.... an amazing OS.... very very cute...=) plz do continue...

Yaar Pls do continue

lol good imagination keep it up

common yaar wahtz there to ask........................plzzzzzzzz continue

MAAN BHAI SECOUND AND LAST UPDATE!

recap: geet: nhai wohh

maan: phir wohh

OKAY tell me if i should count this OS...???

geet: nhai main woh

maan 'accidently' held her wrist a lil hard...

geet: ouch

maan: oh.. apun dehka nhai, tera haath toh aur lah ho raya hai...

maan lets go of her hand and goes by the door: aee riteshh, ristesh ... kidar mar gay ho??

ristesh: g bhai?

maan: ja, ja ka baarf(ice) la ka ah

ritesh: g bhai abhi laya

maan goes back to geet wid ice wraped in a towel

maan: idhar baith

geet stands still

maan: mera ko acha nhai lagta eik baat phir phir kha-nay

geet slienlty goes and sits down wid him

maan: haan, dehka...

geet doesnt give him her hand bt he still takes it-- force-lu bt wid gentle hands... he puts the ice of her wrists... geet is looking down and maan is lookin at her... he just cant take his eyes off of her, the ice finished and maans hand tuched her skin, her soft wet skin just around the wrists offcourse!

geet: tik hai...

maan looks at her wrists, the redness her lowed down

maan was about to say sumthing wen tito cums in

tito: maan bhai, woh brij handa maan(agree) gaya, ab tera pe koi case nhai hai,

tito looks at geet: didi tu ghar ja sakti hai ab

geet gives a relief smile and maan is just lost and thinks: wah, iski hasi kitne kabsroot hai

seeing geet smile even maan smiled, tito left, and geet got up

maan: kidar ja rahi hoo??

geet looked at him in terror: woh... ghar

maan gets up: nhai idhar log atta aur jata meri marzi se hain, aur jab meri marzi ho, phir hi tum jao g... samji?

geet: likan papa ne case wapis lay liya hai... toh plzz i wana go home

tears again started rollin down her checks... maan didnt nw why he said... bt he just didnt wanted her to leave... he wanted her to stay wid her foreva... he couldnt see her cry so got up and left...

tito: maan bhai , maan bhai

maan left

tito: arey didi toh phir rohna lagi hai... yeh jo maan bhai hai, is ki kopri bari ulti pulti hai...

geet: likan jab papa ne case wapis lay liya hai... toh phir... ab koi baat hai kya??

tito: pata nhai, likan apun pata laga re ga

tito lefft leaving geet alone in a dark room... which gave her chills... geet was always scared of the dark... bt she wasnt alone for a long time, maan came back to her

maan: dekh, tera baap ne case wapis lay liya hai... likan tera baap ko sabuk(leason) bhi toh dena hai... eik do... yah teen din mein tujko ghar poncha day gay... ap rohna mat

geet: teen din

geet cryed more

maan: acha acha... do din

geet: do din... nhai mujhai abhi jana hai

maan: chup warna main kuch asey kar jaoon ga...

maan was about to leave wen geet held his hand and fell down on his feets

geet: plz plz letme... plz mujhey janna du... plz...

maan bend down to her: dekh asey roh gi tu phir meri kopri pagal hoti hai... to chup kar

it was useless nuthing was making geet stop crying, maan just couldnt take it anymore... he made his lips lock wid hers... geet was confuse... geet was making nosie bt dat didnt stop maan he kept on making out wid geet... soon even geet started replying wid same passion, bt then she stoped and maan let go

by this time geet was lying on the floor and maan was on top of her..

maan: maine khaha ta na... chup kar jaoon warna main kuch kar do ga...

geet was just stunned nt that a ganster kissed her, bt that she was njoying it, and overall she wanted more of it...

maan left, geet was still lying on the floor

geet: wot m i thinking... he is a ganster... bt why do all ganster have to be soo hawt... and uff yeh kiss... i want it more... no no, i wana go home...

