FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
hi guys thanxs a lot for all ur responses & support...I am so excited about the fridays's precap hope they ...show the dance ..not keeping it for monday..killing us
geet - ICU 2..
maan turns & looks at geet...her eyes were waiting for maans eyes & she collapsed

Part 71

armaan rushed geet to the ICU..her pulses were going low
there was excessive bleeding ...doctors were rushing to check her..
maan & priya went to see krish in ICU 2..
surgeon - he is stable now..transplant was sucessful..
krishna - dad ..maa aur khushi teehk hain na...
maan(was not sure wat krishna just said) - all are fine..his voice just sunk in..
how are u feeling now..?(maan knew he has said some thing to geet which is totally irrevocable..)
priya - khushi?? kuan hain..
krishna(bites his tongue..)- wow mera aur mum ka secret hain..
priya panics..she feared..sensed some thing ..her hands went cold..
she kissed krish & went out ..
priya went & spoke to armaan wanting to know wat exactly happened..
armaan was rushing with nurses & arranging for blood & other formalities
armaan was tensed looking at geet condition...
priya - armaan ek minute...wat happened?
armaan - nahi priya..every thing was fine ..she went through all this
so bravely..I don't know wat happened she..is sinking now..
priya - wat are you saying armaan... u r not making sense at all...
armaan - narrates the accident how geet saved krish..the glass hit..
rushing to hospital..need of a donar..geet steping in with out thinking
about her pregnancy..
priya was speechless..as if she was fearing this..& turned to see maan..
who was doomed...maan could'nt believe
wat he just heard..geet was pregnant..she lost our baby...operation..donating to krishna
he closes his eye in pain & stood there in pain & shock..self hatredness..
he felt as if he was slowly slipping in a deep dark pit, he felt as if it was end of his life..
armaan - maan ...geet is sinking...I am not sure wat happened..
something really seem to have disturbed her confidence...
first she her aborstion ..second..donated an organ..thrid..she got up
from the bed...& her stiches are oozing blood...
wat are u guys doing..man..u guys make no sense to me..defying all medical ethics
priya - that is Maan Singh Khurana for u...armaan ur bestfriend..'pairing u with his wife'
I left krishna for him & he blammed me for that..
& history repeats itself....geet has lost her child now..
but his MAAN...would have killed her hundred times..by saying some thing
rediculous to her..bechari aapne bechai ko kona ka gam bhi nahi share kar payai kisi se..
kare to kise se kare..tum to kabhi uskha gam hi samjh nahi payai..
kya beeti hogi uske dil pe..kabhi socha hain maan??
tumhe aapne bare main soochne se fursat mile to kisi ke bare main sochogaye na..
nurse - dr.armaan u need to see this..
armaan rushes to geet...
surgeon - Mr.Khurana..i guess it is case of excess blood loss..we probably have to operate on
her to stop internal bleeding..
maan does'nt respond...he frooze..he was not able comphrehend anything...
priya - dr do wat ever it takes..please
priya shakes maan..he walks to see geet...she was pale...he notices her waist soaked in blood
he remembers..the last time they were togather..how she was so excited to tell about khushi
and he did'nt let her speak...he remembered the every time they were closer..how much
trusted & faith she had in him...how she let him express his feelings without questioning
his intentions...

they asked maan to sign the papers...his fingers jiterred..he wondered how could geet sign
these papers for khushi....maan cluchted the paper & throw it away..
armaan - it just a formality..please yaar..they may not be able to proceed otherwise..
maan scribles his sign..& smahes the pen..

daadi, NT & dev comes in..priya explains them the whole scenario..
daadi - aab kitne aur dukh sahi gahi yeh ladkhi...
(maan look at daadi)pata nahi kya soch kar maine ine dono ki shayadhi karayi..
main kitni matlabhi hogayi thi..I just thought about Maan & krishna..my family

nurse comes out & says..krish is looking for his mom..
priya walks few steps & stops
priya - maan..krish aapni maa ko bhula raha hain..I don't have the guts to tell
him about geet...tum hi javoo
maan stood rooted..
daadi walked into to see krish...she hugged & kissed him..
maan stood near the door..watched.
krish - daadi! ...maa kanha hai..woh mujhse mili nahi aayai
daadi - she was here the whole night ..so we have send her home to rest
krish - nahi daadi..maa mujhe aise choad kar ja hi nahi sakti..
(maan wondered how krishs innocent heart could know geet better than him)
maan - she did'nt want to go I forced her to..
krish - aap ne kaha hoga to..how can she refuse..
(he mummers)

precap
krish crying for geet

part 72 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1465529/ff-pyar-ka-ehsaas-maan-and-geet-part-96-new-thread?pn=17
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

hiiiii muski..............

one of the most beautiful and heartwrenching update...such a stupendous narration could only come from a superrrrrrrrrrrrrb writer................😊😊😊😊
must say this update of yours would have made all the readers cry.............HATS OFF 👏👏👏to you...............this is out of this world writing...............running out of words..............love ur FF..............and u yaar..........😃😃😃
reva🥱
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
awesome update....i just love ur ff....one of the best
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
wow.. i srsly started cryingg.. relalyy goodd !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
You made me cry!
Why did u do this to Geet?!
Now please do something to make up for this......Maan owes Geet big time!

Great writing and love your Ff. Have read all of them to date.
Please add me to your PM list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
awwwww this is torture.I can't see Geet suffer like this. But still I love the story. I was waiting all day for you to update. I'm already on my toes to read the next part. Maan better make up to Geet. Update soon!!!
Edited by ann65 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
i need a hug......


it was sooo emotional....

brilliant work done!!!!


update sooN!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
hey muskan,

I really want to appreciate the way you make the plot. I cried my heart out today because of your last update and this. And plzzzzzz dont stop here plz do continue plzzzzz 1 more update for today i know i am being selfish but if you can i would really appreciate that.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
MUSKS!!!! I just love you yaar, MUAhZZzZZzZ!!!!!😃. Thank you for such a beautiful update!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Part 71.....I am speechless!!!
It is one of the most touching and emotional work of fiction that I have read to date. Phenomenal writing! But too sad. Shedding tears.

Can't wait for part 72. Jaldi likho please

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