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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: anufa

good worK!!!!

but it was short!!!

update sooN!!!

thanks for ur comment.
i knw dat it was short. but im vry slow in typing. will post part3 tomorrow.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
pls pm me too...

n very nice starting.. do continue..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Nice strt
Liked both parts
The way Geet replied back to Sasha was good
Hop jus we lik serial dnt get fghts of Maneet very much
Update soon longer part n add me to ur pm list plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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include me to in ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Important note; guys I want to give this FF a new change.. for this change I have to change the story a bit. I had mentioned in part 1 that all the story in geet past is same. But for this change It is the need of the the story to change it. And in my this ff maan's entry will b today for the first time. Guys please note it that geets and maan are lyk strangers to each other. And they will meet for the first tym in this part or part 4.

Part 3

A new twist

At adi's cabin.

Adi is sitting on his chair and Geet is sitting in front of him.

Adi : so miss geet, what's your qualification?

Geet : sir, im BA.

At that time sasha enters and repeat geet's word in a loud tone BA only BA. Are u mad miss Geet?

Miss Geet, this is a high class job and this post needs a high qualification and u hav only a degree of BA.

Adi interrupts by saying that sasha, we should atleast complete the interview. And by the ways it is not our job to appoint a client. It is job of the boss of this company.

Sasha : so mr. adi what u r waiting for? Go to boss wid all the papers of geet. And she will decide what to do.?

Adi leaves the cabin and geet don't know what to do? She follows adi. Adi and Geet enters the cabin of Savitri Devi, the boss of this company. ( guys I know you are imagining Maan Singh Khurana sitting on the chair, but this is the twist and I hope u will like this twist).

Adi : mam.!

Savitri Devi : yes Adi.

Adi: meet this girl Geet. She is your new secretary.

Savitri Devi. Oh! Geet.. bohat pyara naam hai. Aaye yahan baithye hmare saamney.

Adi : but mam atleast you should take a look on her papers.

Savitri Devi : Adi I really like this girl. I am appointing her as my secretary. Adi you should go I will give her the instructions. Adi leaves

Savitri devi : geet, mje lagta hai k aap mje daikh kr hairaan ho gaye hain. Aap yahan pe shayd kisi handsum , good looking boss ko expect kar rae thi. Mai b unhi ko ko expect karti hun par wo''.

Geet: ji mam '''''''

End of part 3'

Hope you will like this part and please do comment and if you have any suggestions you can PM me widout any hesitation'''

PM list includes:

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anufa

kinno

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MaanEET_FAN

afsha-

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Edited by sweetcherry96 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice fanfic please add me to the pm list and conyinue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
awsum....loved dadi's last sentence!!!!

roflllL!!!!


update sooN!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey u r writin very well.. bt ur update ws too short.. try to make long....

bt u wrote very well.. i liked it..😊..... pls update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part
Liked the twist
Dadi the owner awesum
Hate this Sasha to hell
Update soon n longer part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow thank you for pm

Savitri devi : geet, mje lagta hai k aap mje daikh kr hairaan ho gaye hain. Aap yahan pe shayd kisi handsum , good looking boss ko expect kar rae thi. Mai b unhi ko ko expect karti hun par wo''.


this wz really hilarious

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