FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomeeeeeeeee update.
plzzz continue soon.
thanxxxxxxxx for the pm.


fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum part musky , you showed pain of maan nd geet so wonderfully ........i coud actually imagine all sceneries nd feeling like cry for them ..........
too good yaar......maan ki wajah se hame rona pad rha hai :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
Not so sad after this part..chala kam se kam geet such bold to rahi hai....maan totally deserves this...please update soon and thanks for making this part little more happier....slowly i hope everything gets back to normal.....thanks Di....
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part yaar
our maan missing his khushi
and geet should warm up to him
plz continue soon
eagerly waiting for the next update
Nidhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it! Again, a beautiful potrayal of emotions. Awesome work, Muskan 👏
Again I cried while reading the update, but its ok. All these part justifies the story 😊
Well, I'd like to see Geet opening up to Maan and telling her wat she feels since Maan is now realizing where he went wrong.
I find your FF soo captivating that I madly wait for your updates! Your writing makes me crazy the same way as the actual TV one does 😊

Please update soon 😛 I know its kinda weird, you've just updated and I am asking for another, but see, we all are crazy Maaneet fans, kabhi maaneet ka dose poora hi nahi hota 😛 😉

Love you,
Shivangi....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just read the last two parts. Amazing as always. But I hope that Maan and Geet become happy soon. These parts are really depressing me....though they are good none the less. I can really feel their emotions. Update soon! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Di

update was awesome........... it so sad n painful
u showed pain of Geet n Maan beautifully
loved Kushi dream part
hope Geet open in ur next update
do cont soon

Luv
Naina

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Posted: 14 years ago
yar bus karo Na kitNa rolao gai

all parts are superb ...........
i really cried after reading your FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
woooooo awesome last line "OFCOURSE PAPA LOVES U" imagin hot n dashing MK as PAPA waoww
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Posted: 14 years ago



how r u dear muskan.after dreamyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.
yaar yeh weekend kab guzre ga


part 73 is

finally after a long long wait


maan knew wat it was ..he knew it was not even khushi that bothered geet..
it was him..his words..his disbelive in her at that point..he realized how much he
could effect her..he knew deep within..if he him..then its only his love
that could make her feel better...& get her out of all this



maan could not stop hating himself..kyun geet kyun mujhse itna pyar kathi hoo
main tumhari pyar ke kabil nahi.
..kabhi tumhe samjh hi nahi paya..
hamesha hoton pe hasee dekh li ,lekin dil ke ander nahi dekha..nahi samjha
tumhare kashma kash so..tumhari unkahi ..unsuni ehsaas ko..


maan - let me see...he takes both their plates puts the food in one plate
he arranges the vegitable.. & rice..builts a story arround them...
he makes small balls..out of the rice..& tells this a misle & getting launched
he narrates the story & feeds krish & geet..
& has from the same plate...geet stops his hand..while he was taking a bite
maan looks at her eyes in love & concern..geet looks away & says
geet - aap kyun yeh kaa rahe hain..daadi ne aap ke liya dinner beja hain
maan puts the bite in his mouth & says..I like this more.

his fingers touches her waist...on the stiches..
geet does'nt react..she just bites her lips in pain..& tear roll
down her eye in pain..maan wonders wat happened..after..
settling her on the bed..he notices his hand getting wet with the blood
coming out of the stiches ..he snaps his hand in pain & ..
looks at geet...
maan - tum kuch kah thi kyun nahi(he shouts in pain)...

is it paining..he looks in concern
geet pulls her spread & says..main teehk hoon


tujheme dekhne Ke Lea tarasta hoon...teri chahat ke lea tadapta hoon
Kyun Chali Jaa rahe ho mujhse door....tere bina roz roz mar raha hoon






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