Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 76

Aah, I better keep mum. For I'm in a playful mood 😊

Oh look... ironically I'm the first to comment on your 100th page. Congrats

Nice write up btw. Wonder how long will it be before he knows she is pregnant.

OMGGGGG...why did u stop there?????

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
di......u cannot do this!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Both of ur scenes today were torture.......torture torture....and yet.......amazing!!!! Wow.....i find a thing that tortures me to be amazing 😆....what is going on with me????

But di.....no fair yaar......yeh kya karahi hai......hum saab ko pagal kardegi!!!!!

I read today's first scene.......every time i am thinkin....finally the truth will come out....yes yes....finally.....and every time something happened....interruptions!!! 😡😡😡😡😡😭😆
not cool di.....i couldn't breathe when i read that first scene of today....i could not breathe....and so i ran away from my computer and ran outside......for fresh air....to grasp everything that u had written 😆....then i took my huge water bottle and ran to the gym!!! i could not reply to u.....i was amazed at ur writing....and was dyin to read the next part....if i didn't get out of the house....i would've turned my whole house upside down.....😆 when i get restless every one at home knows.....and then i get angry....and then they all have to deal with it!!!😆....i kinda feel bad for my family......like today as soon as my brother came home....i finished reading ur scene.....then as soon as he walked in.....i was like gym time now!!! My brother just came from work....and i dragged him to the gym right that minute!!!! 😆 He looked at me thinking that i was gonna blow any second so without asking he ran upstairs and changed into his gym clothes 😆.....then ran for a whole 50 mins....thinkin....thinkin...sweating....thinkin thinkin....still jus running and thinking about u....ur scene....and then suddenly i banged my arm on the treadmill....it took me out of my trance.....i was gettin frustrated as well...because while i was gathering my thoughts.....tryin to grasp what u had soooo beautifully written.....my stupid head phones kept coming out of my ears......and i was getting extremely pissed....and so just pulled out my headphones and threw them on the treadmill hanging them!!! 😡😡😡😡😡
Finally i ran without music....not that i was listening to the music.....cause i just kept thinkin about ur scene.....i was scared.....scared of seeing Maan's reaction....and u know what....i am nervous when the truth will come out....i am scared as hell...what will Maan think??? What will he do??? How will he react to Geet's truth....bitter past???

In ur scene....jeez u kept me at the edge of the seat....i had to prevent myself from falling.....but instead i hit my knee when it came to "let me start from the beginning".....and sadly my knee is still bruised!!! 😆

OMG.....di u have driven me insane.....i was going crazy.....i ran like crazy.....but obviously after the running i felt relief......i felt like Maan will be fine....he will hurt....but he will always support his geet.....and then i wasn't scared anymore!!!!

It was really really crazy to see Maan so restless.....even i got restless like him.....😆 interruptions.....were pissing me off 😆 damn di....u really really really really know how to keep ur readers at the edge of the seat......cause i was fricken at the edge......and i had to pee.....as well because i drink crazy water.....but u always update whenever i have to pee.....and then i sit long....reading ur scenes once or twice....and then finally my bladder starts to pain and then i remember oye shiv go pee 🤣

Di what are u doing to us??? After reading ur wonderful scenes.....many have fainted.....have gone breathless....dehydrated.....died......fell off of their seats.....did i mention died?? 🤢 Oh yea how i can i forget.....i lost like 5 pounds....because of ur crazy scenes!!!! I can't even fit into my underwear anymore 🤣!!! every time i read ur scenes.....i run straight to the gym....to think!!! I cannot handle my thoughts......ur scenes are amazing.....and they just drive me insane.....insane where i have run like a mad woman on the tready....to think about what to say to u.....to think about how to say how beautifully u have written a particular scene.....even right now i have too pee.....and yea i i think i should go....do that first!!! 😆 But i can't.....i am so busy tryin to gather up words......to put all of my feelins on how to describe how much of an awesome writer u r ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️!!!! Ok seriously i will back.....i got to pee 😆 k back!!! But that cliffhanger was a killer.....di....a killer i tell ya.....👏👏👏👏👏.......wow wow......i love that style of writing......people want to continue and read....and that is just the best thing about a writer.....especially when they make the audience go crazy.....and have them want more every time!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Good Job di....seriously a wonderful Job!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Now part 2....
again......u have left me completely speechless di......too bad the gym is closed......wow....wow....what wonderful descriptions......how beautifully u have written the pain geet is going through right now while reliving her past again.....telling the man she loves about what had happened to her.....tryin to convince that man that she is not worthy of him!! Di....this part just made me cry....i felt Geet's helplessness....i felt how she didn't want to lose him.....but yet she had tell him about her.....the baby.....she had to tell him the truth....this was the time to let it all out.....but to poor geet she would lose on both sides.....she wouldn't be able to face maan again.....she would lose him....but no she had to tell him.....he had to know....even if that meant to see him hate her.....he had to know!!! That was just WOW.....SUPERBLY WRITTEN.....JUST WOW DI......U DESERVE A BIG APPLAUD FROM EACH AND EVERYONE OF US!!! It was just extremely emotional....painful.....and just beautifully written on ur part 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏....u r magical di.....ur thoughts....ur writing....it is beautiful!!! Wow.....if ur writing is this beautiful......i wonder how beautiful of a person u are in person.....i wanna meet u really badly!!! To me....u r a wonderful writer and person.....and it would be a honor to meet u one day!!! 😳