tito: tu apney apse he baatein kar rahi hai

geet didnt relaize wen tito cum

geet think: thank god i was talking in english... or else he owuld have understood

geet: nhai, woh

tito: acha chor.. pata hai maan bhai ne tera liya khana(food)

geet: mujhai ne khana

tito: didi tu samj nhai rahi ha(r u nt understanding)

geet: kya?

tito: maan sir khabhi bhi nhai kissi ki itney fikar karta hain... dekh na pehla tera liya burf mangayi... aur ab khana... maan bhai toh kissi ko asey vip treat nhai karta... pata nhain didi tera saath kyun kar raha hai

geet: acha tito... tito he tumhara naam hai

tito nods his head

geet thinks: how do i ask him, if maan has any gf... or a pass record wid gurl... he is just a kid

tito: kya pochna hai didi

geet: yeh maan ki family main koi hai kya?

tito: koi nhai

geet: maa... paa, bhai behin.. koi larki

tito: arey khaha na koi nhai hai, maan bhai bikul alkela hain... maan bhai toh kissi larki ki taraf bhi nhai dekhta... is liya toh main kha raha ta... maan bhai tera ko vip treatment day rahay hai, aur toh inkar kar rahi hai

geet: agar tera... mera mutlub hai agar tumhare maan bhai ko itney hi fikar hai meri, toh ah kar kood kahana dey mujhai, warna mujhai nhai khanana

tito goes and tells maan wot geet is saying and maan says: agar usko nhai khna toh mat khaya (is she doesnt wana eat den leave her)

about 4hours go by, maan reali wants to see geet, bt he is embrassed for wot just happened

maan: raat bhoot hogi hai, geet sou gayi ho gayi ek dafa dakh atta hoon(its late in the nite she must be sleeping, i will go and check on her)

maan goes to see geet laying on the floor wid her back towards him

maan: bechari.. zameen pe sou rahi hai

bt less does maan nw.. geet is nt sleeping bt is wide awake!

maan looks on the floor and the food is untouched

maan: bari zidey hai, mujhai laga isne kha liya hogay

geet thinks: u loser i m so hungry i didnt eat cuz of youuu

maan is about to leave wen... geet mumbles in her sleep

geet: bookh lagi hai...

maan: ab kya karoon, isko jagaoon (should i wake her up)

geet think: yes yes yes!

maan: geet... geet uth

maan sits down to where is she sleeping and maan nudges her shoulder and geet turns around and her head kinda lands in his lap

maan: geet

geet opens her eyes and sits up

maan: woh tune khana nhai khaya??

geet: nhai

maan: kyun?

geet: kyun... tito ne nhai bataya ka??

maan: nhai usne bata ta likan, mujhai laga.. kay

geet: kay?

maan: kay.. woh

geet: kay..woh kya?

maan: geet maine tujhai kipnap kiya hai, tune mujhai nhai

geet looks down at the food

maan: kha lay

OKAY guyz this is kinda turning into a FF... so i will speed things up, just think da things dat happen in about a week or so, will happen in one nite! :P

geet: nhai, phela yeh bato tumne mujhai kiss.. kiss kyun kiya?

maan: tu...roh rahi thi... is liya

geet: toh jab koi rohta hai usko kiss kar layta ho?

maan: nhai nhai dimaag tera tik hai kya??

geet: yehi to main bhi khaha rahi hoon

maan: dekh tu zada bol mat warna

geet: warna kya

maan: warna phir kuh hogaya gay... aur phir to sawal kara gi

geet: likan

maan moves forward her iches away from her lips...

maan: tera koi lunda(bf) hai kya

geet: lunda?

maan: haan, woh boyfriend... ya koi

geet: nhai...

maan: meri bhi koi lundeya nhai

geet: lundeya?

maan: gurl frind

maan smiles and geet also smiles...!

okay hope u guyz likes it, i nw ending was way toooo fast... bt still, this was turning into a FF rather then OS... anyways do comment, and if any1 has ideas of any other kind of OS... plz do write it down... maybe i will write a os on dat... anways plz do comment!