FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 36

nice update. thanks for bringing it lighter

ha.. muskaan amazing update dear .... loved it a lot....... ...... waiting for next part

nice part

great update. wow. she finally cried. I wonder what will happen to their relationship. plz update soon

simply awesome dear......at last she cried ...
the whole part was emotional
loved it

Dear Mushy,

I am back after my self imposed 2 day exile from the forums and what is this I read?

You promised that things would get better after 2-3 parts, you lied, you just kept on breaking my heart. 😭 Why, oh! why?



Well lets start with Part 72
Its a good thing that I am a strong individual else my husband would have found me sobbing on the floor after reading this part. Bad enough that Geet lost Khushi but she then had to hear Krish say " jab se khushi aayi hain maa badal gayi hain." How heart wrenching! And then you had her put on a brave face and say "HAAN KRISH...ISE LIYA MAINE Doctors se kaha ki mjhe khushi nahi chahiya." I don't have kids but I have seen people who have lost kids and they totally break down and out poor Geet doesn't even have that small luxury.

I am very angry with you, Mushy. 🥱 First you didn't give her Maan's love and when you gave it to her, she was still confused and when she expected it finally you took away her Khushi.

I don't feel completely horrible for Maan and him not seeing anything in Geet's eyes. What did he expect she just sacrificed one child for another and then him to yell at her (in previous part) without knowing the whole truth?

All I wanted to scream was NAAAAHHHHIIIII. The same word as every time. I need to find a Hindi thesaurus to find another word to yell other than Nahi.




Part 73

Again NAAAHHHIIII, it still haven't found the Hindi thesaurus.

What do you want me to write, once again I was heart broken. Okay I am starting to feel for Maan now. I can understand his helplessness. He doesn't know what to do to get through to Geet and that can be devastating.

Liked how you gave Maan another jatka by letting Armaan talk about Geet's previous depression and how she would sit under the canal.

Happy that you brought in a Psychiatrist, not a lot of people use their services and depression is a horrible disease. It's important to show just how horrible it can be. You portrayed it fabulously.

Mushy (in Maan angry voice) tum mujhe boohot garam kar rahi ho. Ein dono ka dardh ab sehen nahi kiya ja sakta hain. 😳




Part 74

Why, must you torture me so? So touching Geet packing up Khushi's stuff and since Maan didn't know about the room, Geet didn't allow him to see what she was doing.

I don't have the emotional capacity to deal with more heart ache and you have written so well that I don't have the words to describe what I am feeling. I guess you can describe it as a feeling between Pain and Sadness.




Part 75

Loved how Maan came to the realization that all the time that Geet was trying to strengthen their relationship he had just pushed her away, even if unknowingly but he was the one responsible for ruining their budding relationship.

I also like how you have Geet still in a state of shock, her not reacting like a normal person would in the same situation.



Part 76

Sad and sweet interaction between Maan and Geet, I really thought that Geet would snap at him, but no such luck. That girl needs to but him in his place. I guess I am saying that out of anger of Geet loosing the baby, I know Maan is suffering enough, but loosing Khushi was just too sad.



Part 77

My lovely Mushy, you redeemed yourself. Once again you brought me out of the dark hole called Parts 72-76 by making them communicate with each other. Amazing how much Geet loves Maan. Also love Priya, she is such an amazing woman, I am glad that she cleared Geet's confusion regarding whom Maan really loves. I loved how Maan pleads for Geet to not go away from him and how Geet asks him not to let her go away.


Okay, since you fixed all the damage you had done and gave a nice Part 77, I will not torture you, today. I hope you like the new update when I post it. It is going to be later on in the day but it is going to be super long, even longer than my usual updates, if you can believe it.

Please keep on writing, I love your work although you make me sad (pouting as I write this)

Love,
Polki

Wow thats Awesome Dear

nice update di!!! plzzz continue soon!!! 😛 😛 😛

i am sooo glad that priya cleared things up between her and maan .. and is going back ..

most importantly i am soooooooo glad maan and geet have had a chance to talk and bare their souls to each other ..

it does seem as if the slow road to recovery and acceptance has finally begun!!

thanks for moving the story on in such a natural and realistic way!!!

Uzma xx

This update got smile on my face