Maaneet SS: Tum, Main aur Woh: All Parts Pg. 14 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg loving this ss...plzzz add me to ur pm list n UPDATE SOON!!! xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Naina,

This SS is very intriguing, please do add me to your PM list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*Important*

Note:

Hi Everyone!

Naina here, the author of this FF! (Naina2127) This is just another username of mine :)

This is extremely important for all of those who actually read this FF.

I decided to follow Jassi's idea of creating a whole new account just to make my PM List much simpler.

So everyone who WANTS a PM for any of my Maaneet FFs, Just
add THISaccount to your buddy list.

I WILL NOT be transferring names from this actual PM list on Page 1 to my buddy list from this account because I want to only PM those who actually want to be PM'ed. 😃

And plus, I read a lot of other FFs too, so I don't want to have to mistakenly PM anyone either😆😆

Anyways, I hope this was clear.

Add .Naina. to your buddy list if you would like to be PM'ed for any of my Maaneet FFs.

Anyways, thanks everyone for your cooperation!

Cheers!
~Naina (Naina2127)

ps. the next update will definitely be sometime this week. Probably Thursday :) I'll reply to comments then
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Chapter 3:

Geet went to sleep that night, an overwhelming day behind her. Even though she had physically been present the entire time when playing with Dhruv, her mind had constantly been wandering. Wandering back to Maan's shocked expression when she had mentioned Dev's and his betrayal, scheming, plotting, their plan to ruin her life and run with her money.


She remembered that day quite clearly.


Flashback:


Geet had been over the moon the past few weeks, ever since her official engagement to Maan, but she knew that she would have to tell him about the pregnancy before the wedding, that would be utter betrayal otherwise. But whenever she started, Maan would always tell her he did not want to discuss her past. She was with him now, and that was all that mattered to him, and then dragged her into their own little world of romance. Of course, she lost all her sense of coherency and logical thinking and drowned in his eyes, his love for her.
Pssht, his love, she thought now. All fake.

So that day, she had set out determined to tell him, and just as she got to his office, she heard Maan laughing with someone, that too quite loudly, and her curiosity grew. I mean, this was the MSK, who barely had time for anything or anyone else. Who else was he possibly this comfortable with? And so she decided she would peek into the room, slowly opening the door just a bit to be met with the shock of a lifetime.


That was DEV! Dev, the man she had been married off to! The father of her child! What the hell was he doing there?


"Bhai! I was successful! I'm so happy I accomplished what I set out to accomplish!" Dev yelled, as Maan hugged him, a wide grin on his face.


WOOOOOOAAAAH. Hold on. Pause right there. BHAI?! What in the name of heaven was going on? And what had he been successful in? Could it be...? No! Not at all! Maan would never allow for such a thing to happen. He would never approve.


She listened in once again.


Maan responded "I knew Naintara would be of some use to this idea. Didn't I tell you? When the two of you work together, you can accomplish big things, and make some money for yourself, without having to depend on others all the time. But I'm really happy for you Dev. Really, really happy for you."


Geet froze. Dev and Naintara had worked in bringing her down, and Maan had been the accomplice.


And everything made sense in her mind, so without a further thought, she left, ran from the place immediately, packing her bags, and getting on a train to run away.


Run away once again.


From those whom she was betrayed by.


By those she had thought loved her.


For herself.


For her baby.


********


Taking a deep breath, Geet looked over at her son as he huddled closer to her, clutching her arm tighter around himself and she patted his back, mumbling some soothing words.


Well, at least Maan had left when she told him to. But would he be back? No, he seemed too angry with her, and when he's angry he just grows to hate the person. She was safe. She wouldn't have to deal with him again.


And so she went off to sleep, thinking about her otherwise fun day at the beach with her son, her little Dhruv.


**********


Meanwhile, Maan was resting in his hotel room, thinking about everything that Geet had said to him earlier that day. She had mentioned Dev, but he was in Canada for the past 5 years and just came down to Mumbai to visit Maan that one time right after Geet and Maan got engaged to see his new bhabhi.


So how did Geet know Dev? So he did the most logical thing that came to his mind. He called up Dev and told him to get to Mumbai. They had some things to sort out.


There would be no way Geet would walk around thinking that she betrayed him. He had to talk to her again.


And he would sort this mess out.


Hi Everyone!

Maaneet will talk next chapter and the story will be wrapped up :) I hope you enjoyed this and I'm so sorry for not responding to comments!

Cheers!

~Naina

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
lovely part dear
plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
update the next part soon and also pm me pls..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
hi naina pls dont take more time to update we al love ur ff
alteast once in a week 😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow..this was crazy..haha
Loved it though
thanks a lot
love you
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
lovely update ... plz pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey wow... nice story line... plz add me to yr PM list....

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