Dil Ki Baatein (FF) - Update page 9 - Page 2

The concept sounds damn interesting! Do continue this.......loved it so far!

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 Go ahead dear...All the very best!!!

Loved the intro pls continue sooooooooooooon

A intro and a shock together....

Nice part....and can't wait....especially after reading about glass breaking... What happens next?????

Thanx for the PM

hmm.. looks interesting.. continue soon and do PM me..

this is really interesting!!!
plz continue 😃

Part 1
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Location: Still the same lavish party, time: 30 minutes after Maan flees
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Focus: The couple, still dressed in Jodha-Akbar style. Geet without her mask, the man too without his mask
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The man pulls geet aside from the dancing which had once again resumed and pulls her into a more isolated corner. Geet who was dancing with a business associate is quizzical.
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"So, I saw that you were looking at the man, Maan Khurana, when he left, do you know him. I saw you looking for him after he left?"
"No, no. Nothing like that. Remember I told you about my former boss before I started working with you…."
"What, you were talking about him?
"Yes, that's him. I was just surprised to see him. I did not know he was invited"
"Yeah, I know him through some college friends and it makes sense since some of our major accounts are his. Anyways, so tell me do you think the plan worked. I did not see her here. Maybe we shouldn't do this"
Geet places a placating arm on his arm "You trust me right. Plus, when have my instincts and Naina's planning ever gone wrong. I have a gut feeling this will work"
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They continue conversing and are soon interrupted by well wishers to the newly engaged couple. Everyone was saying how delightful this was and the best of luck with the weeding. Of course, and that they expected to be invited to what was expected to be the wedding of the season.
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Location: Parking outside of the hotel where the party is being held.
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Focus: Maan sitting in his car. Busy dialing the phone and waiting impatiently for the person on the other end to pick up
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"Yes, its me. I found her. She is in Mumbai and just announced her engagement to Dhruv Dave at the party"
Mumbling heard from other end
"Yes the same Dhruv Dave"
"No, I did not talk to her"
"I don't know. Look, I don't know if she saw me."
"No, I am in the parking lot"
"Come here as soon as possible"
"Yeah. Bye"
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comments welcome and appreciated

lovely..beautifull..thanxs lot...

Oooh.... Interesting! Can't wait to see more! Please put me on your pm list!