Now to maan.....wow.....he was hurt....but soooooooooooo angry that he wanted to smash that man's face who dared to hurt geet....his geet!!! 😭 He didn't care what had happened to her.....he was just upset and wanted to find that man who had done this to an innocent and beautiful person like Geet 😭
his expressions.....his clenching and unclenching fists.....wow di.....just amazing descriptions.....
i loved how Geet started the whole story from the beginning.....and i loved how u Maan remembered that he was there when she was getting married off to the disgusting man!!!! the way u wrote this part di....i can see those flashbacks of the actual scenes....i see the proposal happening....i see the wedding take place......see that a beautiful institution like marriage being turned into a joke by NT and Dev....i see the betrayal that poor girl has gone through!!! 😭😭😭
I am speechless di.....could u get any better?? yes u can...every time u come with a beautiful bang on scene.....always leaving many of us speechless!!! Just so beautiful......i loved how executed everything....i love the ideas u have written to how this confrontation should happen!!! It is just mind blowing....and written sooooo beautifully!!!!
Again....di.....once again.....cliffhanger???? Jeez di....phirse mardalla hum sabko!!! Phire interruptions?? worse yet....geet's dad tried to suicide??? 😲
Well now all us readers can do is wait and watch what our queen of writing will do.....how she will wave those magical wand fingers of hers.....and will create magic as always!!!!
Excellent di....i enjoyed both of the parts a lot!!! thank u for the beautiful parts today!!! hope to see more soon!!! Hopefully pregnancy will also be revealed sometime!!! ⭐️

Sorry for going on and on di.....i just don't know what happens when i read ur scenes.....i just have sooo much to say....and so i say whatever is important!!! And plus u know i am ur bak bak machine....can i ever stop?? well u can answer that on ur own....for me it is a rhetorical question...so i will answer that in my head! 😆

Luv ya di 🤗
-Shivani

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Awww...Vrush...beautiful update....i could picture Maan....exactly how you described him...the clenching of the jaws...and the clenching of his fists....banging the posts...etc..the rage, the anger, the disappointment with himself.....beautifully written!! I could see Geet's turmoil too....but we have all seen Geet in this state...its Maan's reaction that drives me crazy....for one minute I think I know exactly how he will react, but in the next minute I question it all again!!!! And now her father has tried to commit suicide......wow...what a twist. But a question...is Rajjo her real sister or is she her Tauji's daughter...Brij's sister??

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Awww...Vrush...beautiful update....i could picture Maan....exactly how you described him...the clenching of the jaws...and the clenching of his fists....banging the posts...etc..the rage, the anger, the disappointment with himself.....beautifully written!! I could see Geet's turmoil too....but we have all seen Geet in this state...its Maan's reaction that drives me crazy....for one minute I think I know exactly how he will react, but in the next minute I question it all again!!!! And now her father has tried to commit suicide......wow...what a twist. But a question...is Rajjo her real sister or is she her Tauji's daughter...Brij's sister??

hey..me sketchy on her name as well..so i felt when i saw it that she was not her sister but brij's...i could be wrong.. have been..more often than not..

is it raji, rajjo my scatter brain..memory is dim and too lazy to...find the episodes to cross check..let me know and i shall correct...

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Aah, I better keep mum. For I'm in a playful mood 😊

ah dolphin...i bounce back fast...give me a joke..and i shall revive...and dont keep mum..i need the talk...

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Oh look... ironically I'm the first to comment on your 100th page. Congrats

Nice write up btw. Wonder how long will it be before he knows she is pregnant.

thanks dol...

hmm even i donno...and ah..100 pages...wow...i write so much... how do you all tolerate me is a wonder...?

Originally posted by: yasu09

OMGGGGG...why did u stop there?????

wana know what happens next....

this update was fab...plz update the next part soon......

me is waiting eagerly ... lol..

yasu...that cliff hanger was last second inspiration....for i want to explore more..more..about her relationship with her family..more Maan understanding her and her family with a new perspective.. i want him to see..what she is like with her family..does her confidence dissolve in front of her elders, does she stand up to them against injustice..or is it him who has the privilege of hearing her say no...

i want to know so much....this journey to the truth...

@ shivani...
are you competing with me girl.... to write the same number of characters as my update?...

if so..you are still far off ;-) i need you to write more..and no repetition...okay..

but i love it...your post makes me smile..my mascot..has graced my post..and made it special...

love you girl..keep writing to me..
now about meeting me

have you seen Satyam shivam Sundaram?

the moral of the story is...i may not be as beautiful as my work..in person..the persona is always larger than the person..and i hope i dont shatter that image...you have...should i meet you? time will tell...