FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 21

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-Priyaa- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Di Maan ko dukh dene ki chakkar mein bechari Geet ko itna dard? he better treat her like a princess I'm telling u otherwise I'll strangle him.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

Mushkan..I agree with U..Geet bahut tadpi hai Maan ke liye..Maan ne thoda to tadpna hoga..

waise I am waiting for next part..Wht Maan feel after the seeing Khushi's stuff..



Ditto....

Thanx Muskaan. After 2-3 updates, finally I managed to control my tears today coz I realized Maan deserved this pain. He himself asked for it- if his one sentence could destroy Geet's life, he has to repent for it....

Waiting eagerly for Maan's reaction.


With Luv,
Jhankaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
Even though i feel really bad for maan.
But i think he should learn the lesson.
I hope maneet will be alright soon.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
love you dear, it really touched my heart. Plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanxs guys...thanxs for all ur support & love
wondering how to make it nice for the week end...
kya karoo..yeh maan bhi na...
put me in so much of trouble...
how do I bring the romance back...2 more parts...please...
shall try to reduce the intensity..or tears...😭😲
but how..this maan really deserves it...may be a dream sequence..
but still dos'nt make sense..every body is sad sad!!
how can any one have a pleasent dream...
shall work out something..soon
love
muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago
It's ok di. Maan deserves it so just do it as u planned. and oh did u get my pm about the ff update?
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Posted: 14 years ago

he just hugged her..close..did'nt want to let go of her...
he lied hugging her ..weeping partially..the whole night...

Part 74

maan wakes up & slowly draws his hand away from geet ..
making sure not to disturb her..
maan goes to the wash room & freshens up..
nurse walks in with their morning medicins & injection for geet
maan saw geet was sleeping peacfully
maan requests the nurse to avoid the injection for now..
nurse smiles & leaves..

maan checks with the doctor..& sees if it was ok to take them home
surgeon - every thing his fine..& seems perfectly normal..
krish can get back to school in 15days
geet needs adequate rest & care..she is really week
maan - it is been 2 weeks..her stich still bleeds is it ok
surgeon - no ..actually she is not being care full..
we have stiched twices on the same place..
so thats why it is taking longer...
I am sure she will be fine in a week or so..with her stiches
maan - when do we have to come for final check up..
surgeon - krish can come once before resuming his school & geet may have
to come for dressing & removing her stiches..
maan thanxs the doctor & goes to the room & packs their bags..
priya & daadi come in...& helps geet get ready..

maan completes the discharge formarlities..& waits for them..
geet was finding it diificult to walk untill car..
maan slowly lifts her..geet puts her hand around his neck in a embrace
maan looks into her eyes..checking if she was comfaratable..
she looked stressed & cold with his touch..
maan slides her inside the car..keeps a pillow behind her back..
asked if she was ok...geet noded

when they reached home..daadi & priya took krish to his room
maan lifted geet & walked in...he was taking her to the guest room..
maan - I thought we will stay here...tumhe steps chatne me mushilkil hoogi
geet jumps out of maans hand climbs up the steps & runs to their room
maan runs behind her trying to stop her..
maan - geet please don't run..main tumhe ..sambal ka geet ...geeet
geet goes into the room & sits panting on the bed..
maan - geet yeh tum kya kar rahi hoo..
he immdiately..slides her dress & checks if she hurt herself..
geet snaps back her dress & says main teehk hoon..
maan - please geet tum aise mat karo..agar tumhe yanha rehana hain to ..its ok
but please don't jump around like this..
tumhara stich abhi puri tahrah se sukha nahi hain...
geet does'nt reply..slides into the spread & sleeps..
maan wondered why she behaved so indifferent...
maan went to check on krish..gave him medicine & kissed him good night..
he came back..geet was sleeping...he slidded next to her & dossed off
after a while..maan..got up ...& was shocked not to find geet..around
he turned around & looked for geet...
he checked in washroom, he checked in kitchen, krish's room..he could find her any where...
maan was getting worried & tensed..he ran his hand on his hair..pulling them back
kanha ja sakthi hain itne raat main...kanhi canal to chali gayee..itne raat ko
kuch bhi kar sakthi woh!! kanha gayee ho tum geet..
as he goes to the door..he notices the light-on in the guest room..
maan sees geet putting away some things...into a big plastic...
maan enters geet tum yanha kya kar rahi ho?
geet turns around in shock & says..nahi nahi..i was just clearing few unwanted stuffs
(she looked worried & tensed)
maan -itne raat ko..
mujhe keh dethi..i would have helped u
geet(clucthing her dupata)- nahi nahi..i am done lets go..
she pulls maan away..from their...maan knew geet did'nt want him to be there
for some strange reason...he just obliged...he lifted her ..geet held him..
maan - geet agar kuch chahiya to mujhe kehna..(tucks the spread..)
geet - goodnight...

maan felt a light touch on his cheeks...soft ..tender ...delicate...
he tried feeling her..she ran away..he tried running behind her..
she ran & hid behind geet..he said..khushi..come to papa..she peeked from behind..
she said no..& hid again..she puts his hand around geet & tries to catch..
she was not there..he got up scared & panting..maan looked at geet..
she was sleeping peacefully..he looked for water..went to kitchen..had water
while giong back to the room..he looked at the guest room..he wondered ..why was geet
not letting him come in there..since morning...wat was she clearing..wat was it bothering her
so much since morning..he pulled the plastic bag & emptyed it..he was shattered his tears rolled down..
he fell down on the floor...slidded his hand over them..
on the stuffs..that lied on the floor...it was not just toys..not just mittens..
not just sweaters..not just cushions...not just caps..tiny tiny all in pink colour...
it was her dream..her life..her happiness..their love
he could he see the love in each & every stuffs geet had collected for khushi
maan saw a torn chart..he put them togather...and read the notes ..geet & krish
had written for khushi..then he reads the part..where geet wrote
"khushi..paapa loves u...???
then she has cuts ??? & writes..loves u...!!!"
maan hugs the chart & says offcourse papa loves u..loves u more than his life..
& kisses the paper...

precap
maan smashing the glass in frustration..

love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
reserrved hope i'm first
EDIT:
Well Maan deserves it. He was being such a prick.
Edited by loveangle_4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update like the way maan express his feeling......
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Posted: 14 years ago

simply fab.........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

reva

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