FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow. great update. I think geet's reactions is quite normal for what she has been through. Maan should really beg for her forgiveness. He has wronged her too many times. I was so sad where geet first meets krish after the surgery. Plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

simplyyyyy brilliant.............have never seen such a strong character like geet........kudos to you for showing us such a brilliant character...love her..........

fabulous update.........the hindi verses were beautiful and wonderful.....love ur update.
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi guys..after that episode I am so dreamy....
I loved the precap...Maan's forced proposal was typical like my FF Maan..
don't u think so..???.the way my FF maan was initially expressing his passion...
not letting geet refuse..he was so sure geet loves him..

armaan - did u notice she did'nt cry over khushi..that is not normal
maan - probably to put a brave face with krish..


part 73

armaan - u don't get it ..I want u to speak to the doctor ur self..
they meet the Psychiatric..
she explains maan..that geet is really hurt deep in but she is not opening up
she herself not accepting that she is hurt...& not letting us treat her as well
i tried speaking to her..she says she is fine...has she beem depressed before?
maan - no i don't think so..she is quite lively..
armaan interrupts..nahi ..she was ..this was like a year ago..I remember she used to spend
the whole night alone sitting at the canal..(maan was shocked..how come I don't seem
to know anything about her..his guilt piles up)
Psychiatric - was she under any medication..?
maan was totally unaware...i will need to check..(he calls daadi..& daadi explains him
wat happened after krish left to simla)maan was taken a back...he realized wat krish
always meant to her..
maan explained the same to doctor..
Psychiatric - then I guess she is just pretending to be fine..for krish..
see all this good..but
maan - but wat doctor
Psychiatric - the problem would be ..when she may to be able to pretend any more..
she may break down..may complicate things..but i really don't understand
wat is bothering her so much...because if she is so attached to krish then
abortion ..she should be able to handle it..
armaan - yes doctor..she was pritty confident when she walked in for the surgery..
she was very confident and happy
Psychiatric - then wat happened..
armaan - not sure..
maan knew wat it was ..he knew it was not even khushi that bothered geet..
it was him..his words..his disbelive in her at that point..he realized how much he
could effect her..he knew deep within..if he him..then its only his love
that could make her feel better...& get her out of all this
Psychiatric - medication could help but..she does'nt agree that she needs them..
maan - is it a problem?
Psychiatric - there are small visible behavioural changes in her...which could
become drastic latter ...
maan - wat are u suggesting..
Psychiatric - she needs to be kept busy..out of all this thought..
could think of a baby soon...but
maan - but wat doctor..is there any complications
Psychiatric - it won't be advisable..with her health condition now..she is too week
may be after .. couple of months..otherwise there is nothing to worry
maan nodes ..& leaves..
while walking back to the room...
maan could not stop hating himself..kyun geet kyun mujhse itna pyar kathi hoo
main tumhari pyar ke kabil nahi...kabhi tumhe samjh hi nahi paya..
hamesha hoton pe hasee dekh li ,lekin dil ke ander nahi dekha..nahi samjha
tumhare kashma kash so..tumhari unkahi ..unsuni ehsaas ko..


nurse serves the dinner.....both geet & krish looking at each other..
sitting on the bed with the stand parting them..
krish - maa mujhe yeh nahi kaana..bahut pheeka hain..
geet(also makes a long face) - yah..lakin dehko I am also having it..
krish - refuses to eat
maan - let me see...he takes both their plates puts the food in one plate
he arranges the vegitable.. & rice..builts a story arround them...
he makes small balls..out of the rice..& tells this a misle & getting launched
he narrates the story & feeds krish & geet..
& has from the same plate...geet stops his hand..while he was taking a bite
maan looks at her eyes in love & concern..geet looks away & says
geet - aap kyun yeh kaa rahe hain..daadi ne aap ke liya dinner beja hain
maan puts the bite in his mouth & says..I like this more..
he completes the story & finshes the food with them..
maan gets the napkin & wipes krish ..tucks him in the spread..
hands over a napkin..to geet..
geet cleans her mouth..maan sees some crums near her lower lip..
he moves his hand to wipe it ..geet instictively draws back her face..
maan eyes gets moist stopping his hand mid way & pulling it back
he turns away his face & pretends to go to
wash room...he washes his face (he thinks of the dinner night when..geet was with her friends..
& maan could just look at her & she would shy & cleaned her lips..)
he came back to see geet was trying to get on to her bed.....he runs & holds her from slipping..
his fingers touches her waist...on the stiches..
geet does'nt react..she just bites her lips in pain..& tear roll
down her eye in pain..maan wonders wat happened..after..
settling her on the bed..he notices his hand getting wet with the blood
coming out of the stiches ..he snaps his hand in pain & ..
looks at geet...
maan - tum kuch kah thi kyun nahi(he shouts in pain)...
is it paining..he looks in concern
geet pulls her spread & says..main teehk hoon..
maan - nahi dehkoo bahut khoon beh raha hain..(maans eyes starts
watering looking at her bleed)he starts to fumble & was about to ring
the bell to call the nurse..geet cups his face ..wipes his tears
she looks into his eyes..concerned & says..
main teehk hoon maan...aap ko meri chinta karne ki zarrort nahi..
maan - kaise na karoo..umm..kaise na karoo..& hugs her...& starts crying like a baby...
he just let go all his emotions..that was pilled up in him..since the time
they had lost their khushi...geet did'nt hug back..he did'nt care...he did'nt even expect
he just hugged her..close..did'nt want to let go of her..ever..
tujheme dekhne Ke Lea tarasta hoon...teri chahat ke lea tadapta hoon
Kyun Chali Jaa rahe ho mujhse door....tere bina roz roz mar raha hoon
he lied hugging her..his hand wanted to feel her..her hair..her touch, her face..her pain..his body wanted to feel her.absorb her into him...every part of her..feel the belongingness..feel her just her ..he weeped partially..the whole night...

precap

maan seeing khushi's room...

i hope u all love this part..me trying to wind up this sad dukhi parts...does'nt seem to end
lekin..kya karoo maan better learns his lesson..70 parts he has hurt geet ..atleast 2-3 parts
he should..wat say???please post ur suggestions & replies
love
muskan



Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh it made me cry again, the last few posts have been heart breaking. yes, i agree with you that maan deserves to atone severely for a few parts, can ease back after. Love the story, please continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Even though it's sad and I hate seeing geet in so much pain and sorrow....but it sure does serve maan right.
As always, great work. Love part 73....you are awesome Muskan!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mushkan..I agree with U..Geet bahut tadpi hai Maan ke liye..Maan ne thoda to tadpna hoga..
waise I am waiting for next part..Wht Maan feel after the seeing Khushi's stuff..
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Posted: 14 years ago
aree yaar maan kab samje ga he and his ego i mean jab khushi ke kamre mein jayga tab kya halat hogi uski can't wait muski plzzz update it and finish these sad parts by today
becoz 'IT'S WEEKEND'
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful as always 😳. Thanks hun!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

I love this track, Maan deserves this only 😡 didn't feel anything for him in this part although i know i should but anyways, make Maan cry, torture him with Geet's silence and Krish's anger

Would love to see the father son duo Maan and Krish helping Geet out of her depression but in a fun way and then a hugeee breakdown from Geet's side
lovely update as always 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwww.............finally maan realised his mistake!!!! i hope geet understands his love n pain 4 her!!!

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