Maaneet SS: Tum, Main aur Woh: All Parts Pg. 14 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: MaanKiGeet...

Heyyy!
Im Back!!
Please update fast cuz im on my ipod
And im lying in bed ready to sleep!
Tell me if youre not updating so i can sleep



updating right now. =D so sorry for the wait! people came over. don't you hate it when people just think they can pop by at like 9 pm -_-

anyways, a few more minutes! sorry for the wait!

<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Everyone!

Wow, it's been about 4 months since I last updated, and yeah it's been a while. And the show has actually progressed leaps and bounds, but, I'm continuing with my original plan for what I had, before Geet told Maan about her pregnancy and whatnot. This will probably have like 2-3 more chapters. But anyways,

I'll edit this some more later. Jassi's waiting for an update<333😉

*Edit*

For those of you who read my other story Waiting for You, I know that this seems quite similar to that, kids, Maan being shocked and finding about kid later, etc. But I promise the stories are NOT the same. Waiting for You has nothing to do with the show, while Tum, Main aur Woh😆😆

Any clarifications, do let me know. But both stories SHOULD be finished in like a week and a half max😃 is what I had imagined for the show back in July



Cheers!
~Naina

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Maan tapped his foot on the hardwood floor impatiently, disturbing the tense silence that had filled the room. "Any day now...I have other things to do too you see" he sighed. Apparently, he hadn't changed at all. Still the same hot headed, impatient, annoying, khadoos perfectionist as she had known him to be four years ago.

Finally mustering up all her courage, Geet raised her eyes to look into his deep penetrative ones, eyes that were seeking answers, and she started from the beginning.

Flashback:

She had gotten married to an NRI on her family's insistence. And everything went straight downhill from there. She had thought that he loved her, and she herself thought that she loved him, but alas, that wasn't how anything worked out. He had left her soon after the wedding, well supposed wedding, considering it was not legal nor was it correct as per traditions.

And Geet was devastated. Only to find out later that she was pregnant with his child.

Her family wanted her to abort, but she refused and ran away to Mumbai where she worked for MSK, a khadoos with whom she had her share of problems, and then had gotten engaged to after the two fell in love.

End Flashback:

"Wait, you were pregnant when we were engaged and you were working for me?!" Maan questioned, fury building up in his eyes.

But alas, luck was not on her side now either.

"I...." she began, trying to put together a coherent string of words, but MSK was getting angry.

"You were PREGNANT? And decided NOT to tell me? Even AFTER we got engaged? What kind of a woman are you? How did you just take the decision to not tell your fiance that you were already pregnant with some other man's baby? When was I going to find out? When you went into labor in the middle of the office? Or would you have just secretly had the baby and just shoved it in my face? Really Geet? This is the last thing I expected from you, of all people." Maan was pacing the room by now, his hand flailing wildly as he continued his rant, while Geet sat in the sofa, toying with her dupatta.

He stopped, "And how long are you planning on sitting like a statue?" he questioned, rolling his eyes as he stood in front of her, arms crossed, towering over her with his presence.

"Are you not planning on telling me the actual story?"

Geet blinked, and stood up, crossing her own arms across her chest, as she looked at him fearlessly. "And when were you planning on telling me the truth? Your master plan? Cheating a family? Cheating a girl? I trusted you Maan. I thought you were different from the other men in my life. I thought I knew you. But I was wrong. You're just like everyone else. A betrayer. A cheat. And I fell into your trap so easily. " She glared at him, pushing him aside with her hands and making her way to the window on the other side of the room.

He held her wrist.

He pulled her back.

And he turned her around so she was in his arms. His one hand automatically grasping her around the waist.

"I betrayed you? I BETRAYED you? Stop throwing false accusations on me Geet. Lie all you want, all you want, but don't you DARE point a finger at me. I loved you, damnit!" he growled, his voice low, filled with anger, with fury.

"Maan, I saw you and Dev. I know that you both were in on this together. You're his brother for heaven's sake! Of course you would support him. Of course you were in on everything. I hate you Maan Singh Khurana. I really hate you, even more than I hate Dev. And you know why? Because I trusted you damnit! I trusted you and you broke my trust!" she yelled, her voice starting off quietly and getting louder with each and every single word that escaped her mouth.

"Dev? What does Dev have to do with anything?" Maan questioned suddenly, as his face contorted into confusion.

"Mama, are you ok?" They heard a tiny voice from behind them and jumped away from each other. Dev stood there, a toy in his hand, his eyes wide with fear. "Mama mad?"

Geet rushed over to her son, and pulled him in her arms. "Mad? Dhruv, Mama's not mad. Mama was just talking to this uncle." she smiled at him, placing a soft kiss on his forehead and gently rubbing his back to calm him down. She turned around to shoot a glare at Maan, who just stood there looking as confused as ever.

Dev? What does Dev have to do with anything? I only saw him once in the past five years. Dev?

A voice broke him out of his thoughts, as he looked up to see Geet standing before him, her son in her arms, "Maan. I have to take care of Dhruv now. If you could leave...." trailed off.

And so he did.


Edited by Naina2127 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Res
Will read now
Comment tommorow!
I had hope youd update!
kinno thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
man ur writing is good. update soon and if so can u PM when u update thanks😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it ...atlast u r continuing ur ff....do update the next one soon....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Hey..thats an interesting turn of events..really liked the twist....

Please update soon!

and the other FFs too 😃 <Sorry couldn't resist it>
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

hi naina

that was really awesome 😉😉😉
loved it
try to update soon
😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyyyyyyyy nice yaar, i can't wait till he finds out about his brother.

plz update soon and p.m. me.

thank uuuuuuuuuuu
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Amazing update!!!
totally loved it..!!!!
pls cont.soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Hello Miss Naina! Glad to see you finally updated! 😆 Fab job, hon! Loved it!

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