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kapoor435

@kapoor435

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1101

hey reet! i hope u bring maneet together again!!!! i relly dont want his promise to daadi about marrying someone else come in b/n maneet!! make daadi n maan realize their mistake!!--- n kill devtara! lol

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Sigma

@Sigma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1102

thanks Reet, poor maan will be stuffed after two dinners lol

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Aleena

@cute-aly

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1103

really update

love geet kiddish behaviour

and the best part is

She completely pulled her hands away and kept herself busy with the business discussion.

He noticed her lifted her hand from the plate .....and food was untouched......he felt guilty as he knew its something to do with his behavior....checking Mr khaneja 's eyes busy with a document handed over by geet ....he pushed the glass of juice slowly towards her ..she noticed but pretended not to notice .... she didn't even look once to maan...

Maan touched her hand below the table....she pulled her hand away and kept it on the table....he nudged her leg...under the table....she pulled them away ...he was trying his best to draw her attention when geet deliberately avoided his eyes.... maan knew stubborn geet .....he knew she wont have a single piece of food ..her baby was starved too...

Maan gave in ....he pulled the Friuli-Venezia Giulia towards himself...and started having it ....requesting her to start by his eyes.. ...that only geet can notice...made a puppy face to please her....

She tried to ignore him ...but when he started taking large spoon full at a time she couldn't check herself .. she lowered her head hiding by her hand to conceal her face blushing hard...

She started having her food slowly....

Maan sighed breath of relief .....whispered ...batein manwana to koi tumse sikhe ...!!!!!! rolling his eyes..to which geet was silent.

conti soon

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#1104

wow lovely dear
geet innocence maan teasing hehhe geet sacred before boarding th flight
maan was too enjoying her aloofness did hurt him and he is turn take his revenge also
off these tow never ever changed
do continue
bye sumi

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#1105

superbbbbb yaar..............

great tht u finished 150 pages..........

well amazing update....thnx for this marvellous update.........

and will be waiting for next update

reva

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Bulbul

@Bul3

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1106

@part 35- awesome part!..loved it!..I think jealous Maan is very DREAMY(😆)..Geet and her antics😆..she started with making Maan stop drinking and ended up making him jealous..and the ladies room scene was very hot😳..poor Rohan became a scapegoat..hehe..Maan and his 4 points were great👍🏼..especially-

3. And most importantly ......Stop trying my patience ...... stop doing these silly things to make me jealous ..... as I m not ....!!!

4. Just don't dare to repeat what u did today with rohan ....either I will break my hand ...or break his that touched u ..dont do that again ...or else u will repent badly ......"

very well written👏

@part 36-another awesome part!..Maaneet scenes were great as always..loved their conversation in the car..both of them cant resist each-other and still are trying to stay away from each-other which is now practically impossible for both of them,no matter how hard they try😉..infact I am loving that atleast Maan is not trying the impossible and has understood the reality

maan looked at her in shock..... and muttered in his mind....do you know how much difficult it is for me ...to live without you ...even for one day ...

..well liked Dadi-Maan scene too..fully understand her ..she doesnt want to leave Maan all alone!..but the most interesting thing about this part was DEV..lol..I cannot believe I am saying this but ya..storywise getting to know more from his side,his thoughts was quite interesting..for once he realized his mistake sincerely,even if he put all the blames on Naintara..

he smiled.......god isup there ....the way I had left her outside airport ......today she left me .......

and destiny ...that day my wife was with me....today her love is with her ......he smiled swallowing the clogging pain.....he was a father ..but not a lucky one....

good to see him repenting but at the same time not telling Maan the truth-it would be hard to digest such a great Dev😆..and most importantly its his lies that had made us realize that Maan's love for Geet is greater than anything..it doesnt depend on truth or lies!

@part 37-truly amazing part..the airport situation was very well thought of keeping in mind Geet's background👍🏼..all airport scenes and plane scenes were fabulous👏seriously⭐️..Geet forgot all about her plans😆 and became old Geet which I simply adore😃Maaneet shared some amazing moments..Geet's chirpy-innocent nature and Maan's protectiveness towards Geet and the child made me feel aw😍..Maan answering her sooooooooooooooo many questions,taking care of her each and every action/moment like putting his arms around her during take-off😍..wow..resturant moments were great too😳..Maan se baatein manwana to koi sachi mein Geet se hi sikhe😆..

lovely updates⭐️..do update soon and sorry for late replies😳

Edited by Bul3 - 14 years ago

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hansasma

@hansasma

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1107

hey reet. hope todaa naam yahi hai (sorry bout the punjabi. if iv said sumtin wrong - do correct me) lol!! well been new and a silent reader.. thgt of signing up here and post replies. uv got an excellent piece of work.. haan bas kabhi kabhi thodi mushkil ho jaati hai punjabi padhne mein.. (try hindi version). keep the creative juice flowing.... and all the best keep writing!!

P.S: do PM me - ;) - Asma

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@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1108

hi am first time reader amazing writing yu are gifted please help me part 19 to part 25 doesn't work for me please can yu send & put me in your pm thank yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu