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Posted: 15 years ago
part 6

She was sitting in stairs outside d main door of the outhouse..

Maan knew where she can go ..so just went there to relax her..

Waise hoshiyarpur me dance school hai kya..?he asked taking seat beside her

Huh..? what ..?

No I was just asking...if dere is any...waise tumne uha course complete nahi ki hogi....kiu?

Geet : aap aise kiu puch rahe hai..?

Maan: actually tumhe mere sath dance karneme darr lagta hai na..islie..nervous ho jati ho..i understand..after all dancing with maan singh khurana..is not so easy thing ...

Geet: u mean to say I was not good....

Maan looking straight into her eyes : did I say that..?

quiet for sometime.....geet looked nervous again...

Ahh..i mean thik thak nach leti ho...waise batayi nehi tumne ...course complete ki thi kya..? I mean agar karti to ...aise bhagti nahi ....haina?

Geet : sir...aap mujhe fir chidha rahe hai....

Maan: ohh really....ek bat batao geet....agar janti ho ...fir chidh kiu rahi ho...?

Geet smiled....and gaining her normalcy back started blabbering again....

BREAKKKK!!......!!! geet break lagao....

Geet : kiu kya hua sir.......

Maan : geet its 10 pm now...kal bohot kaam karna hai mujhe..aur bhukh bhi lagi hai...so tumhari yeh ulti sidhi bakwas agar khatam ho gayi ho ...to dinner karle...

Geet : ohh haan sir...chaliye....ek min sir...sir..i too will be going office tomorrow wid u..i get bored here..

Maan : no no....tum office nahi ja sakti....

Geet : kiu sir..?aapne nayi secretary rakh lie kya..?

Maan : geet ...dekho...mera bhai ajse office gaya hai...actually ...woh na thoda...i mean...maan felt uncomfortable to explain geet what dev thinks about maan and his secretary...

See geet ...i don't know why ...buy he thinks ..there is something between u and me...u remember that nite....wen we got locked in d office room...

Geet : haan sir....waise aapne kya kaha hai apke bhai se mere bareme..

Maan : geet....maine kuch aisa nahi kaha hai...he is very much talkative kind off...and kuch bhi bolta hai....masti baz hai...

Choro geet ...tum nahi samjhogi....but tum office nahi ja sakti...he will make me mad if u do that..

Geet : but sir...mai to..could nt finish as maan stops her...

Maan : tumhe na... mere har bat ke khilaf jana hi hai...mai jaisa kehta hu waisahi karo...ihaa abhibhi boss mai hi ho...tum nahi...

Geet : nahi sir...savitrimam ne mujhe yeh nokri di hai....to boss wohi huyi na...aap kaise...?

Maan: geet tum meri secretary ho...aur mai tumhara boss hu...

Geet : dekha sir...!! maine kahi thi na...aap jabardasti mere boss bannepe tule huye ho...!

Maan: geeeeeeeeeeeeet.....

Geet : fir suru ho gaye.....tommmmmmyyyyyyyyyyyyy....!!mimiced him

Maan : tum ek kaam karo ...if u dn want my bossing around u ..y don u quit dis job too...?

Geet : ohh babaji ...yeh fir suru ho gaye...nahi..i wont quit ...do whatever u like...

Maan : then u have to listen to me and do as I say ..

Geet : khane chale...bhukh lagi hai....

Maan : fine...but remember it...i m your boss!

Geet went inside completely ignoring him....and started serving the dinner..

Maan thought to remain silent for the next time...as she might recall ...the dance...which he had successfully made her forget..

After dinner .....he went upstairs...as geet was finalizing the post dinner works of the kitchen..

After sometime..to her utter surprise geet found maan lying on d sofa..wrapping the kamval around him...

Achanak yeh bin mange barsat kaise ho gaya....sir..u will be sleeping here..?

Maan : aankhe hai na tumhare paas?...dikh raha hai...ab kal ki tarah meri sleep mat disturb karo jao ihase ...and switch off the lights before going...

Geet smiled..and went upstairs to sleep in the bedroom...

Pretty soon dey were deep in sleep in their respective beds...

Maan ...uthiye...maan....!!

Maan woke up with a jerk.....geet what happened geet ...?

Dadima smiled.... "geet nahi maan ....main....hu..tumhare dadi....do u recognize me...or else...your world is all about geet only ....."

