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And some more fights...

And so as Daadi coughed again, Geet ran to the nearby medical store; not with the intention of bringing medicine for her, but to walk away from the awkwardness she was facing with all the teasing and questions. Daadi quickly realized what just happened. But Maan refused to understand anything that Geet says or does. This girl is just beyond his understanding; or maybe he does not want to understand her?

It was getting dark and Geet had been away for almost an hour. Knowing that trouble is Geet's best friend, a fear rose in Maan's heart. 'What's taking her so long? The medical shop is just around the corner. She's new to this place. Did she forget her way back? Oh no, Geet is out on the streets at this hour - alone! I must go look for her. I hope she's safe. God ,this girl is totally crazy and is going to kill me one day!' And so he went out in search of her.

Geet, aimlessly walking on the streets of Delhi, is thinking about what she has been going through for the past couple hours. The sudden urge to keep looking at Maan, the effect of the hurt caused by his bitter words, the longing to see him hale and hearty. These emotions were building an unknown storm inside her - a storm that she was not ready to face just yet. She kept questioning herself and her newly found unknown feelings.

And then suddenly she sees a gang of guys approaching her. It is then that she comes back to her senses and realizes she's on the streets at this late an hour. Her pace quickened as she crossed the road to avoid passing the guys. But to her astonishment, they crossed the road too - only to come face to face with her. She was frightened. She didn't know what to say or do. She quickly turned back and started walking the other way. Goondas being goondas, they overtook her and once again came in front of her. They tried to make her talk, they teased her, played with her dupatta and her hair strands. In fear, she again turned back to go the other way, this time running quickly to escape them. She ran a few steps only to bump into Maan. Her happiness knew no bounds when she saw him. He had once again come to save her.

And so the fight began. All of them fighting Maan whereas 2 still holding Geet tight. These were not mamooli goondas, they had come prepared with tools. And so they hit Maan hard enough to make him bleed in his face. Seeing this, Geet could not control herself. She pushed away the men holding her to run towards Maan and see if he is ok only to face the cruel goondas again. They held her tight and this time, threw her aside. They pulled her dupatta and tore it in pieces.

This made Maan go mad. His anger rose to high that he could not think straight. Left and right he kept fighting with everyone that came his way. He was almost in front of Geet - wanting to assure her that when he is around, she need not worry. And then boom! One goonda hit him hard with a stick on his head from behind. Not able to understand what just happened, he turned around only to be hit again - this time in his face, then stomach and then legs. Before he fell on the ground, he turned to look for Geet one last time. Geet saw his expression of helplessness and began to sob.

And then you hear cops car siren. Obviously this made the goondas run away lest they get caught. Geet ran to sambhalo Maan who was almost unconscious. Their eyes met for one last time before he closed his.

Scene shifts to the house. Doctor says "he has been hurt very badly. His head injury is not fatal but he has multiple fractures in his leg and needs complete bed rest". Geet cannot stop cursing herself for her foolish acts which caused so much distress to Maan. She begins to sob like a little girl when Daadima comes and tells her to control herself. "Agar aap apne aap ko nahi sambhaal payenge, toh Maan ka khayal kaun rakhega. Aaj se Maan aapki zimmedaari hai. Aap hi ko unki dekhbhaal karni hogi".

Geet agrees, not because she had feelings for Maan but because of guilt. And then we see Geet taking care of Maan. Sitting by his bedside, moving her hand gently across his hair. She even comes as close to give him a kiss on his head, but Geet toh Geet hai. She comes back to senses and thinks to herself 'yeh kya kar rahi hai'. pagal mat ban, apne aap ko sambhal. Maan sir thik ho jaye, uske baad teri zimmedari khatam. phir tu yahan se chali jaane. Tu hamesha unke liye pareshaani ka karan banti hai. Lekin ab nahi. Maan sir ke thik ho jane ke baad tujhe unki zindagi se jaana hoga.'