Maan : Dadima....aap subhe subhe suru ho gayi....waise...sit here....i need to talk to u...

Dadi : Par maan aap iha kiu so rahe hai....matlab...

Maan : Matlab what dadima..? u want me to sleep in my bedroom...that is already encroached by dat geet ... now don't act dadima....i know everything.

Dadima looked uncomfortable..though she knew its goin to come : Yesh maan...i was thinking ..u...aahh..i mean out of the town camping ....but I got to know from dev...that u r still here....woh actually maan...what happened...dadi ma tried to explain..

Maan ; No..first answer me....what is that geet doing here...why did u hire her ...?

Dadima : beta...mai chahti thi ke tum ghar pe rehke kaam karo...aur...she is of good help..isnt she...? and.....u were not fine after she resigned from her work....maan ....i cant see u like that...

Hearing some noise geet comes out of her room...peeping down below she finds dadima talking with maan...she starts coming downstairs as she thought of meeting her boss.but stopped hearing to what maan started saying.

Maan; dadi.....woh mussibbat koi kaam ki nahi hai...apne use iha kiu rakkha....i was so relieved when she left the job.....and aap hai ke us musibbat ko fir mere sar thop dia.....i just cant tolerate her....she is too much to be tolerated...dadima u have created a big....no...d biggest problem in my life....again....i have to tolerate the tantrums of the great geet handa....na use koi kaam thik se aata hai....aur na janti hai tamij....ekdam battamiz ladki hai..will always do the opposite as say...dadi ma aap nahi janti..i just cant stand her...I HATE HER..!! ..maan over said it....to cover up his weakness on geet...but little did he know...geet heard everything standing just behind him.

Geet found no words..her eyes were brimming with tears...yesterday night when she went to sleep she thought so nice things about the day ...she had spent with maan...she found herself so comfortable around him....she thought ..sir sirf mujhe chidhate hai...she didn't know..maan thinks this kind of thing about her ....

And that too after the dance...!!!!!..this maan singh khurana is impossible.. she had had enough.

AND U DON'T HAVE TO SIR...!!!....a voice came from his back.

Maan turned back to see geet standing behind...her big eyes were filled with tears...

he was dumbstruck.!

U don't have to tolerate me...mam I m sorry about it...but I don't think I can do this job for a person....who just cant tolerate me...even if u r my boss...so mam...plz excuse me for this....I Quit!

Saying this she ran upstairs without waiting for anyone to answer....

Geeet...maan feebly shouted....but that was too late to reach her ears.she banged the door of the bedroom behind her.....busy quick packing ...

Shit..!!! maan clenched his fist...as far he knew geet ..she will leave.

Dadima plz do something ....plz stop geet ....maan requested earnestly to dadi...

Dadi : what can I do maan..? u should have thought before saying....i didn't know U HATE GEET THIS MUCH...dadi said smiling inside..

Maan : dadi ...iswaqt yeh sab discuss karneka nahi hai...use rokiye dadima...she has no place to go...

Dadima : no maan ...u did dat ....u know.. u have hurt her...and only u can stop her.go n ask for her forgiveness..

Maan : ohh please dadima ....mai aur sorry...aur geet se ...hargiz nahi..m maan singh khurana......she may get lost ..!!!

Dadima : then do whatever u like....i m ashamed that u r my grandson!..bas yehi dekhna baki reh gayi thi....u haven't learn how to behave with ladies....ghamandi to tum the hi...uparse battamiz bhi ho gaye ho...you should pay for what u did...!

Saying this dadima leaved maan behind her puzzled....

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Posted: 15 years ago
that was all for now.....
plz reply guys...waiting for u to respond....
love
maanmeet
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey it was toooooooooooooooooooo gud update it soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey brilliantr update...............😆😆

what will happen next now...........😃
waiting dear..........
plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.
reva😲
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg that was good
loving it how maan says fings but at the same tym doesnt want her too go
ur ff is toooooooooooooooooooo good 👏👏
update soooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice part once again👍🏼..loved the way Maan brought back the normal Geet!..and their normal nok-jhok was also good😊..Maan has done a huge mistake by hurting my Geet😔 but it would be a treat to read how he manofys angry and upset Geet..😉..update the next part soon 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
All parts r very nice. Pls add me to ur PM list.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey maanmeet

maan is too good


Maan knew where she can go ..so just went there to relax her..