Din-raat, subah-shaam, Geet is busy doing Maan's seva. Even at night, she keeps a watch over. She is always with Maan bina palak jhapkaye, bine kuch piye, bina kuch khaye. She tends to his wounds and ceaselessly prays that he becomes alright else she will never forgive herself.

Bas...aaj ke liye itna hi. Hope to continue with the scene when Maan ko hosh aa jaye and prem kahani aage badh jaye. Hope you like my first attempt😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Some feelings acknowledged...

Din raat, Geet had been tending to the wounds and needs of a half-conscious Maan. He's been on a strong dose of sleep medication, so hasn't come back to full conscious just yet.

And then finally he open his eyes. It is tough but he slowly and steadily opens them up. He looks around and notices that he's back in his outhouse bedroom. 'What? How did I come here?' He then tries to remember what had happened and how he came here. He remembered Geet bumping into him on the street, the fight, the blow on his head and then he remembers seeing Geet one last time before he fell unconscious. 'Oh God! Geet kahan hai? I have failed her this time. Where is she? Is she ok? I need to look for her'.

As he rose up to sit on the bed, he was relieved to see Geet sleeping on the floor, with her head and hands close on Maan's feet. 'Wow, she looks so beautiful and peaceful.' He puts forth his hand to remove a strand of hair from her face. Then gently, he rolls his hand down on her face to feel its shape and comes close to her lips. Suddenly he draws his hand back and questions himself 'yeh tujhe kya ho raha hai Maan? tu kyun na chahte hue bhi is ladki ki ore khicha ja raha hai. yeh kaisa ehsaas hai?'

The sudden pull of Maan's hand gave Geet a sudden jerk and she woke up. She couldn't contain her happiness when she saw Maan awake. In excitement, she stood up and prayed to Babaji 'thank you Babaji thank you so much'. Maan was perplexed looking at her 'was she praying for my good health?'

She told him he needed rest and put her arms around him to make him lay down again. She put 2-3 pillows on his back so he wouldn't lay down completely. She calls Nakul and asks him to get some soup. She informs Daadima that Maan is better now. Maan has no clue what's going on. He is busy admiring her. Nakul comes in with some soup and juice. Maan tries to eat it but is in too much pain. Geet says 'main madad kar deti hoon'. But Maan being the angry young man he is, gets angry and says 'mujhe tumhari madad ki koi zaroorat nahi'. He gives it another shot only to experience more pain. So Geet snatches the spoon from his hand and begins feeding him. Both are looking at each other with love and affection. A small drop begins to fall from the side of Maan's lips. Without giving another thought, Geet cleans it with her fingers. Maan looks at her in astonishment which makes Geet withdraw her hand. An awkward moment follows and Geet gets up and goes out of the room.

Daadima enters the room and is happy to see Maan conscious. She tell him how Geet has been up day and night to look after him. 'Geet teen raaton se soyi nahi hai. Bina ek shabd kahe, usne din raat tumhari seva ki hai.'

A few days continue like this. Geet is ALWAYS with him. Except for giving him a sponge bath or changing his clothes, she did everything for him. Not for a single moment she went away from him. This drew both even closer. Affection for each other was dripping from their talks. By this time, both have admitted to their own selves that they are indeed in love and they both know something is going on inside the other person as well.


A few romantic moments on their way. Hang tight!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Absolutely fine..that's how it should..be... will read and comment...
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aw so sweet...

hmmm nice..scene...so cute..do continue...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the encouragement. I'm so much disturbed by today's episode that I don't feel like continuing with this story right this minute.

Hope I can concentrate better after the tai-chi scene. That'll give me some inspiration.
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awwwwwww wow amazing kashh essa bhi show karain cvs
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You are a great writer! 😃 Do continue soon!
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awwwwwwwwwww that was so beautiful
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it is really nice......
i loved it......
keep writing 👏👏👏
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Thanks so much rubab1690, Sananya09, sweet cherry and ansah 😊
Edited by dolphinUSA - 14 years ago

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