Waise hoshiyarpur me dance school hai kya..?he asked taking seat beside her

Huh..? what ..?

No I was just asking...if dere is any...waise tumne uha course complete nahi ki hogi....kiu?

Geet : aap aise kiu puch rahe hai..?

Maan: actually tumhe mere sath dance karneme darr lagta hai na..islie..nervous ho jati ho..i understand..after all dancing with maan singh khurana..is not so easy thing ...

Geet: u mean to say I was not good....

Maan looking straight into her eyes : did I ay that..?

quiet for sometime.....geet looked nervous agsain...

Ahh..i mean thik thak nach leti ho...waise batayi nehi tumne ...course complete ki thi kya..? I mean agar nakarti to ...aise bhagti hi ....haina?

Maan: ohh really....ek bat batao geet....agar janti ho ...fir chidh kiu rahi ho...?


Maan : geet ...dekho...mera bhai ajse office gaya hai...actually ...woh na thoda...i mean...maan felt uncomfortable to explain geet what dev thinks about maan and his secretary...

Geet : dekha sir...!! maine kahi thi na...aap jabardasti mere boss bannepe tule huye ho...!

Maan: geeeeeeeeeeeeet.....

Geet : fir suru ho gaye.....tommmmmmyyyyyyyyyyyyy....!!mimiced him

After sometime..to her utter surprise geet found maan lying on d sofa..wrapping the kamval around him...

Achanak yeh bin mange barsat kaise ho gaya....sir..u will be sleeping here..?

Maan; dadi.....woh mussibbat koi kaam ki nahi hai...apne use iha kiu rakkha ....dadi ma aap nahi janti..i just cant stand her...I HATE HER..!! ..


Dadima plz do something ....plz stop geet ....maan requested earnestly to dadi... ( jab pata he k os k bagher nahi rah sakte to esi harkaten karte kyo ho maan)




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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly

hey maanmeet

maan is too good


Maan knew where she can go ..so just went there to relax her..

Waise hoshiyarpur me dance school hai kya..?he asked taking seat beside her

Huh..? what ..?

No I was just asking...if dere is any...waise tumne uha course complete nahi ki hogi....kiu?

Geet : aap aise kiu puch rahe hai..?

Maan: actually tumhe mere sath dance karneme darr lagta hai na..islie..nervous ho jati ho..i understand..after all dancing with maan singh khurana..is not so easy thing ...

Geet: u mean to say I was not good....

Maan looking straight into her eyes : did I ay that..?

quiet for sometime.....geet looked nervous agsain...

Ahh..i mean thik thak nach leti ho...waise batayi nehi tumne ...course complete ki thi kya..? I mean agar nakarti to ...aise bhagti hi ....haina?

Maan: ohh really....ek bat batao geet....agar janti ho ...fir chidh kiu rahi ho...?


Maan : geet ...dekho...mera bhai ajse office gaya hai...actually ...woh na thoda...i mean...maan felt uncomfortable to explain geet what dev thinks about maan and his secretary...

Geet : dekha sir...!! maine kahi thi na...aap jabardasti mere boss bannepe tule huye ho...!

Maan: geeeeeeeeeeeeet.....

Geet : fir suru ho gaye.....tommmmmmyyyyyyyyyyyyy....!!mimiced him

After sometime..to her utter surprise geet found maan lying on d sofa..wrapping the kamval around him...

Achanak yeh bin mange barsat kaise ho gaya....sir..u will be sleeping here..?

Maan; dadi.....woh mussibbat koi kaam ki nahi hai...apne use iha kiu rakkha ....dadi ma aap nahi janti..i just cant stand her...I HATE HER..!! ..


Dadima plz do something ....plz stop geet ....maan requested earnestly to dadi... ( jab pata he k os k bagher nahi rah sakte to esi harkaten karte kyo ho maan)




thanx a lot dear ....
i loved the way u picked up the sentences... lol...
its amazing
hahahha...😆😆
ab mujhe khud hasi aarahi hai ...
thanks yaar ....dat was awsum !!
love u for this...
plz keep reading ....and i just love the style of ur replying it ...
mwaaah
Edited by maanmeet8 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Liked last both updates
Maneet dance was fab
Liked the way Maan made Geet feel normal after that dance
Hated wat he said to hide his weakness
Geet will paka leave
Lets c wat Maan does to stop her
Dadi for 1st time shouted Maan so much
U didnt pmed me😭

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